Date: 06/08/2007 08:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful story. You've really captured how it's possible to look at someone with eyes of love. Hope you publish more of your work!
Author's Response: That was sort of what I was going for. Thanks for the encouraging review!
Date: 06/08/2007 07:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was lovely and achy at the start with just the right amount of fluff at the end.
[i]“I’m not beautiful, I’m not gorgeous, I’m not even pretty. Maybe from afar, if the sun’s shining a bit too bright and you squint a little, I can be cute. But I’m not beautiful. Never will be. I am, smart though. Can you just concentrate on that? Yes you love me, and your love-addled mind may perceive me as beautiful. But the fact is I’m not. Ok?”[/i]
That part was just perfect, especially the love-addled bit.
I hope we see more fic from you.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy you liked it.