Penname: oldenuf2nobetter [Contact] Real name: barbara
Member Since: 02/28/2007
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What Dreams May Come by Tart Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: It's a busy weekend at the Burrow. A wedding is taking place. And Ron is trying to figure out how, exactly, to tell Hermione he's loved her for a decade.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13456 Read Count: 5233
[Report This] Published: 06/23/2007 Updated: 06/23/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/24/2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Is there anything sexier than a sweaty Quidditch player?  Not that I can think of....

 This is wonderful, dear.  Truly.  How nice to read a fic that takes JKR's wonderful people, just as they are, and grows them up into people we recognize!  I love twisting them up as much as the next person (something you may have guessed) and I'm a huge slash fan.  But this...this is just perfect.  It gives us Ron and Hermione and Ginny and Harry as we hope Jo does, with the chance to grow and love and have lives that repay them for everything that they've had to go through.  Thank you for this!  I've enjoyed it so much.

And if you don't mind, I'd like to recommend it on my LiveJournal.  Let me know if that's okay with You! 



Author's Response:

Holy cow Barbara! I totally was not expecting 4 WONDERFUL reviews from you. Thank you, thank you and THANK YOU! You know I'm one of your biggest fans so coming from you it really means a lot. I'm so pleased that you liked it as this was my very first foray into fanfiction. I wrote it last year and it was originally archived at Checkmated. Yes you can recommend it to anyone you like!  Again, thank you SO much for the wonderful reviews. It warms my heart, it really does.

Oh and please please please tell me that the next installment of Now and Then will be up soon! I'm dying here!

Can't Take the Sky by Cluegirl Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: One thing Dumbledore never told Harry about horcruxes, is that they are harder to destroy than to create. When things to wrong, he must learn to rely on the last person he ever thought he'd trust.
Categories: The Broomshed > Dark Side
Characters: Harry Potter, Severus Snape
Genres: Darkfic, Drama, Horror
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Graphic Violence, Hurt/Comfort, Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59621 Read Count: 3898
[Report This] Published: 06/26/2007 Updated: 06/26/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/10/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh.  Wow.  This is awful, and devastating...and quite heartbreakingly beautiful.  I have tears in my eyes.  I'm not a huge fan of this pairing ordinarily, but dear God, this is stunning.  Bravo.

Summary: A bit of wrestling, not a lot of clothing and some Truth or Dare leave Seamus wondering: "exactly how long can a friendship survive after you've touched each other's cock?" [Seamus/Dean]
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Dean Thomas, Seamus Finnigan
Genres: Erotica, Ficlet, PWP
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1131 Read Count: 1037
[Report This] Published: 07/06/2007 Updated: 07/06/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed
Date: 07/06/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lovely.  Vey sexy, and Seamus' inner dialouge is a hoot.  I enjoyed this alot. 

Author's Response: I'm so pleased you enjoyed -- thank you so much! <3

I Was Walking With a Ghost by rhichi Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: He's gone, she's alone, and the poor child will grow up without knowing a father's touch. Is this all true...or might there be some hope?
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Neville Longbottom, Ron Weasley
Genres: Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Contains Spoiler for HBP
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3410 Read Count: 1485
[Report This] Published: 07/08/2007 Updated: 09/09/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/08/2007 Title: Chapter 1: I Was Walking With a Ghost

Oh.  Oh my.  

This is heartbreaking.  Beautifully written, incredibly moving.  You did a lovely job with this.  It made me teary. 

Impenetrable Bond by madam_minnie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: In the bonds of love, all things are possible
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Sirius Black, Remus Lupin
Genres: Erotica
Time Period: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3600 Read Count: 465
[Report This] Published: 07/25/2007 Updated: 07/25/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/25/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Impenetrable Bond

Oh, reading this again was lovely.  It's so good, Minns, it really is.


Author's Response: Thanks for all your help with it!

Pure Semantics by Samayel Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: Past Featured StoryIt all hangs on the definition of a word. Theo gets a lesson in semantics from Draco, and Draco gets exactly what he wants.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Nott Sr, Harry Potter
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Fluff, General
Time Period: None
Warnings: Slash, Strong Language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1275 Read Count: 1286
[Report This] Published: 07/26/2007 Updated: 07/26/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/27/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lovely.  Enjoyed this immensely.  Love his description of he difference between a dick, and a cock.  And doesn't everyone what one of those?  

Author's Response: It's a marvelous thing to have...and hold :-) lol. Thanks love :-) I just felt like playing on definitions in my own way...glad the result amuses! Peace and Love, Samayel

Same Time Next Year by tqpannie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: DH-Spoilers There were other stolen moments but these were the ones that were special.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Rimming, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2279 Read Count: 472
[Report This] Published: 07/26/2007 Updated: 07/26/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/28/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lovely, annie.  Really lovely.

A Few Lines More by wolfiekins Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: 1st September, 2017: Let's hang out on Platform 9 3/4 for just a little bit longer, shall we? Post-DH.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Fluff, General, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: EWE, Het, Minor Fluff, Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1956 Read Count: 1855
[Report This] Published: 07/28/2007 Updated: 07/28/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/28/2007 Title: Chapter 1: One

Oh, I love this!  this is perfect.  I can just see them, buzzing the train, the kids all pressed against the windows!  Brilliant!

Author's Response:

Wow, that's so cool you have that image, because it's one that struck me, too!  I haven't a clue why, but with all the talk of driving in the Epilogue, something just popped:  Anglia!  

Thanks so very much...I'm thrilled you enjoyed it so! 

Not At All Like a Sister by simons_flower Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: Being on watch in October is cold and lonely for Harry until Hermione checks up on him.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger
Genres: Angst, Erotica, PWP
Time Period: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Contains Spoilers for DH, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1510 Read Count: 1665
[Report This] Published: 08/04/2007 Updated: 08/04/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/04/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ah, this is terrific. And very believable, I think. While I was reading Deathly Hallows, and Ron was gone, I knew Jo wouldn't give the H/HR shippers what they wanted, not completely, but there was the teasing hint that she 'could' have. Nice of you to actually do it!

Author's Response: Thanks! I think part of the Horcrux hunt and the destruction of the locket was a snub for the H/Hr shippers, but I can live with that. Glad you enjoyed it!

Comes My Way by unbroken_halo Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: Harry takes Sirius for a ride, who takes Harry for a ride.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Sirius Black
Genres: Erotica, Ficlet, PWP
Time Period: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Public Sex, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1366 Read Count: 1440
[Report This] Published: 08/06/2007 Updated: 08/06/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed
Date: 08/06/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooooo, sky smex!

I love the premise; sex on an invisible motorcycle, hovering in a night sky. Lovely. And after watching 'Harry' and 'Sirius' in OOTP, there's kind of a nice mental visual to go with it! I enjoyed this very much.

Author's Response: Thanks! There\'s just something about men and motorcycles, LOL!

Choices by madam_minnie Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: Had Remus known that Severus had lost as much as he the night of Sirius' betrayal?
Categories: Bad Moon Rising > Drabbles
Characters: Remus Lupin, Severus Snape
Genres: Drabble
Time Period: Voldemort Vanishes
Warnings: Angst
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 237 Read Count: 456
[Report This] Published: 08/12/2007 Updated: 08/12/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/12/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Choices

A creative little blip of a moment that you absolutely know happened, completely in canon and yet unseen.  Perfect.

Author's Response: Aww thanks babe! These little drabbles help, I think, in getting my muse back to where she needs to be. And Remus, I think is the catalyst for all my writing.

Breathing Through by mapleandmahogany, Quizzical Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: Ron held them both, as best he could around her expanded frame, pulling Harry close to Hermione's body. Ron whispered words of support onto her neck, placing kisses behind her earlobe. She arched her head back, letting herself drown in their touch.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Three of Hearts
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Erotica, Romance, Trio
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Het, OC, Slash, Threesome
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7039 Read Count: 4772
[Report This] Published: 08/31/2007 Updated: 08/31/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/31/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Breathing Through

This is absolutely stunning.  And Maple, I teared up, too.  God love Harry, he broke my heart.  I haven't read all of this, and now I'm going to have to.  I had my last 'baby' 20 years ago, and this brought it all back.  And having Lily there?  Genius.  This is just terrific.

Author's Response:

We are both so thrilled by your comments. Harry is a such a broken soul, isn't he? Q has dealt with that issue a lot throughout this series of hers. We knew the topic would be 'hit or miss' with some people. I'm glad this struck a chord for you.

~M and Q 

Graduation Day (and Night) by Tart Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 0]
Summary: Ron graduates from Auror training and gets a graduation gift that was worth waiting for.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Het, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7009 Read Count: 9708
[Report This] Published: 09/04/2007 Updated: 10/04/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed
Date: 10/29/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is lovely, my dear. Sweet and sexy, and the waiting sounds just like Hermione, and the pay off is perfect, and the tattoo?  Very cute!  Loved it!

Author's Response: Awwww thank you! I went back and forth when I first began writing this over whether Hermione would wait that long. As for the tattoo, that was insprired (sort of) by real life. I have hubby's name on my..well... somewhere only he gets to see. LoL. And he has my name on his arm. I thought it was kind of sweet. Thanks so much for the review!!

Dreams of Deliverance by rospberry Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: What if events in Deathly Hallows had happened slightly differently: if Harry hadn't shown uncharacteristic caution, if he'd raced headlong into danger as usual, if he hadn't just watched as events played out? A few years have passed and he's teaching at Hogwarts, but the nightmares won't go away. Spoilers for DH. (Snape/Harry slash)
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Harry Potter, Severus Snape
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Contains Spoilers for DH, Hurt/Comfort, Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2320 Read Count: 610
[Report This] Published: 10/16/2007 Updated: 10/16/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/29/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Dreams of Deliverance

Oh, Ros.  This is...beautiful.  Really.  I'm humbled.  I made you cry?  Well, you just returned the favor.  Truly. 

Don't you wish it had really gone this way?  I don't usually read this pairing (wait for it!  I won't say I expect to hate it, not when you write it!  hee!) but this was absolutely beautiful. Well done.  Nomination justly deserved! 



Author's Response: Really? *claps hands with glee*. Is it wrong I'm so pleased I'm making people cry? Thank you!

Pucker Up by rospberry Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: Past Featured StoryAfter losing a bet Harry has a huge favour to ask of Malfoy. It would make things so much easier if the Slytherin would just say no. Features *very* slight D/s. Oneshot. (Harry/Draco SLASH)
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Vacant Rooms
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley, Severus Snape
Genres: Comedy, General, Romance
Time Period: Next Generation
Warnings: Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5830 Read Count: 1790
[Report This] Published: 10/20/2007 Updated: 10/20/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/29/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Pucker Up

You know I love this story!  But my favorite part?

"It's a particularly unpleasant memory that I'd rather not discuss. At All. Ever."

Classic! 



Author's Response: *grin* The poor boy is mentally scarred.