Penname: Callum James [Contact] Real name: Callum James
Member Since: 05/25/2007
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Across the Line by kerryblaze Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary: After an argument, a drunk Ron shows up at Harry's flat.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: None
Genres: Erotica
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Slash, Strong Sexual Content, Strong Language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3491 Read Count: 1850
[Report This] Published: 10/22/2005 Updated: 10/22/2005
Reviewer: Callum James Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/31/2007 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

I love stories that deal with the line between attraction and fear and you did this just so perfectly. You've written a really startling little piece which could have ended up being a very straightforward sex scene but which, with minumum fuss you've put in a context which provides fully rounded characters, backstory and, most importantly, reads as true, psychologically (and physiologically!). Wonderful stuff. And, of course, kick-ass arousing as well which is something reviewers don't comment on enough and shouldn't be taken for granted (IMHO!)