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At The Leaky by gingerale Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Neville thinks about Hannah's breasts and why she doesn't wipe down The Leaky's counter by magic.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Hannah Abbott, Neville Longbottom
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Minor Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2557 Read Count: 871
[Report This] Published: 03/26/2008 Updated: 03/26/2008
Reviewer: Dellaran Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03/26/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was a really nice surprise. After reading the tagline and even the first few paragraphs, I was expecting a lot more smut (which would have been ok), but instead, I find a small, sweet character study. You've done a great job of capturing Neville's complexity, as well as his basic decency, and you've fleshed out Hannah (no pun intended, really) into a real, believeable character I'd like to get to know better. Thank you for a great story!

Author's Response: And thank you for your great review!  I always blush when my stories are called "character studies."  I think it's because deep down, I know I write that way because I have not much imagination for plot! :D