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Play for Keeps by Lani Rated: FG - Family Guidance [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Lily Evans lived in a simple, logical world until a boy—almost man—that she knew before only as ‘Potter’ showed her how complicated life could actually be.
Categories: Bad Moon Rising > School Days
Characters: James Potter, Lily Evans Potter
Genres: Angst, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2589 Read Count: 757
[Report This] Published: 10/20/2007 Updated: 10/20/2007
Reviewer: tjwritter Signed
Date: 11/21/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was beautiful! I like the idea that it was their mutual love and protection of Sirius and Remus that finally got those two crazy kids together!!

Phoenix Tears by madam_minnie Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Past Featured StoryThere is a pain that even a Phoenix tears can not heal
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Drabbles
Characters: Albus Dumbledore, Gellert Grindelwald, Lily Potter, Severus Snape
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Tragedy
Time Period: Voldemort Vanishes
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoilers for DH
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 156 Read Count: 1016
[Report This] Published: 10/20/2007 Updated: 10/20/2007
Reviewer: tjwritter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/21/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Phoenix Tears

Oh, I just can't help it, a tearful Snape just breaks my heart a little bit!! Great job!!

Master of the Game by TheWarSausage Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Old were his hands and gnarled, yet tough like tree roots, twisting in dark and secret places. Still nimble, his fingers picked up a knight, lingering over its finely crafted features of witchwood and ebony.

“Do you know why they call it the Game of Kings?”

His face, a black silhouette before the pale winter light, falling through high, dusty windows. Silence pooled in the shadows like dark water undisturbed for centuries. Every whisper a sacrilege in this place of watching ghosts.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Dungeon, The Broomshed > Dark Side, The Broomshed > Self Pleasure, The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Alastor Moody, Amelia Bones, Arthur Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Igor Karkaroff, Kingsley Shacklebolt, Lucius Malfoy, Neville Longbottom, OFC, OMC, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley, Rufus Scrimgeour, Seamus Finnigan, Severus Snape
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Comedy, Darkfic, Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Time Period: Post-War, Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, BDSM, Bondage, Character Death, Drug Usage, Graphic Violence, Het, Hurt/Comfort, Love/Hate, Minor Character Death, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Threesome
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19234 Read Count: 3496
[Report This] Published: 10/27/2007 Updated: 11/06/2007
Reviewer: tjwritter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/05/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Hour of the Wolf

What a great beginning! And such a cliff-hanger!! I love your Ron and Seamus and the humor they inject in this powerfully detailed war you have created. I love the world you have build around the canon and made it your own and yet very similiar to what is familiar! Great job!!

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words, lady most fair and gentle. Getting reviews from your beta is kind like kissing your sister, but it's good to know that someone is reading and enjoying this. If it's really any good then because you helped to make it so.

Reviewer: tjwritter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/06/2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: My enemy, my friend

King of the cliff hanger strikes again!! Bastard!! More please...

The Eternal Kiss by madam_minnie Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Had he listened to his sister’s warnings about the man he’d fallen deeply in love with, he may have been able to change things. Had he not fallen in love with his best friend… perhaps… things may have been different.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Aberforth Dumbledore, Albus Dumbledore, Ariana Dumbledore, Gellert Grindelwald
Genres: Angst, Tragedy
Time Period: Grindelwald
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 961 Read Count: 1632
[Report This] Published: 10/27/2007 Updated: 10/27/2007
Reviewer: tjwritter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/28/2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Eternal Kiss

This is such a great slice of Albus's life and love. I love the last lines, that even with as much as they had been through, it is immortality that binds them together.

There are also some amazing parallels in this to Harry and Voldemort and of Dumbledore and Tom Riddle. I especially saw it in the calm way that Albus faced Gellert in the beginnings of their 1945 struggle.

Beatifully done. It was a pleasure to read, repeatedly!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for helping me shape this ficlet. I struggled greatly with it, for many reasons, the majority of that being my muse's inability to cooperate when I need her most.

I can see parallels to Snape and Lily more than I can with Harry and Voldemort simply because of the underlying message that love can be such a powerful entity it can edify or destroy you. Harry used love to defeat Voldemort who could not understand love and never experienced it. Dumbledore defeated Grindelwald, I believe, the same way, only his love kept him from destroying him. He could not detroy that which embodied the power that Dumbledore came to realize was greater than any Elder Wand or Wizarding Supremacy. Such a tragic past, he deserved happiness. He deserved a happily ever after and dammit... he deserved some Gellert action! ;)

Thank you thank you thank you for all your help with this fic! You rock my DD woolly socks! :* 

Team Support by rospberry Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Harry's front page news again. (Oliver/Cedric/Harry implied SLASH depending on your POV.)
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Drabbles
Characters: Cedric Diggory, Harry Potter, Oliver Wood, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Drabble
Time Period: Next Generation
Warnings: Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 269 Read Count: 536
[Report This] Published: 10/28/2007 Updated: 10/29/2007
Reviewer: tjwritter Signed
Date: 11/11/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Team Support

Ohhh, Harry and his LOVE of Quidditch!! This was so funny! Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it *grin*.

Restlessness by queenb23 Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Ron suffers his worst nightmare.
Categories: The Broomshed > Drabbles
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Erotica
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 652 Read Count: 1391
[Report This] Published: 10/29/2007 Updated: 11/01/2007
Reviewer: tjwritter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/11/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Restlessness

Poor Ron! This is exactly what have been in the book if it weren't for those damned kids reading!! Thanks for giving this!

Author's Response: Oh gosh, thank you so much!!  Knowing how passionate Ron is, I just can't believe that he didn't dream about things like this nonstop while wearing that locket.

Hot, Wet and Bothered by madam_minnie Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: When what you want so desperately falls on your lap, what do you do?
Categories: Remains of the Day > Drabbles
Characters: Harry Potter, Sirius Black
Genres: Drabble, PWP
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Frottage, Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 621 Read Count: 562
[Report This] Published: 10/29/2007 Updated: 10/29/2007
Reviewer: tjwritter Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/30/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Hot, Wet and Bothered

Ohhh DAMN!! Love the build up and the delivery...oh yes the delivery!!

Author's Response: Gotta have the delivery, you know! And it's not delivery... it's DiHarry! Ha! [/lame joke]

When Lightning Strikes by Tart Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary: This was my submission for the harry_and_ron First Line Challenge.

My prompt was: He stared at it, sure it was entirely too big.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Fluff, PWP, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: EWE, Minor Fluff, Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 947 Read Count: 744
[Report This] Published: 10/30/2007 Updated: 11/01/2007
Reviewer: tjwritter Signed
Date: 11/11/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I remember reading this at LJ...but I just had to read it again because I love your Ron here, I love the relationship that he and Hermione obviously have and I love the tattoo...how could Harry NOT be turned on by that!! Good job!!



Author's Response: I know I'd be turned on if it was MY name on that gorgeous body. LoL. Thanks so much! I had a lot of fun writing this and I'm really glad you enjoyed it :o)

Vengeance is Mine by oldenuf2nobetter Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Some things are simply unforgiveable.
Categories: Dark Tales > Going Under
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Dudley Dursley, Petunia Dursley, Ron Weasley, Vernon Dursley
Genres: Angst, Darkfic, Drama
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Character Death, Strong Language, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1692 Read Count: 1400
[Report This] Published: 10/30/2007 Updated: 10/30/2007
Reviewer: tjwritter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/11/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Vengeance is Mine

OH MY GOD!! This was fantastic! I am so glad I took time out of my day for this! I love the repeatition of "Not so much now," and how you used it again so powerfully in the last line. I'm so glad that you made that almost sadisctic act pay off with the revelations of what had happened to Harry due to the Dursley's abuse! I really thought this was a bit of perfection. With pieces like this, I might actaully warm to the little ferret! Keep it up!

Author's Response: It is my goal in life to 'de-ferret' Draco for all and sundry.  I used to hate him, too, but sort of fell in love with him because of Samayel and SilentAuror and some other phenomenal writers.  I'm so glad that you liked this!  Thanks!

Perfect by robin777 Rated: MT - Mature Themes [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Bill takes Fleur on their honeymoon and pampers her.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Bill Weasley, Fleur Delacour
Genres: Romance
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1082 Read Count: 381
[Report This] Published: 11/02/2007 Updated: 11/02/2007
Reviewer: tjwritter Signed
Date: 11/11/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lovely moment! Thank you for sharing!

Bad Dog by rospberry Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Padfoot has been a bad dog. (Sirius/Remus implied SLASH)
Categories: Bad Moon Rising > Drabbles
Characters: Remus Lupin, Sirius Black
Genres: Comedy, Drabble
Time Period: Next Generation
Warnings: Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96 Read Count: 726
[Report This] Published: 11/03/2007 Updated: 11/03/2007
Reviewer: tjwritter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/05/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Bad Dog

Ohhhh, Padfoot fetch! Me likey!! I love Playful!Sirius! Great drabble!!

Author's Response: Yay, thanks!

Surprise Visit by coffee_n_cocoa Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Ron thought he was spending another dull evening alone at his flat.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Ficlet, PWP
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: EWE, Slash, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 619 Read Count: 628
[Report This] Published: 11/03/2007 Updated: 11/03/2007
Reviewer: tjwritter Signed
Date: 11/11/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very enjoyable! Great portrayal of boredom and really good payoff in the end!

Have A Little Faith by tqpannie Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Ron realizes they have to let Harry go.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast, Hallowed Halls > From Diagon Alley to Hogwarts
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Drama, General
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Angst
Series: The Faith Series
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1280 Read Count: 1017
[Report This] Published: 11/04/2007 Updated: 11/04/2007
Reviewer: tjwritter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/11/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Damn you!! You should call this "Tear your Heart Out in 2,000 Words or Less"

Just when I thought I was all cried out about that dammed book! Good job!!



Author's Response: OOh thank you!

Breathe by kaalee Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Past Featured Story[Harry/Draco] Harry steals into Draco's room at night. Why?
Categories: Dark Tales > Going Under
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: Darkfic
Time Period: None
Warnings: Dub-Con
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1439 Read Count: 3508
[Report This] Published: 11/05/2007 Updated: 11/05/2007
Reviewer: tjwritter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/18/2007 Title: Chapter 1: breathe

That was truly amazing!! I like a sleeping, silent Draco the best!! Just kidding! But I truly do love the obsession that Harry feels and loves the 11 breaths motif!! Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'm glad you thought it was well done!

~kaalee