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One Month by Ginfan Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary: Tired of seeing the one’s they need to be whole with someone else a young witch and wizard take extreme measures to win them, and in the process, find something they didn’t plan on discovering.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Dean Thomas, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lavender Brown, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Erotica
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6397 Read Count: 4342
[Report This] Published: 03/08/2008 Updated: 03/20/2008
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 Signed star
Date: 03/23/2008 Title: Chapter 2: Acceptance

This was different, but to tell the truth it didn't make much sense to me.  How incredibly shallow and selfish could Harry and Hermione be?  To purposely break up relationships just so that they could turn around and cheat on these people they supposedly love and stole from someone else?  I think your writing ability is very good, but you created very unsympathetic characters that don't encourage a reader to connect with them.  Perhaps that's the point.