Date: 06/06/2009 05:22 PM Title: Chapter 10--Hello Pussycat
I'm just fascinated with the way that such a delightfully smutty piece of work can believably have so much depth. Ron's and Hermione's relationship is so incredibly strong, and I like the fact that you have the two of them talk about things. It's nice to see them have doubts or concerns about the things they've been toying with, and reassuring to see them address those worries both with eachother and with other family members. (I think the sisters-in-law party was a terrific idea!)
Date: 06/05/2009 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 10--Hello Pussycat
OMG this was so hot...i am so happy that you posted 2 new chapters, they were good... i cant wait till the party, i hope it's a good long chapter.
Author's Response: You'll be glad to know, it's better than a good long chapter. It's several fairly long chapters. :-)
Date: 04/05/2009 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
I've been reading this for some time without reviewing, because, I honestly didn't quite know what to say. Obviously, you've written something rather arousing. I think I've been opening my mind a bit as I read, and maybe picking up a few tricks. But, the interaction between Ron and Hermione in this chapter is really intriguing.
I like how much they trust eachother, and that they have reservations and whatnot. I especially liked this statement by Hermione. I find it very true and quite well written.
"When we make love, we’re renewing a connection that we feel in our souls. Haven’t you ever noticed how much closer we are when we have sex? I notice it when we don’t. If we go too long we get distant, or we start to bicker like we used to. For us, sex is a manifestation of how we feel for each other."