Date: 11/19/2009 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
I quite liked this! It was very cute and enjoyable. The only thing I'd critique is that the writing -especially the first few paragraphs- comes across a bit choppy. Not exactly sure how to help though, it may just be me. Iin any case, you show lots of promise as a writer so keep it up :D
Author's Response: This was the first writing I'd ever done, so that's probably why it's not as coherent. :) Thanks for reviewing this; I didn't expect to get any more reviews in this stuff (it's so old), but this is the second review fr 2:00 AM I've gotten in as many days! Thanks for reading. :)
Date: 08/20/2009 09:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
I dig it! I know it's frustrating to recieve no reviews for your really hard work, but don't give up! I still haven't solved the mystery as to why people put in the time to read the story, but then don't give two seconds to say if they liked it or not...I'll let you know when I do! Great job, can't wait to read more from you! -Melissa
Author's Response: Well, thanks! I appreciate that! :)
Date: 04/21/2009 03:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
I liked your tale. It came up in the random story slot and I thought it worth a look. I like that just when Hermione needed Ron, he was already there!
Author's Response: Cool, thanks so much for reading! Glad you liked it!
Date: 02/12/2009 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
awwwwwww I love fluff! Was Hermione's nightmares about the war? I'm just curious
Author's Response: Yes, they were just nightmares of Ron getting killed in the war. I don't think she had them often, just when she was particularly stressed about something. Glad you liked my fluff! :)