Penname: darkpyroangel06 [Contact] Real name: Akalei Kanakele Kahookele
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To Give Everything by Slashpervert, aveeno_baby Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary: Draco finds The Room, a torture chamber in the Hogwarts dungeons and longs for someone to submit to him. Harry finds he needs that and more.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, BDSM, Bondage, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, D/S, EWE, Fisting, Rimming, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52702 Read Count: 14199
[Report This] Published: 01/11/2010 Updated: 02/01/2010
Reviewer: darkpyroangel06 Signed
Date: 02/02/2010 Title: Chapter 14: Author's Notes for To Give Everything

Wow. The thought processes and the personal experiences that made this fic possble are amazing. I'm glad you're part of the real BDSM scene, which made this fic so much more realistic than most other BDSM fics. I did like the gradual relationship building, rather than the "I love you! Now spank me!" aspect. A secret crush is an interesting way to start such a fic, but this starter was so real and so much harder, I would think. Like you said, it's the reason it was so much longer. The emotional cues for each character are amazing, and you didn't come right out and explain each and every one. Draco's relationship with Severus, while heavily hinted at, was not outright clarified. The fear of being weak was obvious, but the reasons behind it were assumed and related to canon. Harry's absolute depression was built through the books, added upon in the beginning of your story by Ginny leaving him, and then almost tipped over the edge. That had to be my single favourite piece fo writing in HP fanfiction: the chapter on the tower when Harry is going to jump and Draco realizes he'd rather die with Harry than live without him. Your explanations behind the fic are just as amazing as the fic itself. Thank-you for sharing them. ~dpa06~