Date: 03/30/2013 08:17 PM Title: Mating Habits
I'll be looking through your other stories for a sequel! This one has a slightly bitter ending, although that last line instills hope.
I'm not sure if I'm rating it objectively or not, that perhaps I'm giving it a six because of the bitter feeling left over and not because the story/plot/etc was bad. Reading through this was painful because of Ron's situation (and perhaps the way he forms his thoughts).
I'm not sure if this fully expresses my feelings on the piece or not. I know I'm not being objective, though.