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Choices of the Heart by luvscharlie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary: AU for what really happened in the tent after Ron returned to the Trio in Deathly Hallows.  You don't really think they just went to sleep, do you?
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Fluff, PWP, Romance
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, EWE, Het, Hurt/Comfort, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6545 Read Count: 4479
[Report This] Published: 04/24/2008 Updated: 04/24/2008
Reviewer: potterhead37 Signed
Date: 04/25/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That is very well done.  I love the possibility of it and the range of emotions.  Great descriptions and details!

Author's Response: Coming from the person who wrote Bedtime Stories, I am incredibly flattered.  Thanks for reading it and letting me know what you thought.  I've only been writing since February 2008 (and before that not since high school-- which was way too many moons ago), so it feels like I hang on every review.

Midnight Conspiracy by mapleandmahogany Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: No words are needed to convey desire in the middle of the night. -Trio-

Written for Quizzical.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Three of Hearts
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Ficlet, Fluff, Romance, Trio
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, EWE, Threesome
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 509 Read Count: 1106
[Report This] Published: 04/26/2008 Updated: 04/26/2008
Reviewer: potterhead37 Signed
Date: 04/27/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Midnight Conspiracy

"Ok..."  *snort*  Now there's a chore to concede to!  I also really like the "not purely industrial nudity" description.

The warmth and closeness this conveys are charming. 



Author's Response: He doesn't need to be talked into it, does he? :P Thank you! I was hoping it would be cozy.

Not a Memory Yet by risiepookie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 136]
Summary: In the months since the Battle of Hogwarts, Ron has been plagued with nightmares. Insecurities, doubts, and fears that were stirred up by wearing the locket Horcrux prevent him from moving forward. Can Hermione help save him from himself?

This fic is my submission for The Quidditch Pitch’s Ron-a-Thon silent auction. It was commissioned by the wonderful MrQuatto, who requested angst, smut, and Hermione finding out about Ron's Horcrux/locket experience and proving to him how wrong the locket was.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, RST, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28152 Read Count: 24110
[Report This] Published: 04/28/2008 Updated: 05/16/2008
Reviewer: potterhead37 Signed
Date: 04/30/2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Late Night Musings

Nicely done!  I like your Hermione, especially at the end of the chapter.  Go, girl, go!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!  I appreciate the thoughts and glad you liked Hermione.  :o)  *flan for you*

Reviewer: potterhead37 Signed
Date: 05/12/2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Patience is a Virtue

Oh wonderful!  I love, love, love your determined, proud, logical, and most of all lusty Hermione.  Very nicely done- and I cannot wait to see the consummation!  Your details are great, so I'm imagining a terrific resolution to all of this.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and your lovely compliments!  I'm really happy to hear you're enjoying the various aspects of Hermione. :o)  Last chapter will be up shortly.  Thanks again!  *strawberry tart for you*

Reviewer: potterhead37 Signed
Date: 05/16/2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Lost and Found

That was truly wonderful.  Great work.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm very glad you enjoyed it!  *chocolate dipped bananas for you*

All That We See Or Seem by IamShadow Rated: FG - Family Guidance starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Harry collapses after seeing his children off on the Hogwarts Express. When he awakes, things aren't as they were.


Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Madam Pomfrey, Remus Lupin, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Drama, General
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoilers for DH, Hurt/Comfort, Minor Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10884 Read Count: 8397
[Report This] Published: 05/06/2008 Updated: 05/17/2008
Reviewer: potterhead37 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/13/2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five: Can I Not Grasp

I've read through these first five chapters, and I must say that this is a very intriguing premise and beginning.  I like the pace and the details, and how they fit into Harry's p.o.v.  The short chapters work as you're updating so quickly, and so the suspense is building.  You've created a good amount of suspense so far, and I look forward to a great ride.


Author's Response: I seem to naturally write chapters that are between 1,000 and 2,500 words long. At least, that's what I've found with my WIPs. This is going up quickly, like Rubric Moments, my other chaptered story on here did, because I completed it before I started posting it anywhere. That allowed me to polish it and make sure it worked as a whole. I know most people would post an 11,000 word story as a one-shot, but when I read it through, it had natural breaking points, and a seven part story with short chapters is often more digestible for 'busy' readers than a long one-shot. I felt the breaks heightened the sense of Harry's progress, too. Each chapter highlighted a step forward in his recovery.

Midnight Feeding by luvscharlie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary: When Harry and Ginny Potter's seven month old son falls ill, Harry attempts the middle of the night feeding.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, James (younger) Potter
Genres: Erotica, General, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Minor Fluff, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1752 Read Count: 1759
[Report This] Published: 05/20/2008 Updated: 05/20/2008
Reviewer: potterhead37 Signed
Date: 05/21/2008 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Wonderful.  I love their interactions, they way they speak and care for one anther here.  Very well done.

Author's Response: I always love getting your reviews.  I love your writing so much, so to get a review from you is quite humbling.  Thank you.

Attack of the Fangirls by queenb23 Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: A not-so-ordinary day in the life of Ron Weasley opens his eyes.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Fred Weasley, George Weasley, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lavender Brown, Luna Lovegood, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Crack-Fic, Erotica
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: FemSlash, Masturbation, Public Sex, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Threesome
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3996 Read Count: 5866
[Report This] Published: 05/20/2008 Updated: 05/20/2008
Reviewer: potterhead37 Signed
Date: 05/21/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Attack of the Fangirls

What fun!  This was sexy and playful and purely enjoyable. Great job.

Author's Response:

Whoo hoo!!  *giggle*  I'm so thrilled that you liked it!! 

How Ginny Was Right by Tart Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Sometimes the hardest days can end in the most perfect nights.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Genres: Angst, Erotica, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Het, Major Fluff, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3464 Read Count: 2464
[Report This] Published: 05/23/2008 Updated: 05/26/2008
Reviewer: potterhead37 Signed
Date: 05/26/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is truly beautiful.  It's sweet and sexy, and I think you capture Harry's reaction to such news wonderfully.  Great job!


Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really happy that you liked it :o)

A Bad Book by mapleandmahogany Rated: FG - Family Guidance starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary: "Is this the moment? Oi! There's a war going on here!" … Life with Ron and Hermione never gets easier for Harry.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, General, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Het
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2084 Read Count: 3952
[Report This] Published: 05/24/2008 Updated: 05/24/2008
Reviewer: potterhead37 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/26/2008 Title: Chapter 1: A Bad Book

I love this!  Really brilliant.  This line had me in stitches: "She went on about me being a chauvinist something or other, and some bit about me taking her shoes, next thing. Harry, I never said a word about taking her shoes away!"  Very, very fitting, very funny, and very sweet.

Author's Response: Hee - yay! Can't you just see Ron boggling over Muggle hang ups like that? Thank you so much!

Desheret by RedSioda Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: The time has come. It has been a hundred or three hundred years I have waited for a son to take. This chamber will be reopened. I feel magic swirling near me… masculine, one of strangers.

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An unlikely narrator recounts one of Bill Weasley's curse-breaking assignments in Egypt.
Categories: Bad Moon Rising > War and Peace
Characters: Bill Weasley, Charlie Weasley, OFC
Genres: Action/Adventure, Erotica
Time Period: Next Generation
Warnings: Alternate Universe
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5937 Read Count: 1787
[Report This] Published: 05/26/2008 Updated: 05/26/2008
Reviewer: potterhead37 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/26/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fantastic!  So incredibly hot and powerful.  I love the seduction, the sexuality and power, the ego and the cleverness.  Great,great work!


Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and for your kind words! I'm happy you enjoyed it - it was very much fun to research, to write and to give. :)

Watching Ron by risiepookie Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Watching Ron eat is an indecent act. Little does he know, he has an audience. Written for TQP's Gluttony Challenge for June 2008.

 

Gluttony Challenge winner for Watching Ron

 


Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Fluff
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoilers for DH, EWE
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2008-06) Gluttony Challenge
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2008-06) Gluttony Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1708 Read Count: 2137
[Report This] Published: 06/10/2008 Updated: 06/10/2008
Reviewer: potterhead37 Signed
Date: 06/11/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Watching Ron (One-Shot)

Oh so sensually lovely!  The gender ambiguity of the narration is a nice touch, and Ginny's implied approval is good to read.  The frustrating thing is that we now all have banger envy, too!


Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it, especially the gender ambiguity... did you figure out who the narrator was at the end?  Banger envy is sweeping the nation!  LOL.  :o)  *brownies for you*

Waiting In Line by thesteppyone Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary: Past Featured StoryAfter the Battle, Ron is missing. Hermione finds him trying to gather his thoughts, but he can't get past his first reactions after the explosion that killed his brother. Guilt is a strange thing.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > From Diagon Alley to Hogwarts
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Tragedy
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoilers for DH
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2223 Read Count: 2405
[Report This] Published: 06/11/2008 Updated: 06/11/2008
Reviewer: potterhead37 Signed
Date: 06/11/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Waiting In Line

Very touching story.  Their interactions are wonderful, and the emotions rendered come across as very real.  Nice work!


Author's Response:

Thank you, I wanted the confusion and uncertainty to be the main focus without being over the top or fake, so I'm glad you thought they came across as real. :D

Thanks for reviewing!

It Has To Be The Nargles by shieldmaiden Rated: FG - Family Guidance [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Summary: When Dean Thomas suddenly kisses her in the front garden, Luna Lovegood is convinced that he must be under the influence of the Nargles.
Prompt: Something absurd happens with one of Luna's magical creatures.
Author's Notes: Written for Luna's month at [info]helmet_fest2008. Special thanks to [info]oncelikeshari for her description of the Devon coastline. This is the second story your landscape descriptions have helped me with:)
Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: Dean Thomas, Luna Lovegood
Genres: Drama, Ficlet, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Het
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 733 Read Count: 377
[Report This] Published: 06/14/2008 Updated: 06/14/2008
Reviewer: potterhead37 Signed
Date: 06/15/2008 Title: Chapter 1: It Has To Be The Nargles

Very sweet!  Poor Luna- assuming the nargles were at work!  This makes me very happy for her.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

A Magical Renaissance by BrandedFaithfully Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 276]
Summary: Hermione goes through an emotional and magical Renaissance in a race against time to save her life.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance, Tragedy
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 270837 Read Count: 130047
[Report This] Published: 06/14/2008 Updated: 12/27/2009
Reviewer: potterhead37 Signed
Date: 06/15/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Confections of a Broken Heart

Very strong start.  Good characterization and details.  I look forward to more.

Author's Response: Dear potterhead37, Thanks so much for your comments.  I'll keep trying my best!