Date: 11/02/2008 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
If Snape was complete honest with himself it wasn't all together unpleasant
Other then that typo, the tehcniclities were okay. I though the POV was slipping now and then and the characterisation - if this is post DH - left something to be disired, namely Lily.=Sammy




[Report This]Date: 12/14/2007 08:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
*squee* I loved this. Thank you so secret elf. This really really made my day when got it. *lovies lovies lovies*
Author's Response: Yay! Mother's of twins have to stick together!
Date: 12/10/2007 08:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
"Or perhaps you'd like me to put my infernal mouth to better use?"
Ha! That was fantastic! I can just see what Minerva will say when he asks for the restoring potion. *giggles*
Author's Response: Awww thank you!