Penname: mrmoon [Contact] Real name: Barry
Member Since: 11/15/2007
Membership status: Member
Bio:

So I’ll be 50 this year. I got into fanfic investigating what my daughter was into. She writes about some of the Anime characters, and a little Potter (Draco/Harry, Lupin/Sirius). What is it with girls and slash anyway? I write drama and Het. I had these stories come to me, so I just wrote them down. Lavender has turned into one of my favorite and central characters.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 I hope you can enjoy the path I’ll be taking her down. Most of what I write, and will write, will be inside the “Sisters of the Moon” series.

Please leave comments. I like writing, and love constructive feedback, so be as critical as you like. My ego can take it. My live journal account will have stories in progress, mostly unbetad, and I’ll update them as they go through the drafts.


[Report This]
Reviews by mrmoon
Just a Regular Man by zimphella Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Neville Longbottom doesn't seem himself as a hero, but a regular man.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Drabbles
Characters: Neville Longbottom
Genres: None
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 471 Read Count: 446
[Report This] Published: 05/26/2008 Updated: 05/27/2008
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed
Date: 05/27/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nicely done. Nev is the everyman, and you captured that well.

Scar Tissue by Nickelwit Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: “No, I never betrayed Neville’s little army. What I did was worse. I betrayed her.”

A Slytherin that survived the war by playing both sides, choosing none, places her fate in the hands of the one person she should have stood with.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Lavender Brown, OFC, Padma Patil, Parvati Patil
Genres: Darkfic, Drama, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, FemSlash, Love/Hate, OC
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2288 Read Count: 509
[Report This] Published: 06/12/2008 Updated: 06/12/2008
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/16/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very good, I too see Lavender as the wolf. There are so many ways the shamanic experience could affect her, and you have captured this one well.  

Book Three: Rivalry by Amythis Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary: This is Book Three, but Year Four (since Years One and Two were so short) of the series Hermione Granger's Diary (I Mean Journal).  It is mostly Ron/Hermione, but contains Viktor/Hermione, Harry/Hermione, and even some fairly innocent Harry/Ron.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Golden Trio
Characters: Alastor Moody, Cedric Diggory, Fleur Delacour, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Rita Skeeter, Ron Weasley, Rubeus Hagrid, Viktor Krum
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Trio
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Character Death, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH
Series: Hermione Granger's Diary (I Mean Journal)
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78738 Read Count: 19868
[Report This] Published: 07/12/2008 Updated: 10/26/2008
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/25/2008 Title: Chapter 26: Twenty-Six: Priori Incantatem

Haven’t done a review in a while, I’ve just been so caught up in reading your work. Excellent job, please keep it up. You’ve got a dedicated group of readers who wait with great antici…………………….pation for the next installment. I love Order, but I really can’t wait for your take (or Hermione’s) on HBP.

Book Four: Rebellion by Amythis Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 35]
Summary: This is Book Four, but Year Five (since Years One and Two were so short) of the series "Hermione Granger's Diary (I Mean Journal)." It is mostly Ron/Hermione, but contains Harry/Hermione.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Golden Trio
Characters: Albus Dumbledore, Dolores Umbridge, Fred Weasley, George Weasley, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Neville Longbottom, Ron Weasley, Sirius Black
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Trio
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Character Death, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH
Series: Hermione Granger's Diary (I Mean Journal)
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89757 Read Count: 20512
[Report This] Published: 09/03/2008 Updated: 11/01/2008
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 10/14/2008 Title: Chapter 24: Twenty-Four: Banned

Thanks for your continuing work. This makes my commute fly by. I check daily for updates, and am always pleased to find one.

 and what is it with girls and horses?

Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/17/2008 Title: Chapter 1: One: Sincerely Yours

I check daily for updates. Awesome work, please keep it up.

How Deep the Scars by luvscharlie Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
Summary: One year after the Battle of Hogwarts, Lavender Brown struggles to come to grips with both her physical and emotional scars. Beauty is skin deep; the scars, however, far deeper.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Bill Weasley, Lavender Brown, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Drama
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, EWE
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1292 Read Count: 546
[Report This] Published: 10/13/2008 Updated: 10/13/2008
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/14/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lovely. There’s been a spate of Lavender stories lately and I like it. She has such potential. Your writing is, as always, terrific. Well done.

Author's Response: *tacklehug*  Thank you, dear.  I love your reviews.

Survivors by luvscharlie Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: When the smoke clears from the Battle of Hogwarts, it is not only the deserving who survive.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Drabbles
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Narcissa Malfoy, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Drama, Tragedy
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, Character Death, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 326 Read Count: 613
[Report This] Published: 11/03/2008 Updated: 11/03/2008
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/04/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Another great story from luvscharlie. I’m not much of an Hr/D guy, but this was very moving and true. Terrific.

One Big Horny Weasley Family by theelderwyrm Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 48]
Summary: Ron and Hermione are contentedly married young couple with a fairly conventional sex life until a few too many drinks at George and Alicia's New Year's Eve loosen their tongues. Then they find out they are just part of one big horny Weasley Family.
Categories: The Broomshed > More Than Two, The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Alicia Spinnet, Angelina Johnson, Bill Weasley, Charlie Weasley, Fleur Delacour, Fred Weasley, George Weasley, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Katie Bell, Lavender Brown, Lee Jordan, Parvati Patil, Penelope Clearwater, Percy Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, FemSlash, Masturbation, Orgy, Rimming, Strong Sexual Content, Threesome
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 126033 Read Count: 90338
[Report This] Published: 11/13/2008 Updated: 07/07/2014
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/02/2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12--Long Time Coming

I've been reading the whole thing as you've published and I really like it. What the others have said about those “real” moments between couples is 100% true. Excellent work. I look daily for updates, and kudos for making Lavender likeable (AND LICKABLE)

Reviewer: mrmoon Signed
Date: 10/01/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1--The Morning After

I agree with Iris 100%. This is far and away the best smut story ever. This chapter was just as hot and powerful as any so far. I love the image of the aftermath of a night of hot lesbian sex in Ginny’s room. Great mental image, perhaps someone could draw this for us (Bends and kisses artists leather boot). Really great story I don’t know how long you can keep it up I I hope you can keep it going for quite a few more chapters. Thanks for this great story.

Author's Response:

Thank you, MrMoon.  The story has somewhere between 3 and 6 chapters left, not counting outtakes, deleted scenes and blooper reels. ("It doesn't happen to every guy, it's not that common, and it is a big deal!")  However, there is a sequel that wants to fight its way out of my head.  I keeping it penned up for now so that it doesn't side track the party. 

I second your request for artwork, that would be awesome.

Reparations by jtav Rated: FG - Family Guidance [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Harry looks into a Pensieve and discovers Luna was tortured during her stay at Malfoy Manor. He decides to make it up to her.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: Harry Potter, Luna Lovegood
Genres: Drama
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3884 Read Count: 430
[Report This] Published: 11/17/2008 Updated: 11/17/2008
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed
Date: 11/17/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent! Luna was certainly tortured at Malfoy Manor, but as we know she has very special abilities to cope with those kinds of things. I like a non-crazy but eccentric Luna, and you’ve captured that well.

Kudos



Author's Response: Thank you. Luna is great fun to write.

Searching by thesteppyone Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 23]
Summary: Set after 'Together Forever' and during and directly after the final confrontation with Voldemort. Ron will do anything to help the one he loves including searching in a place no one else is allowed and a place he's not exactly sure exists.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, OFC, OMC, Percy Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Graphic Violence, Hurt/Comfort, Strong Language
Series: The 'Togther Forever?' Universe
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48091 Read Count: 8155
[Report This] Published: 11/30/2008 Updated: 01/02/2009
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12/03/2008 Title: Chapter 6: From an Unlikely Source

Absolutely full to the brim with win, just like together forever. Can’t wait to see how this is resolved. Love Harry and Gin and really love Percy.

Great work once again.

Book Six: Plans by Amythis Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 46]
Summary: This is the last in the series Hermione Granger's Diary (I Mean Journal), showing Hermione's POV of canon.
Categories: The Broomshed > Ménage a Trio
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Remus Lupin, Ron Weasley
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Comedy, Erotica, Romance, Trio
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Angst, Character Death, Contains Spoilers for DH, Frottage, Het, Masturbation, Minor Character Death, Slash, Strong Language, Threesome, Violence, Voyeurism
Series: Hermione Granger's Diary (I Mean Journal)
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 106597 Read Count: 39299
[Report This] Published: 12/03/2008 Updated: 02/13/2009
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed
Date: 12/04/2008 Title: Chapter 1: One: Wollongong

Terrific start! Can’t wait for more.

Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/09/2009 Title: Chapter 19: Nineteen: Doe, a Deer

Just so awesome. I love your Hermione, and I love her POV.

Tangled Webs by Realmer06 Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Everyone knows Lavender Brown. Or at least, they think they do.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Vacant Rooms
Characters: Hermione Granger, Lavender Brown, Parvati Patil, Ron Weasley, Seamus Finnigan
Genres: Angst, Romance
Time Period: Post-War, Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, Het
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15145 Read Count: 1811
[Report This] Published: 02/05/2009 Updated: 02/05/2009
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed
Date: 02/08/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent concept and very well told. I am a Lavender fan as well, and I think you’ve given people an entirely different view of our girl. Well done.

Through Her Eyes by imaginarygoddess Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary: "Through her eyes, he would always be five years old. Through her eyes, he would remain five, but grow taller, attend Hogwarts and save the world. And he'd always be five. But as she watched him with his best friend and girlfriend, he aged. In less than ten seconds, her baby boy had gone from being five years old to being eighteen. And all because he had kissed Hermione lightly on the mouth." Molly and Ron have a heart - to - heart talk about Ron's relationship with Hermione after the war.

MW/RW family, RWHG romance.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Hermione Granger, Molly Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Hurt/Comfort, Major Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2851 Read Count: 1919
[Report This] Published: 02/26/2009 Updated: 02/26/2009
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/26/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Can't much add to what melakem said. my girl is eighteen, and the boy comes over sometimes. They're not as... physical as R/h are in your story, but the feelings I get are the same.

Truly excellent.



Author's Response:

lol. "The boy"?

But it is nice to know that love still exists, isn't it? To me, it seems like everywhere I go there's someone who doesn't care about being in love, they just want to move from person to person, casual sex the main "goal". I do hope that your daughter and her boyfriend stay together.

Thank you so much for your kind words, too! :D

Take care

ImaginaryGoddess