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A Good Man by Rickey_A Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Harry’s not sure what he wants to do with himself after the war. Making Draco Malfoy into a good man sounds like a promising idea, but the truth is that it’s a journey for two.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room, The Broomshed > Dark Side
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: Angst, Darkfic, Drama
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoilers for DH, Dub-Con, EWE, Hurt/Comfort, Non-Con, Rape, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26400 Read Count: 8952
[Report This] Published: 01/07/2008 Updated: 01/12/2008
Reviewer: Toshiko Signed
Date: 09/19/2008 Title: Chapter 3: A Good Man Part 3 of 4

Wow.  That was.....beautiful.  Perhaps you occasionally went OOC, but that's one of the best fics I've ever read, and considering it's smut and a darkfic that's saying something.  Amazing job!

Author's Response: thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.  It's always great to get reviews:)

A Heart So Ravenous by Slashpervert Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary: Draco and Harry continue to recover from past ordeals as they work on building their lives together. Draco tries to find a way to please both his parents and his lover, but with dangerous consequences. Will their love survive what he has done? Sequel to A Love So Belated.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room, The Broomshed > The Dungeon
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, EWE, Graphic Violence, Hurt/Comfort, M-Preg, Masturbation, Rimming, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118226 Read Count: 40334
[Report This] Published: 04/22/2008 Updated: 05/04/2008
Reviewer: Toshiko Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/19/2008 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44: Never Happier

Thank you for writing this story, especially the first 10 chapters or so, with Draco recovering from being raped.  In sooth, it usually takes a lot longer than that to readjust even that much, but it's good to see that somebody takes it into account.  Thank you!

 

Also, your writing has improved over time, just between these two novels  I look forward to seeing the third!



Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, survivor issues are important in my writing.

July at Shell Cottage by Ebb Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Hermione spends a month at Shell Cottage while Ron and Harry have training. Contains various pairings and (maybe in the future) some threesomes.

"That summer liberated her. It set of a chain of events more radical and crazy than most people would dare experience."
Categories: The Broomshed > The Ladies Room, The Broomshed > Self Pleasure, The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings, The Broomshed > More Than Two
Characters: Bill Weasley, Charlie Weasley, Fleur Delacour, Gabrielle Delacour, Hermione Granger
Genres: Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Drug Usage, FemSlash, Het, Masturbation, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Threesome, Voyeurism
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 587 Read Count: 3385
[Report This] Published: 04/25/2009 Updated: 04/25/2009
Reviewer: Toshiko Signed
Date: 11/23/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

It sounds like a good start.  I, for one, would like to see more.