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Wake Me by risiepookie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 173]
Summary: In the midst of the War, Hermione is kidnapped and held captive as Ron, Harry and Ginny search desperately for her. Hermione and Ron share a psychic connection, with which she tries to help him find her before it is too late.

A strong warning for this story, as it does contain the rape of a character and severe psychological trauma.

*This is the first story in my Awakenings Series*
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Darkfic, Drama, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Het, Rape, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52346 Read Count: 16366
[Report This] Published: 08/23/2006 Updated: 08/23/2007
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Date: 09/05/2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- Bound

i don't even know what to say. that filthy bastard! i hope u kill him later...in an extremely painful and humiliating way! u are one brave lass, risie...



Author's Response: I know, he really is quite the bastard.  No matter how many different ways I tried to write this, my muse kept bringing me back to this point.  He'll get his eventually- no worries there!  Thank you so much, hon, I really appreciate it!  *sugar cookie for you*

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Date: 09/05/2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Panic Attack

that was beautiful

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  You are absolutely spoiling me, but I love it!  :o)  *coke slushie for you*

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Date: 09/05/2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Forcibly Removed

i love that u are telling this story from both points of view! awesome

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the alternating POV!  I definitely wanted to do 1st person, so figured doing alternating would be the best way to get the truer experience.  Thanks, hon!  ::hugs::  *espresso chip ice cream to you*

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Date: 09/05/2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Unveiled

it can't stop here!!! this was brilliant~~i can't wait to see what happens next. love ya!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, my tendency for cliff-hangers is kinda evil in this fic.  But, at least you didn't have to wait for the next chapter, since it was already posted!  :o)  Thanks, babe, love you too!!!  ::smooch::  *deep fried ice cream for you*

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Date: 09/05/2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - A Tentative Connection

wow! this is bloody exciting, girl



Author's Response: I'm glad you think so- but I worry how you'll react to the next few chapters!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!  ::smoochies::  *chocolate covered pretzels for you*

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Date: 09/05/2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Hope Fades

the guilt and shame piece in here is amazing. and once again, i love hearing both ron and hermoine's p.o.v.'s

Author's Response: Thank you!!!  My beta and I worked pretty hard to make sure it came across strongly, but not too overwhelmingly.  I'm so, so happy you're enjoying the fic!  ::hugs::  *banana split for you*

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Date: 09/05/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Forcibly Taken

i think my heart's racing (almost) as fast as Ron's and Harry's right now. :(

Author's Response: Joanna, I'm so happy you're reading this fic!  It means so much to me and I'm so glad you're already enjoying it!  ::hugs::  *heath bars to you*

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Date: 09/05/2007 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Slipping Further Away

OMG, i didn't see that coming!!! please please tell me that u kill that bastard in the worst way possible!

Author's Response: This was another chapter that the muse kept dragging me back to this point, and I couldn't seem to find a way around doing it this way.  Again, no worries, the evil bastard will eventually get what's coming to him!  Thanks for your thoughts, honey.  *chewy toffees for you*

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Date: 09/11/2007 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Barely Breathing

OMG, i can't wait to read the next chapter! once again, i'm at the edge of my seat.

 p.s. the image of snape shagging hagrid made me gag ;)



Author's Response: Can't believe how absolutely quickly you've gotten through all of these chapters!  You always were a fast reader!!  Thanks so much for the continual support, hon, I really appreciate it.  Oh, and can't you see how that would be the perfect way to kill arousal??  hehe.  *blackberry pie for you*

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Date: 09/11/2007 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Finally Woken

no! u can't stop there!!! holy shit, i don't think i can wait!

ok, i can wait, but it's gonna be so DAMN HARD! is she pregnant? is it worse than that? ugh, the suspense is already killing me...

i love that neville is the healer. he was always one of my fave characters, and it's great to see him in this story!

i think it's really hot, btw, that hermoine's first kiss was ginny. u probably have every straight guy who's read this fantasizing right now. ;) seriously, tho. that was hot.

i also really love how u connected hermoine's bodily responses together. awesome job, sweetheart! can't wait to read more!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, the evil cliffie strikes again!  It won't be as long between updates as the last time, but it's gonna be a few more weeks probably, since I'm trying to update If a Man Answers. 

::nods::  Neville is one of my favourites too and I was so happy to work him into this fic.  I always kinda saw him in this sort of role, though that's not how he ended up... 

::grins::  You know, you're the only person to mention the Hermione/Ginny first kiss, but I was quite proud of that moment!  I wanted it to be something surprising, instead of Krum, because I think Hermione has a lot of hidden aspects of herself and she's underestimated.  SO glad you thought it was hot and that you liked it! 

Thank you so much for your lovely review, my sweetie.  You are so wonderful and I really appreciate hearing your thoughts!  ::hugs::  *mocha frappacino for you*

If a Man Answers by risiepookie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 218]
Summary: When Ron comes back after two years, he dreads another man answering Hermione's door in the middle of the night. He certainly didn't expect the other man to be Harry. Jealousy, sex, betrayal, confusion, and heartache ensue.  Unfortunately, all is not as it should be and Ron must survive the unexpected consequences of his return, including broken relationships and promises.

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Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40051 Read Count: 29798
[Report This] Published: 08/27/2006 Updated: 04/21/2008
Reviewer: JoannaMagdala Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/31/2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Memories of a Lifetime Ago

wonderful! the complexity of the emotions is fantastic. and yay, mrs. weasley!!!

Author's Response: Ooo, I'm glad you're enjoying the emotional components- it can be difficult to connect to so much angst!  And, yes, major yay for Molly- of course, we both love her, so how could I not have her in this?  Thanks, honey.  *rice pudding for you*

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Date: 08/31/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Finally Home

wow! can't wait to see what happens next. have to admit my jaw dropped a bit when harry answered the door



Author's Response:

Joanna!!!!!!!  OMG, I'm so excited that you started to read it!  And I'm quite excited that you enjoyed it!  ::happy dance::  Thank you so much for being a part of this bit of my life- it really means so much to me!  ::hugs:: 

*cheesecake with blackberry culee for you*

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Date: 08/31/2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Revelations

hot damn! i'm on the edge of my seat!

Author's Response:

Whoo-hoo!  If you thought it was hot, I'm on the right track!  Thanks for reading, babe!  ::smooch:: 

*white chocolate chip macademia nut cookies for you*

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Date: 08/31/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Finally Home

wow! wow wow wow

Author's Response: ::blushes::  I am so, so glad you are enjoying it.  Your opinion means SO much to me!  ::hugs::  *creme brulee for you*

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Date: 08/31/2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Frozen

ron is a wanker! but a lovable one. if i was holding these pages in my hands, i wouldn't be able to put the book down...

Author's Response: Heh, he definitely has his moments, but I adore him so!  OMG, I'm so happy that you're connecting with it!!!  You make me want to dance around the room, darling.  Thank you for that!  *peach ice cream for you*