Date: 02/27/2009 03:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
aww, this is simply beautiful ... I can't find any fault with this one
thanks for writing
lol. I would have to thank my amazing beta-reader, Claudia for lack of faults :P I would have added an author's note thanking her but the story was picked up before she could zoink it back for me XD
Thanks for reading!
Date: 02/26/2009 04:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can't much add to what melakem said. my girl is eighteen, and the boy comes over sometimes. They're not as... physical as R/h are in your story, but the feelings I get are the same.
lol. "The boy"?
But it is nice to know that love still exists, isn't it? To me, it seems like everywhere I go there's someone who doesn't care about being in love, they just want to move from person to person, casual sex the main "goal". I do hope that your daughter and her boyfriend stay together.
Thank you so much for your kind words, too! :D
Date: 02/26/2009 04:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
I've got shivers all over and I'm misty eyed as I finish this. It is simply beautiful. I don't know exactly why I find it so touching. Is it because my five year old, my youngest boy who is also my youngest child, is running amok through the house, and your brilliant writing has made me see that someday he'll grow into a man? Probably. Probably indeed. Your writing has put me right into Molly Weasley's shoes and you've given me a peek at what it will feel like. Thank you.
Thank you so much for your kind words, melakem. Being a new published author on here, I felt a bit small compared to other stories that I've read but your kindness has encouraged me to keep submitting stories here :D