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Wake Me by risiepookie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 173]
Summary: In the midst of the War, Hermione is kidnapped and held captive as Ron, Harry and Ginny search desperately for her. Hermione and Ron share a psychic connection, with which she tries to help him find her before it is too late.

A strong warning for this story, as it does contain the rape of a character and severe psychological trauma.

*This is the first story in my Awakenings Series*
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Darkfic, Drama, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Het, Rape, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52346 Read Count: 16509
[Report This] Published: 08/23/2006 Updated: 08/23/2007
Reviewer: jknoll81 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/18/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Forcibly Taken

Fabulous as usual!

 

The end of each chapter keeps me yearning for more, but especially Chapter 9!  I can't wait for more!

 

Keep up the brilliant work!



Author's Response:

I can't believe you finally finished!  Good timing, considering the next chapter will go up very soon.  I can't wait to hear what you thought about everything. 

::smoochies::  Thanks, honey!  *creme brulee for you*

Reviewer: jknoll81 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/28/2007 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Finally Woken

Damn you and you cliffhanger endings!  LOL  It's like watching Alias, but so much worse because there's much more than a week between these "episodes"!  :o)

I love how you've captured Hermione's struggle to differentiate between dreams and reality as a side effect of her torture and resulting PTSD.  A very interesting and imaginative avenue to take!

Also, as usual the vivid and colorful pictures you paint with words are exquisite even when the picture is not a "pretty" one.

I eagerly look forward to the next painting!



Author's Response:

Hehe- you would compare it to Alias!  I'm going to take that as a compliment, since you love Alias so much!! 

I'm glad you enjoyed the confusing and blurry moments of Hermione trying to distinguish reality and come back to herself.  She's got a long road, but I've got a couple tricks up my sleeve!

Thank you so much for your lovely compliments.  I'm blushing and I'm so happy you enjoyed it.  Your opinion means an awful lot to me.  ::big hugs::  *Ben and Jerry's Cinnamon Bun ice cream to you*

If a Man Answers by risiepookie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 218]
Summary: When Ron comes back after two years, he dreads another man answering Hermione's door in the middle of the night. He certainly didn't expect the other man to be Harry. Jealousy, sex, betrayal, confusion, and heartache ensue.  Unfortunately, all is not as it should be and Ron must survive the unexpected consequences of his return, including broken relationships and promises.

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Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40051 Read Count: 30012
[Report This] Published: 08/27/2006 Updated: 04/21/2008
Reviewer: jknoll81 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/19/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Finally Home

You've ensnared me once again.  Although I'm a bit confused at Harry's answering the door and then Ron and Hermione ending up in the bedroom together...  However, I have a few ideas where you could be going with it!  :o)

As usual your choice of adjectives and descriptions are extremely vivid.  I enjoy that about your writing.

No complaints on this chapter… On to the next!



Author's Response:

Hi sweetie!  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.  You were meant to be confused- and probably will be for a good amount of the upcoming chapters.  It's all in the unfolding... 

Thank you very much for the compliments and taking the time to read/review.  Very appreciated!  And I'm glad you're finidng it well-written as well. :o) *creme brulee for you* 

Reviewer: jknoll81 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/19/2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Revelations

I love the flashback moments intertwined with the story.  Adds a nice element and flow to the reading.

5 words: "I licked it, it's mine."  LMAO! :o)

A little too much "smut" in this chapter for me, but that's my issue not yours.  LOL!  Great job!



Author's Response:

Another one in the same day- I'm being spoiled!  Glad you enjoyed the flashbacks, I quite enjoyed that part as well.  LMAO with you at the "I licked it, it's mine."  OMO.  :o)  I totally thought of you when I wrote that- err, you know what I mean!  Sorry there was too much smut for you... 

Thanks again for reading and reviewing- it means so much to me, my sweet.  ::hugs::  *chocolate-covered cheesecake for you* 

The Sneeze by risiepookie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
Summary: "Your problem," kiss, "is that you're thinking about it too much. You have to let it come naturally and then just let go."

Hermione has to sneeze, but some things she just can't force, try as she may.  Ron lends a helping hand by showing her the fun in patiently waiting for release. 

Not much plot, just an excuse for smut and spewing of random facts about sneezes.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Fluff
Time Period: None
Warnings: Major Fluff, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2744 Read Count: 2849
[Report This] Published: 11/13/2006 Updated: 11/14/2006
Reviewer: jknoll81 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/13/2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Sneeze

Ah Yes, the theory on the direct correlation between how people sneeze and how they orgasm!  I can tell you had a lot of fun writing this one. Once again your descriptiveness was superb!  I truly enjoy your writing style as it keeps the reader engaged and doesn’t bore or allow the mind to wander.  Kudos!  I can’t wait to finish reading “Wake Me”.

Author's Response: Jeff!  You read my smut and didn't pass out or die from embarrassment!  ::happy dance::  Well, you and I both seem to have the unfortunate problem of remembering a lot of this stuff when we hear somebody sneeze.  I'm so glad that you enjoyed it and I can't wait to hear what you think about Wake Me!!!  Thanks for reading and reviewing- I really appreciate it!  *caramel flan for you*

Having Another Go by risiepookie Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary: “I always thought I would be your first.”
“You were.”
“But I don’t remember any of it.”
“Not my problem, Ronald.”

Ron wants Hermione to give him another shot at something very intimate, but she's resisting him. What will it take for her to give in?
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Ficlet, Fluff
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het, Major Fluff, Strong Language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1830 Read Count: 2063
[Report This] Published: 03/15/2007 Updated: 03/16/2007
Reviewer: jknoll81 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/13/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Having Another Go (One Shot)

I love your writing!  And, I must say, with my NC-17 rated mind I DID NOT think he was talking about wanting to braid her hair!  LOL  I realize that was the point, but you did a fabulous job of concealing it and keeping us in suspense until the last moment to expose their true activity.  Keep it up!  You’re style is wonderful!

Author's Response: Wow, Jeff, spoiling me with two reviews in one day!  I knew you, with your totally dirty mind, would be running around the gutter.  Glad you enjoyed it and I kept you in suspense until the end.  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing- you can't possibly know what it means to me to have you support this part of my life!  *deep fried cinnamon ice cream for you*

Stronger Than Me by risiepookie Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 28]
Summary: Past Featured Story“Please,” he says huskily, “I want you so bad,” and he kisses her again. A sob catches in my throat as the angry tears begin their rise again. He’s never said those words to me and I can’t help but feel she has stolen words she has no right to.

She watches and she tries to understand why she wasn't enough for Ron.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Vacant Rooms
Characters: Hermione Granger, Lavender Brown, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Het
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2732 Read Count: 5630
[Report This] Published: 08/13/2007 Updated: 08/13/2007
Reviewer: jknoll81 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/18/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Stronger Than Me

Bravo!

 

You always seem to capture the emotions so vividly and accurately.  It's as if I were the narrator.  Love it!

 

XOXOOX



Author's Response:

Thanks, hon!

I'm so glad you enjoyed it and that it felt genuine and plausible to you.  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing- I really appreciate it!  ::hugs::  *creme caramel for you*

None for Me, Thank You by risiepookie Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary: Past Featured StoryI’ve looked for pink lines, double blue lines, and blue crosses.  Sometimes life doesn't happen as planned and hidden grief surfaces at the worst possible time.  
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, Het
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1500 Read Count: 3340
[Report This] Published: 04/15/2008 Updated: 04/15/2008
Reviewer: jknoll81 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/28/2008 Title: Chapter 1: None for Me, Thank You (One Shot)

A very touching story.  You're so wonderful for writing this for your friend to help them through their similar situation.  :o)

Author's Response: ::squishes you::  Thank you, hon, for reading and reviewing.  I'm so glad it touched you.  Our mutual friend was quite happy with it.  *caramel flan for you*

Not a Memory Yet by risiepookie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 136]
Summary: In the months since the Battle of Hogwarts, Ron has been plagued with nightmares. Insecurities, doubts, and fears that were stirred up by wearing the locket Horcrux prevent him from moving forward. Can Hermione help save him from himself?

This fic is my submission for The Quidditch Pitch’s Ron-a-Thon silent auction. It was commissioned by the wonderful MrQuatto, who requested angst, smut, and Hermione finding out about Ron's Horcrux/locket experience and proving to him how wrong the locket was.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, RST, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28152 Read Count: 24244
[Report This] Published: 04/28/2008 Updated: 05/16/2008
Reviewer: jknoll81 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/14/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - In the Deep of the Night

A wonderful setup!  I can’t wait to read more.  It proves to be interesting.  :oD

Author's Response: Yay, you're reading it!  Thanks so much, doll, I can't wait to see what you think of the rest.  :o)  *caramel flan for you*

Living the Dream by risiepookie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary: Hermione is distracted and a potion goes wrong, resulting in the best possible mistake... but is it really?
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Erotica
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Minor Fluff, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2477 Read Count: 2955
[Report This] Published: 04/29/2008 Updated: 04/29/2008
Reviewer: jknoll81 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/14/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Living the Dream (One-Shot)

Very nice!  As usual the effectiveness of your imagery is astounding!  Also, from the title I knew it was most likely a dream, but had no clue you were going to “zap” us back to where you did when she awoke!  I liked it! :o)

Author's Response: Oh, I'm so happy you liked it!  I figured you of all people would know I'm evil and made it a dream, but I thought the placement might catch you off-guard.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, hon, I really appreciate it!  ::snuggles::  *bread pudding for you*

Mixed Signals by risiepookie Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Ron knew it was wrong, but that didn't stop him from needing her.  One-shot. 

 


Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity, Remains of the Day > Three of Hearts
Characters: Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst
Time Period: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Strong Language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1290 Read Count: 1073
[Report This] Published: 07/02/2009 Updated: 07/02/2009
Reviewer: jknoll81 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/02/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Mixed Signals (One Shot)

Wonderful!  I love the pollyjuice twist!  :o)