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Across the Line by kerryblaze Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary: After an argument, a drunk Ron shows up at Harry's flat.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: None
Genres: Erotica
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Slash, Strong Sexual Content, Strong Language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3491 Read Count: 1780
[Report This] Published: 10/22/2005 Updated: 10/22/2005
Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 09/14/2007 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

I love an in control-out of control Ron. I love it when he takes the lead as well. Wonderful fic.

A Lacking of Foresight by keelywolfe Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary: In which papers are graded; old friends are met once, twice; and something that ended long ago has begun once again.


Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama
Time Period: None
Warnings: Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72201 Read Count: 37046
[Report This] Published: 06/12/2006 Updated: 06/12/2006
Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 09/14/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This rocked. I like that Ron is confident, yet angsty. The slash isn't bad either.

The Gates of Great Darkness by Thevina Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: What have you become if you're a Wizard whose magic has been ripped away by a curse? Ron and Draco are forced to find out, but their paths take very different routes.
Categories: The Broomshed > Dark Side
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ron Weasley
Genres: Darkfic, Drama, Tragedy
Time Period: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Character Death, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8353 Read Count: 879
[Report This] Published: 08/14/2006 Updated: 08/14/2006
Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 10/04/2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Gates of Great Darkness

That's one of the saddest fics I've read in the HP fanfic world. Take that as a compliment. Well done.

Author's Response: I'm flattered, indeed. The content in this goes down a very dark path, and I'm grateful for any who actually finish it. But it was a story I needed to write at the time, and I'm pleased that it touched you. Thank you very much for the review.

That's My Boy by mapleandmahogany Rated: RT - Restricted Themes [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Harry tries to make amends after Ron gets angry.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Erotica
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Rimming, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3997 Read Count: 748
[Report This] Published: 11/04/2006 Updated: 11/04/2006
Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 09/29/2007 Title: Chapter 1: That's My Boy

I must say this is one of my favorite Ron/Harry ship fics. I like the jealousy inspired dialogue, and the tenderness with which they "read" one another. This was too short!!! I wanted more it was so good.
PS. I also love stories with no wasteful exposition--THANKS!!!

Author's Response:

What an utterly wonderful thing to say! Thank you! I personally, really like it when the guys get jealous/angry but I don't like the implications of weakness or insecurity in the relationship that it imbues, so I really played with those lines of dinstinction here.

And I try to be careful with exposition - heh. Thankyou! 

You Can't Save Me by madam_minnie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Past Featured StorySometimes you have to save your friends from themselves if you hope to save them at all.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Dungeon
Characters: Blaise Zabini, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: None
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, BDSM, Bondage, D/S, Dub-Con, Graphic Violence, Non-Con, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14585 Read Count: 6198
[Report This] Published: 11/06/2006 Updated: 12/02/2009
Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 10/10/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Rescue

I love any story that depicts a strong, sexy Weasley--especially Ron. The scene when he kicks the crap out of Blaise is just well crafted. More please...

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I had a tough time writing the abuse but when Ron came into the picture, it was quite easy to have him beating the crap out of Blaise for everything he'd done. ;) Thanks for the great review! Hope you continue to enjoy it!

 

The Glass Onion by mapleandmahogany Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 143]
Summary: Past Featured StoryThe war against Voldemort has just ended, and Lee has been attacked and hexed while minding the joke shop for the Twins. The near loss of his friend makes George face his feelings.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: George Weasley, Lee Jordan
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Frottage, Masturbation, Minor Fluff, Rimming, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45552 Read Count: 52002
[Report This] Published: 01/12/2007 Updated: 11/12/2007
Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 10/05/2007 Title: Chapter 2: 2. Love

I am loving this story thus far. I like the whole frat-boy mentality of Fred and Charlie in contrast with George's quest for something more meaningful with Lee. Also, you have taken the task of describing dark skin with all its due variation, uniqueness and loveliness well in hand thus far. Can't wait to see Lee and George together :)

Author's Response:

I'm thrilled to have a new reader! :D Yes, in this universe, Charlie is a considerable arse and Fred just wants to rut against anything female. George and Lee go through meany trials before it's over.

Oh, and yes, I may have made rather a study out of the beauty of dark skin. ;) hee 

Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 10/05/2007 Title: Chapter 7: 7. Food

Wow. Lee is so deliberate and forward. A nice juxtaposition to George's uncertainty. Also, I love a jealous Weasley.

Author's Response:

Lee isn't afraid to say what he thinks, that's for sure. And normally you wouldn't think George would either, but now that he really cares and he's worried about outside perceptions, he overthinks everything.

Jealous Weasleys, they're something, aren't they? 

Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 10/05/2007 Title: Chapter 14: 14. Long Distance

That letter from George is soo HOT!!!

Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 10/18/2007 Title: Chapter 1: 1. Hate

Yay for updates!! I am glad to see you sticking with this story. I think George/Lee is my third fav. ship--next to Ron/Harry, Ron/Draco. 

Author's Response: Ooh - I'm honored to make your top three! (Ron/Draco? :P) Absolutely sticking with this one. I have 7 more 'smutlets' before it's over! :)

Nothing Left Between by Rickey_A Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]
Summary: Post War. Harry/Ron. They’re 18. Harry decides that it’s time to come out to his closest friends and gets a little help from a new friend. Of course it’s Ron that he’s holding a torch for.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: OC
Series: Nothing Left Between
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8598 Read Count: 2913
[Report This] Published: 01/24/2007 Updated: 01/25/2007
Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 09/14/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved this story. I love anything where RON shows a strong bone (pun intended). I really enjoyed his firmness with Hermoine as well. Ron and Harry love is my favorite ship. Nice work. 

Author's Response: Thanks so much for commenting. This is obviously a Harry-centric story, but I really wanted to make sure Ron was a force to be reckoned with. :)

Every Night the Same by Rickey_A Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Immediately Post War. Harry and Ron are involved, only neither can admit it.
Genre: I have no idea (is there such thing as psycho-smut? {;-)
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Erotica
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1180 Read Count: 961
[Report This] Published: 01/26/2007 Updated: 01/27/2007
Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 10/04/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I actually think this story is very beautiful. Their interactions, while certainly weird, are a testament to how much they need one another. I was actually moved by the last and only line of dialogue. Nice job.

Author's Response: Thank you. I typically put this fic in a list of favorites of my own fics if someone is asking. Usually I construct and draft and write and rewrite stories over a long time. This one just came to me and practically wrote itself over the course of a few hours. It was very strange how it happened, but I\'m so proud of it.

Turn the Page by Rickey_A Rated: RT - Restricted Themes [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Immediately following the end of Voldemort, Harry and Ron work out how to get on with their lives and their relationship. Ron also learns that bravery comes at a price.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Various, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: Poetry in Motion
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7216 Read Count: 1033
[Report This] Published: 03/08/2007 Updated: 03/08/2007
Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 10/04/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Turn the Page

I loved this fic. I actually love a lot of your stuff, since I am all about h/R and H/D pairings. You capture the deep bond between Harry and Ron so effectively. Your dialogue is well crafted as well. Thanks for writing...

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I truly appreciate all the comments. I think dialogue is my favorite thing to write and I always try to make conversations feel real and natural.

Now and Then by oldenuf2nobetter Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary: Even the death of Voldemort did not end the struggle between good and evil. And even the discovery of a new and unexpected power cannot save Harry from having to deal, once and for all, with an old nemesis.
Categories: The Broomshed > Dark Side
Characters: Vincent Crabbe, Seamus Finnigan, Gregory Goyle, Hermione Granger, Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter, Ginny Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: Darkfic
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, BDSM, Bondage, Drug Usage, Dub-Con, Graphic Violence, Het, Hurt/Comfort, Non-Con, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Threesome
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46660 Read Count: 15838
[Report This] Published: 04/13/2007 Updated: 06/26/2007
Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 09/06/2007 Title: Chapter 14: Now and Then: Chapter 14

Loved this story. I really like how much edge the character's have. Nicely done. However, I would have liked to see Harry dispatch Malfoy instead of Ron.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.  And I did consider having Harry take Malfoy out, but I thought, given the dynamic of the rest of the story, this was just the natural progression of Ron's protectiveness.  Again, thanks so much for taking the time to review.  I appreciate it!

Redeem Me by Samayel Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 66]
Summary: Two years after the events of Harry's sixth year at Hogwart's, Draco stumbles back into his life. Harry is a bitter and violent young man, Draco is a walking wreck...and who is helping who? (NC-17 rating is for later chapters. This fic is HBP compliant with only very small adjustments to suit this plot.) OOC- is for semiDark!Harry. QUILL TO PARCHMENT AWARDS: Best Post War; Runner Up-Best Angst! COMPLETE!
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter, Rodolphus Lestrange, Walden Macnair
Genres: Drama, Erotica, General, Horror, Mystery, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Drug Usage, Dub-Con, Graphic Violence, Hurt/Comfort, Masturbation, Minor Character Death, Non-Con, OC, Rape, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 240239 Read Count: 120952
[Report This] Published: 04/14/2007 Updated: 10/30/2007
Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 09/27/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Interrupted Musings, Interrupted Meal

WOW. NICE JOB.
I love dark Harry and a redeemed Draco. I wish for more Dialogue and a little less repetition of their histories, but I am intrigued by what lies ahead for Harry and Draco, and the final exorcism of the Dark Lord... Please update often :)

Author's Response: We're getting very close to some action parts, and dialogue will play a part. In future stories I mean to employ dialogue more too. It really is my weakest point as an auothor. So glad you like it overall, and I'll keep the chapters coming :-) Love, S

Reviewer: Rettavex Signed
Date: 10/03/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Interrupted Musings, Interrupted Meal

Clipping right along nicely. I am so into this D/H ship and all the pain, angst, uncertainty, courage, and love that is bubbling within them both. This latest chapter nicely written and the dialogue between Draco and George was excellent. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Awwn thank you! I did try to improve my dialogue skills in this fic, and while there is exposition and non narrative parts, theres is a nice mix of dialogue in certain chapters...and more to come! Peaces, S