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That Which Divides Us by oldenuf2nobetter Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 48]
Summary: Three years after what would have been their seventh year at Hogwarts the war grinds on between the forces of light and Voldemort’s minions. But even within the ranks of the Order there are vast disagreements over what is good for the ‘chosen one’ and his volatile relationship with Draco Malfoy has many on edge. Sometimes even the best intentions can reap disaster.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: Action/Adventure, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125762 Read Count: 25852
[Report This] Published: 08/18/2007 Updated: 10/11/2007
Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 09/27/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting latest twist with Pansy. I am intrigued. I am so hoping harry discovers Hermoine and Scrimgeour's deceit soon. Thanks for updating so soon..

Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 09/29/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Whoa! That bedroom scene between Blaise (gorgeously detailed) and Harry burns off the page. The emotion was so palpable. I love that Harry couldn't ultimately go through with it. His heart, soul, and mind are so conflicted. What is with the shrew-like Hermoine? Shouldn't she be more guilt-ridden and little less judgmental. Yet, I can't say it is not on the whole suspensful wondering when her dirty deed will come to light.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'm glad that you enjoyed that!

Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 10/02/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Goodness, they are so close yet so far away. I can't wait to see Harry's wrath when the plot is blown. I hope it is good. He is such a powerful wizard in this tale and I can only hope we see some of that displayed in righteous ass-kickery and payback :) I also want to personally stuff  brown-nosing Percy in a hamper and sit a hippogriff on its lid, ridding us all of the git. 
I am so loving Pansy. Calculating, smart, observant, and honest thus far. Finally a Slytherin I can relate to. 



Author's Response: Thanks so much, and I like Pansy very much, as well.  She's got all of the Slytherin qualities, but you're right; the darling girl is honest to a fault.  And Percy?  Eh.  My least favorite character in canon.  I'm certain Molly has a large hamper he can be contained in. 

Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 10/03/2007 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

what a terrible TEASE  this chapter is:)

Author's Response: I know.  Sorry about that....

Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 10/04/2007 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Damn. THat Harry is right sexy when he is on the war path. FInally Draco is found--albeit damaged. Loved the ending of this chapter. The whole trust conversation was wonderfully executed.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!  And you're right, take charge Harry is one sexy man.

Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 10/07/2007 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

DAMN! Love that Ron. I am sop glad you have developed him in such a strong way. Always loyal, strong, and far smarter than Hermoine gives him credit for--even in Canon. How many more chapters are left? I am so giddy when I see an update.

Author's Response: He is absolutely smarter than Hermione ever gave him credit for.  I love Ron as a character, and a lot of times in H/D fics his dipiction isn't very flattering.  See, I thought Harry could be gay and he and Ron could still be best friends.  Not to many left now...

Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 10/12/2007 Title: Chapter 25: Epilogue

Loved it. Loved it. Loved it. Well done epilogue. You also have a wonderful gift for biting dialogue (Blaise/Harry, Blaise v. Draco, Pansy v.hermoine). Your dialogue really gave the characters dimension, and kept the pace moving. One of my all time fav Draco/Harry ships. Can't wait for more of your stuff. I'll be checking from time to time.

Author's Response: So glad that you enjoyed this, and thank you for the lovely reviews.  And I'll have more up soon!

Where do we go from here? by RavagingRon Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary: The war is over.  Now Harry, Ron, and Hermione take comfort in one another while trying to figure out how to carry on.
Categories: The Broomshed > Self Pleasure, The Broomshed > Ménage a Trio
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Masturbation, Strong Sexual Content, Threesome, Voyeurism
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4344 Read Count: 8519
[Report This] Published: 08/19/2007 Updated: 08/20/2007
Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 10/04/2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Trio

Absolutely stunning. That shower scene with Hermoine and Ron was heart shattering and all out sexy. Good fic.

Author's Response: Thank you soooo much!  I really appreciate the feedback.  I need the motivation for my next story!

Crown of Rope by Thevina Rated: RT - Restricted Themes [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Weeks after the end of the War, Draco was confronted with an attraction to a person that defied all reason, and he fled— to Japan. Three years later, he discovers the appeal was and is mutual, but nothing comes easily between a Malfoy and a Weasley. R/D, DH-compliant ignoring the epilogue. Written in part for the Fire + Ice Deathly Hallows epilogue challenge.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Bondage, Contains Spoilers for DH, EWE, Frottage, Masturbation, Rimming, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41451 Read Count: 4298
[Report This] Published: 09/29/2007 Updated: 09/29/2007
Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 10/02/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Crown of Rope, Part I

I truly enjoyed this fic. I love Ron/Draco and the bondage was a nice touch. You captured Draco beautifully. I was able to sense his reformed, yet still refined spirit. I hope you continue to write R/D ship fics.

Author's Response: I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this! Draco I could easily see as someone who would resonate to ritualized bondage, but within very particular contexts. I was glad Ron wasn't too off-put by it!! As for writing more, probably; I've been happily writing R/D for many years. I enjoyed incorporating all but the epilogue-oriented DH elements; it was a challenge! Thanks again for your review.

Harry Potter and The Bound Prince (BP1) by Slashpervert Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 21]
Summary: In Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince there is a pivotal moment where things could have gone very differently. That is the bathroom scene where Harry nearly kills Draco by accident. Draco is upset that Harry has caught him crying and throws a hex. It escalates and ends in blood. Our story begins with the simple premise of "what if" something changed in the bathroom scene so that Harry and Draco talked instead of throwing hexes. It also takes the assumption of unvoiced attraction between the two. Draco takes a chance and kisses Harry. Once sparked, their mutual desire and exploration becomes the driving force in the alternative ending to that of Half-Blood Prince. Draco's "mission" from Voldemort turns out to be more complex than that presented in canon and their solution even more difficult.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room, The Broomshed > The Dungeon
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Angst, BDSM, Bondage, Contains Spoiler for HBP, D/S, Dub-Con, Graphic Violence, Hurt/Comfort, Minor Character Death, Rimming, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Voyeurism
Series: The Bound Prince
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133670 Read Count: 83479
[Report This] Published: 10/07/2007 Updated: 10/25/2007
Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 10/09/2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Tea With a Dragon

Hmmm...intriguing alternative thus far. More please...

Author's Response: Sue thing!  Lots more to come... This fic is written and I will be uploading as fast as the system can take it.

Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 10/26/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Hex Me or Kiss Me

Yes, I also found this series at another fic site, and I enjoyed it thoroughly. Can't wait to see more of your mind here.

The Pitfalls of Hero Worship by mapleandmahogany Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Teddy learns there is more to Harry and Ron than what he sees.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Next Generation, Post-War
Warnings: Masturbation, Minor Fluff, Rimming, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9040 Read Count: 968
[Report This] Published: 10/08/2007 Updated: 10/08/2007
Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 10/08/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's nice to read a post-war story involving established Ron/harry and to see someone's version of Harry as godfather to Teddy. I actually liked this fic.

Author's Response: Well I'm glad you read it. I was in a mood to see a happy and domestic H/R, and I think the potential for Teddy's character is very interesting. Thank you.

All Dressed Up, Somewhere to Go by oldenuf2nobetter Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Summary: Draco Malfoy usually loves the opportunity to ‘put on the Ritz’, but for some reason,     this particular Ministry function was trying his nerves….
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: PWP, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, D/S, Dub-Con, EWE, Public Sex, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7685 Read Count: 4732
[Report This] Published: 10/10/2007 Updated: 10/10/2007
Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 10/11/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

HOT. Love the dialogue.

Author's Response: Thanks.  I think the conversations are as important as the sex.  Not as much fun, but as important!