Date: 11/02/2006 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow,IMO this was one of your best works so far,Jen :)
You did wonderful about the dark details and the part they cut themselves was creepy but very realistic :)
Even living a dark moment ,Ron and Hermione ´s moments were adorable :)
Many thanks, darling Monica. This was very difficult for me to write because I dislike the idea of them using dark magic... even if it is for good. I'm glad you liked the Ron and Hermione moments I added in. I couldn't resist. ;)
Date: 10/29/2006 04:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
Another great story Jen!!!! I was a bit worried after Ron took the potion but then I remembered you would never do anything to harm Ron :) Great job
Thanks May. I'm glad you liked it! :) You're right, there's no way I'd ever hurt my Ronnie. Not even in a Halloween fic. Thanks for reading!
Date: 10/29/2006 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting story. Blood magic doesn't seem like the best plan. I can absolutely believe Ron would be the one to try the potion first, even if he didn't like the idea.
No it doesn't seem like the best plan. Not at all. I can't imagine that they would ever particpate in dark magic in the books. But the challenge asked for something scary or dark, so this was the most disturbing thing I could think of.
Yeah, I totally thought Ron's loyalty would drive him to be the one putting his ass on the line even if he didn't agree with what they were doing.
Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 10/28/2006 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was wonderful. I liked that Harry had to fight the darkness in side of him and that he didn't tell Ron or Hermione.
Author's Response: Thanks Robin777! I'm glad you liked it. I didn't think it would be right if they used this dark ritual and there weren't any consequences. Ron felt a bit of the same pull, but of course, it would be stronger in Harry given the circumstances. I don't think this would be something he'd share with Ron and Hermione. He's very secretive when it comes to things like this. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: 10/28/2006 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
The tone of the whole story was amazingly consistant and excellent job on the characterizations, especially Harry. You used just the right balance of the seriousness and how Dark this thing was that they were undertaking, without overdoing that part of it. I liked how hesitant Ron was, knowing what Dark Magic can do and that there are consequences and I loved how he kissed Hermione's hand and was so comforting to her. Great ending and great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so pleased that you liked it. You know I was deeply troubled with the idea of the trio using dark magic. But darkfic is what the challenge asked for so darkfic is what I wrote. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the betaing it for me.