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Fulfilled by Slashpervert Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Every session with the Weasley twins was fantastic – an unparalleled experience in debauchery. And this week, Harry expected he would get something he had been fantasizing about for a long time.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Fred Weasley, George Weasley, Harry Potter
Genres: PWP
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: BDSM, Incest, Rimming, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Weasleycest
Series: Dirty
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2384 Read Count: 4556
[Report This] Published: 03/11/2009 Updated: 03/11/2009
Reviewer: darkpyroangel06 Signed
Date: 03/12/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a lovely piece of debauchery to wake up to. I loved it! I thought it was so amazing to see Harry act such a slut. I've seen slutty-Harry, sub-Harry, shameless-Harry, you name it! But this was a whole new level for him for me. Your writing is amazing; I've been reading a lot of it recently and have passed on your name to all my friends. Keep it up, I love your stuff. ~dpa06~

Author's Response: Aww, thank you. Yes, I got to really have fun with Harry here. I have submitted a fourth one in this story. Hopefully, it will post soon.

To Give Everything by Slashpervert, aveeno_baby Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary: Draco finds The Room, a torture chamber in the Hogwarts dungeons and longs for someone to submit to him. Harry finds he needs that and more.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, BDSM, Bondage, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, D/S, EWE, Fisting, Rimming, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52702 Read Count: 15231
[Report This] Published: 01/11/2010 Updated: 02/01/2010
Reviewer: darkpyroangel06 Signed
Date: 01/11/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Room

That's a great insight into Harry's mind, one that I always support myself. I love that Draco has his own internal battle going on. I can't wait for more, and I look forward to reading every chapter you post. The details you've written as to what they're thinking and feeling is amazing, and so natural. It doesn't seem forced at all to me. ~dpa06~

Author's Response: Thanks. I put up a new chapter!  Glad you like.

Reviewer: darkpyroangel06 Signed
Date: 01/12/2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Marked

I like that he wasn't flowery about it. Harry, I mean. A lot of fics where it's hurt/comfort or BDSM or whatever you want to call it, the receiver is all "OMG! I can't believe it! I actually LIKE this! And it feels good! And I want more! And I want it from HIM/HER!" Here, it's more like, "Finally. I can breathe." I like the way you handled this, and I love Draco's mindset as well. I mean, he's learning just as much and as fast as Harry is, so it's interesting to watch the pair of them grow together. I really am excited to see where this all goes and how it gets there. Keep up the amazing work! ~dpa06~

Author's Response:

Yes, exactly. They are both learning. They'll make mistakes but it's part of the journey. Thanks!

Reviewer: darkpyroangel06 Signed
Date: 01/18/2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Quill

I was surprised he took Harry to the room so soon. I mean, it was just one session and then they were in the room. I LOVE Harry's reactions to things! I mean, he likes them, but that doesn't make much sense to him (plus it's all very new), so he's confused. And he doesn't like pain for the sake of pain, I'm sure, but this is a give and take relationship. I'm actually very intersted to see what becomes of that aspect of this relationship at a later date. I like that Harry is willing to explore this side of him and to test his limits. I like that NEEDS something, and that this is the something that seems to to be working. Eventually, I can see Haarry being "normal" once again, or him and Draco coming out as an item (or whatever), or things going back to the way they were at the beginning of the story. Or, even, a million other possibilities! That's what I like most about your writing: you're keeping me guessing! ~dpa06~

Author's Response: They are both certainly in a plance of trying to figure out what they want and how to get it. They may get more than they bargained for.

Reviewer: darkpyroangel06 Signed
Date: 01/30/2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Beg For It

I'm glad he stopped. I was worried he'd force Harry into sex too fast too soon, and Harry would either freak out or accept it. I like that he stopped, and I love Harry's thought process, as always. He needs this, which is fine. To each his own. But he also needs the relationship aspect that comes with a sexual relationship. He wants to be dominated, sure. But he wants to feel good too. I love where this is going. You're an amazing writer. ~dpa06~

Reviewer: darkpyroangel06 Signed
Date: 01/30/2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Stretching

So jealous, so worried! I nearly laughed when I read that. I'm glad, though. Glad that it's affecting Draco as much as it's affecting Harry. I must admit, I like fics where one person dominates another for sheer sexual gratification. But the ones where a relationship blooms are amazing too. Especially the way you're writing it. It just seems... natural. Real, almost. I am a little worried for when someone finds out, especially since the end of this chapter was in the Quidditch stands, of all places. What if someone had caught them? I almost want them to be caught, so I can see others' reactions. But at the same time, it's too early in this relationship Draco and Harry have going. To be found out now would probably stop everything. I'm just excited to see where it goes! ~dpa06~

Reviewer: darkpyroangel06 Signed
Date: 01/30/2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Enduring

And the plot thickens. I love seeing them progress in this manner. Most people don't understand it, and (having not experienced it myself) even I can't fully understand it. But I can... see why someone would need it. I like the way they're progressing from master/slave to hurt/comfort, more or less. It's interesting the way it's changing them both. It's interesting to see how far Harry will let Malfoy go because he doesn't want to end everything. I like seeing this, I like seeing them grow as people even in this manner. Keep it up, seriously. ~dpa06~

Reviewer: darkpyroangel06 Signed
Date: 01/30/2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Kiss

Oh, bravo. /claps hands Seriously. I wanted something like this to happen, without evening knowing it! Something that would cause their relationship to change in such a significant way that they would both see it and remember it and come back to it time and time again. The amending of the order about the word and the quill is marvelous. And the bed. Oh. I really can't say anything more! It's just amazing! ~dpa06~

Reviewer: darkpyroangel06 Signed
Date: 01/30/2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Ready

Guh.

I love the juxtaposition of "They lay, cuddling of all things, in a tortue room." LOLz! That was perfect. And SO hot. I love everything about this chapter. It was amazing and a definite turning point in their relationship. Harry admiting he might be somewhat of an exhibitionist is interesting. I want to see where Draco will take that. And if that's where they'll get caught. ~dpa06~

Reviewer: darkpyroangel06 Signed
Date: 01/30/2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Melting

Very nice. The pleasure/pain of the wax is, once again, showing Harry how it can be and reassuring him that it's okay to be that way. I mean, after everything he's been through, I'd be more amazed if he were in a "normal" relationship. Also, thank you for clarifying that Ginny has moved on. I was really worried Harry was still with her while he was with Draco. I don't much care for fics of THAT nature. Still, excellent writing. Keep it up! ~dpa06~

Reviewer: darkpyroangel06 Signed
Date: 01/30/2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Tortured

Ouch. I mean... Just, ouch. I know Draco's scared, but Harry needed the dominance so bad. And then, it evolved into more. Still dominance, but also a relationship. Harry liked that, decided he needed that too. But it scares Draco. So he called it off. And now, now Harry is more lost than ever. Oh, ouch. ~dpa06~

Reviewer: darkpyroangel06 Signed
Date: 01/30/2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Falling

Wow! That was intense! I love how both of them had the same thoughts, mostly, but neither could say it. Draco was scared, and Harry had been rejected. And then when Draco called Harry the Golden Boy, I thought Harry would find his strength and throw Draco off him so he could swan dive out the window like he was originally planning to. And Draco's idea to both jump finally got him to say what he wanted to say. It was so intense. I was LITERALLY on the edge of my seat. Oh, amazing!

Reviewer: darkpyroangel06 Signed
Date: 01/31/2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Everything

Ah, a very nice chapter, indeed. I'm glad they talked. I'm glad they're willing to tell their closest friends. I'm very interested to see what reactions you give them. I can see anything from acceptance to congratulations to yelling to fainting to rejection. I mean, I've seen and read them all! And each is interesting in its own way. I want to see what you'll do, however. I love your writing. Keep it up! ~dpa06~

Reviewer: darkpyroangel06 Signed
Date: 02/02/2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Open

Ah, an excellent ending indeed. I am so happy I found this fic. I loved reading as you posted, eagerly awaiting the next chapter. I was happy that is was more than just PWP, as I do like some plot and whatnot. Their development as a couple was very interesting to watch, especially the last scene on the tower. Although I want to see where this goes, it's kind of nice to have it just end. That way, I can imagine my own ending in a sort of way. Very amazing writing. Absolutely amazing. ~dpa06~

Reviewer: darkpyroangel06 Signed
Date: 02/02/2010 Title: Chapter 14: Author's Notes for To Give Everything

Wow. The thought processes and the personal experiences that made this fic possble are amazing. I'm glad you're part of the real BDSM scene, which made this fic so much more realistic than most other BDSM fics. I did like the gradual relationship building, rather than the "I love you! Now spank me!" aspect. A secret crush is an interesting way to start such a fic, but this starter was so real and so much harder, I would think. Like you said, it's the reason it was so much longer. The emotional cues for each character are amazing, and you didn't come right out and explain each and every one. Draco's relationship with Severus, while heavily hinted at, was not outright clarified. The fear of being weak was obvious, but the reasons behind it were assumed and related to canon. Harry's absolute depression was built through the books, added upon in the beginning of your story by Ginny leaving him, and then almost tipped over the edge. That had to be my single favourite piece fo writing in HP fanfiction: the chapter on the tower when Harry is going to jump and Draco realizes he'd rather die with Harry than live without him. Your explanations behind the fic are just as amazing as the fic itself. Thank-you for sharing them. ~dpa06~