Date: 06/05/2009 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 10--Hello Pussycat
OMG this was so hot...i am so happy that you posted 2 new chapters, they were good... i cant wait till the party, i hope it's a good long chapter.
Author's Response: You'll be glad to know, it's better than a good long chapter. It's several fairly long chapters. :-)
Date: 04/05/2009 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
I've been reading this for some time without reviewing, because, I honestly didn't quite know what to say. Obviously, you've written something rather arousing. I think I've been opening my mind a bit as I read, and maybe picking up a few tricks. But, the interaction between Ron and Hermione in this chapter is really intriguing.
I like how much they trust eachother, and that they have reservations and whatnot. I especially liked this statement by Hermione. I find it very true and quite well written.
"When we make love, we’re renewing a connection that we feel in our souls. Haven’t you ever noticed how much closer we are when we have sex? I notice it when we don’t. If we go too long we get distant, or we start to bicker like we used to. For us, sex is a manifestation of how we feel for each other."
Date: 12/03/2008 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 3- Surprise Confessions
I'm loving this story, but you might want to re-edit it - There are some Beta comments that got in as text...
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thank you for pointing that out, I'll get it taken care of.