Ron and Hermione are in a rut until Hermione comes up with a plan to spice things up and hopefully save their relationship.
I have enjoyed most all your writing till I got to this chapter. In it Hermione seems to be vindictive rather than seductive and I feel that Ron though he likes her bossy would not like a version of Bellatrix in his bedroom, so for every thing else you wrote I can give you 10/10, but for this chapter I'm not even sure if I can give more than 6/10. Sorry but Hermione trying to force him to tell a lie dont wash.
Author's Response: Well, you are certainly entitled to your opinion, but I think you missed what she was trying to do. She was not trying to force him to tell a LIE but to tell what she thought was the TRUTH. It was written very clearly that she was having a hard time doing it, but she was desperate to get what she thought was the truth out of him. To compare what she did to Bellatrix is a bit extreme since she LOVES Ron and was not at all trying to hurt him. I don't think I've ever had anyone read that chapter and see Hermione's actions as sadistic and cruel because that is what Bellatrix is. Ron was enjoying it until he realized that there was a deeper issue. (Believe me, what she was doing is not very painful for a man, more frustrating) However, the fact that you don't like it is fine with me. I know it's not for everyone. I just don't agree with you comparing Hermione to Bellatrix. I still thank you for your review, not every one has to be stellar and not every chapter has to be a fan favorite. I happen to love this story since it's the first one I ever wrote, but I especially love the final chapter.
Great story, plenty of passion in the love scenes, Oh I would just like to say that girls in Brittain are concidered mature enough for sex if they so desire, in fact unlike in some countries they are considered as adults in every thing but the electoral vote. Apart from that slight error and the usual crickets (dont hear them over here) this is one heck of a tale. 9/10
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I did mention in another review that the legal age for consent is 16 in the UK even if its not enforced and you don't hear crickets? Not even in the country? Well that's just aweful! LOL. Just kidding, I couldn't imagine that you wouldn't have crickets so i that's all the errors I have well, then I'll take it!
Boy I would not like to be in that Dixons shoes, does the plonker not know this is Hermione Granger member of the golden trio, the one that was with the destroyer of Voldemort. How could she be thick enough to not take Harry's previous warning serious.
Excellent chapter and I now eagerly await the next one.
Well as I said before this is one heck of a good story and so well written. I enjoyed each and every line from beginning to end... (btw I'm quite glad we don't have crickets over here. just peace and quiet)... 10/10 for the last chapter
Author's Response: Thank you for the 10/10! I'm glad you enjoyed it...and are you sure there isn't one cricket in the whole entire England? That's how you know it's summer and peaceful...the crickets will be churping a lovely song-LOL
Where oh where is the next chapter, I keep looking only to be disapointed. please update this brill story
Author's Response: I'm finishing up the new chapter this weekend. I intend to post it ASAP.
Hermione? with her principles going at it with out feeling. sorry but it just doesn't work, sorry but I did not think you gave enough detail in the story about how or any other reason why she would marry one guy and screw another a few mins later
Author's Response:
I know. I really wanted to try Hermione out in a new light. Every other one of my stories holds her true to what she believes in but I wanted to move away from that.
Jessica.
Excellent full of feeling and extremely well written. I await the next chapter with eagerness, please update asap.
I hope this is not going to turn into one of those horror stories that seem so prevalent because it is good to reaad about Hermione and Ron's love. and I want to know more about the baby.