Penname: gingerale [Contact] Real name: Patricia de Leon
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Score One For The Little Brother by madam_minnie Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Teddy Lupin gets an insiders view of the joys and pitfalls of sibling rivalry one cold morning in the Potter family kitchen...
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Albus Severus Potter, Harry Potter, James (younger) Potter, Scorpius Malfoy, Theodore Lupin
Genres: Romance
Time Period: Next Generation
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Slash, Strong Language
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3921 Read Count: 3099
[Report This] Published: 12/17/2007 Updated: 03/11/2009
Reviewer: gingerale Signed
Date: 12/18/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Score One For The Little Brother

Aha!  This was wonderful!  What a lovely story to read while on break from work.  :) I love the voices you've given all of them. :)

Author's Response: Aww thanks babe! It just came out of nowhere and I think I used a bit of my own experiences with my siblings for most of the dialogue. LOL

Waiting in Winter by madam_minnie Rated: GP - General Public [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Severus, Lily & Snow
Categories: Bad Moon Rising > Drabbles
Characters: Lily Potter, Severus Snape
Genres: None
Time Period: Voldemort's First War
Warnings: None
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2007-12) Secret Yule Challenge
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2007-12) Secret Yule Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 508 Read Count: 702
[Report This] Published: 12/19/2007 Updated: 12/19/2007
Reviewer: gingerale Signed
Date: 12/19/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Waiting in Winter

There's nothing left to wait for.

Oh gosh.  It pains me to think that to the end Severus was waiting for Lily to love him back.  This story is so poignant, SecretElf.  I'm sure the recipient will love this!

The Dilemma of Being Different by Rickey_A Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: “It’s not easy being green.” Anthony Goldstein/Terry Boot fic about foreskin :D
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Anthony Goldstein, Terry Boot
Genres: Comedy, Fluff, PWP
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2413 Read Count: 628
[Report This] Published: 01/06/2008 Updated: 01/06/2008
Reviewer: gingerale Signed
Date: 01/08/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh! This was perfect!  I loved your mix of sweet, sexy and funny!  Your story gave me a lot of lulz, especially during:

One day Anthony found himself staring at Harry’s arse flexing as he demonstrated Protego to the group

Great, so now he was a wizard and Jewish and gay. Maybe he should think about becoming a vegetarian in order to be even more awkward at dinner parties. 

Anthony took a deep breath. If Terry made a Moses crack, he was going for his wand.

Anthony slid down the bed until he was eye to slit with Terry’s prick.

This was just so lovely!  *Applauds* 



Author's Response: Thanks so much.  This was a blast to write.  There was some chatter on LJ about the foreskin prompt and I just ran with it.

Forward Motion by TheGiantSquid Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary: The Seven Tales of the Blessed Life of Hermione Granger.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Erotica, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3642 Read Count: 3702
[Report This] Published: 01/12/2008 Updated: 01/12/2008
Reviewer: gingerale Signed
Date: 01/14/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Forward Motion

I loved this story the moment I read it at Smutty Claus, but I never got to review then.  So here's my chance.  I think it's perfect!  I think it's lovely!  You've got the characters down pat, and it's wonderful how you've painted the old "them."  Your story-telling device is clever, too.

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

The Train to Hogwarts by humantales Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Scorpius Malfoy takes his first ride on the Hogwarts Express. One-shot.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: Albus Severus Potter, Rose Weasley, Scorpius Malfoy
Genres: General
Time Period: Next Generation
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2008-01) New Year-Next Generation Challenge
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2008-01) New Year-Next Generation Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2350 Read Count: 3144
[Report This] Published: 01/28/2008 Updated: 01/28/2008
Reviewer: gingerale Signed
Date: 01/29/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh goodness!  New canon!!!  I love it!  Write more of this please!  Really, there are no words!  This is the first time I have been truly struck dumb by a piece of fan fiction!

Author's Response: Thanks; I'm glad you enjoyed it!  I've skipped over their first year, but I am working on their second, although they aren't the main characters.

Almost Like The First Time by ktmarsh Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: What happens when Hermione receives the "all clear" from her healer after giving birth.

Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Het
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1291 Read Count: 3144
[Report This] Published: 01/30/2008 Updated: 01/30/2008
Reviewer: gingerale Signed
Date: 01/31/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved this for being realistic, but still sexy and full of love!

Author's Response: Thank you :-)

Trust by rospberry Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Married life isn't always bliss.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Drabbles
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Drama
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 100 Read Count: 692
[Report This] Published: 02/03/2008 Updated: 02/03/2008
Reviewer: gingerale Signed
Date: 02/04/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*wibbles* You have to trust him, Hermione!  Can't you see how lucky you are?

 Thanks for this!  So much packed in such a few words¬!



Author's Response: Thank you so much! Really glad you appreciated it.

Three Indecent Acts by mapleandmahogany Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary: The brothers Weasley try to find someone to help George
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: George Weasley, Lee Jordan
Genres: Comedy, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Frottage, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2008-02) The Birds and The Bees Challenge
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2008-02) The Birds and The Bees Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6526 Read Count: 2278
[Report This] Published: 03/02/2008 Updated: 03/02/2008
Reviewer: gingerale Signed
Date: 03/03/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Three Indecent Acts

Yipee!  I love this so much!  The brothers are so spot on, but I especially enjoyed Charlie leering at barely legal Gabrielle.  Hah!

The way you played out the sex between George and Lee was fantastic as well.  It's just the way romance between best mates ought to be.  Marvelous job! 

Definitely Not a Mate Thing by kaalee Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: What happens in the dorm when the boys need to determine if an uncircumcised penis feels the same as one that is circumcised...
Categories: Hallowed Halls > From Diagon Alley to Hogwarts
Characters: Dean Thomas, Harry Potter, Neville Longbottom, Ron Weasley, Seamus Finnigan
Genres: Comedy
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1654 Read Count: 1397
[Report This] Published: 03/02/2008 Updated: 03/02/2008
Reviewer: gingerale Signed
Date: 03/04/2008 Title: Chapter 1: [definitely not a mate thing...]

Oh, boys...

I wish I was there to witness this!  This is priceless!



Author's Response: Me, as well!!  Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed!

~kaalee

Asking For Her Hand by tqpannie Rated: FG - Family Guidance starstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary: Past Featured StoryRon goes to visit Mr. Granger to ask permission to marry Hermione.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Fluff, General, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Major Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2029 Read Count: 3202
[Report This] Published: 03/04/2008 Updated: 03/04/2008
Reviewer: gingerale Signed
Date: 03/04/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Perfect!  I love the tone, introspective and nostalgic but still light and funny.  Ron probably won't outgrow his insecurities, and he's lucky he has Hermione who believes in him so much.

And Mr. Granger is so... huggable!



Author's Response: Thank you so very very much!!!

Touch of Fantasy by simons_flower Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Past Featured StoryHarry has a dorm room to himself, some time on his hands and insomnia.
Categories: The Broomshed > Self Pleasure
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Padma Patil, Parvati Patil, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, PWP
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Masturbation, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Threesome, Voyeurism
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1178 Read Count: 6603
[Report This] Published: 03/11/2008 Updated: 03/11/2008
Reviewer: gingerale Signed
Date: 03/13/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Touch of Fantasy

Harry has such a dirty mind!  I like him that way!  Great job with this!

Author's Response: Hee!  Of course he has a dirty mind, being a repressed teenager and all.  I love him for it though!

Pink Kneazles by kerosinkanister Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Ron sees some things he wishes he hadn't and learns something about Harry he really didn't need to know.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley, Severus Snape
Genres: Comedy, Crack-Fic
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Het, M-Preg, Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2195 Read Count: 1169
[Report This] Published: 03/14/2008 Updated: 03/15/2008
Reviewer: gingerale Signed
Date: 03/15/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yay!  It's up after much struggling with the submission form!  Great fic here.  I got lots of laughs from this one! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. You're tops!

Lackland Elf Storage by humantales Rated: FG - Family Guidance [Reviews - 7]
Summary: After becoming "head of the family", Draco must investigate a mystery bill.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: Draco Malfoy
Genres: Comedy
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoiler for HBP
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1143 Read Count: 642
[Report This] Published: 03/26/2008 Updated: 03/27/2008
Reviewer: gingerale Signed
Date: 03/27/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Lackland Elf Storage

This is such a smart ficlet!  I love it when authors are patient enough to go into details JKR took for granted.  Like elf-breeding habits, for instance!

Author's Response:

It was a story just crying to be written. *snicker*

Thanks for your review! 

Soaked by Attila Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: A little rain won't stop a planned picnic; it'll just change the nature of it.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Fluff, PWP
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Het, Minor Fluff, Public Sex, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1008 Read Count: 1698
[Report This] Published: 03/27/2008 Updated: 03/27/2008
Reviewer: gingerale Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/28/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aaaaahhh!  You didn't just leave it there!

This was so, utterly hot!

In The Greenhouse by mapleandmahogany Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Harry/Ron (only not really because it's actually Ron/Hermione and Harry/other)

Some slashiness but it doesn't really count.

Prompt: I'm tall
Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Ficlet, General
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 770 Read Count: 743
[Report This] Published: 04/05/2008 Updated: 04/05/2008
Reviewer: gingerale Signed
Date: 04/06/2008 Title: Chapter 1: In The Greenhouse

I liked this so much! :)  I love awkward Harry, and how loyal Ron was despite being obviously horrified by his best friend's gayness. And Harry/Neville!

Author's Response: Sorry I neglected your comment here. I love reading and writing about Harry and Ron in awkward situations, it's so fun. Hee - thank you for reading!