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Pure Semantics by Samayel Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Past Featured StoryIt all hangs on the definition of a word. Theo gets a lesson in semantics from Draco, and Draco gets exactly what he wants.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Nott Sr, Harry Potter
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Fluff, General
Time Period: None
Warnings: Slash, Strong Language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1275 Read Count: 1400
[Report This] Published: 07/26/2007 Updated: 07/26/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/27/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lovely.  Enjoyed this immensely.  Love his description of he difference between a dick, and a cock.  And doesn't everyone what one of those?  

Author's Response: It's a marvelous thing to have...and hold :-) lol. Thanks love :-) I just felt like playing on definitions in my own way...glad the result amuses! Peace and Love, Samayel

Same Time Next Year by tqpannie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: DH-Spoilers There were other stolen moments but these were the ones that were special.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Rimming, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2279 Read Count: 523
[Report This] Published: 07/26/2007 Updated: 07/26/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/28/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lovely, annie.  Really lovely.

A Few Lines More by wolfiekins Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: 1st September, 2017: Let's hang out on Platform 9 3/4 for just a little bit longer, shall we? Post-DH.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Fluff, General, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: EWE, Het, Minor Fluff, Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1956 Read Count: 1984
[Report This] Published: 07/28/2007 Updated: 07/28/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/28/2007 Title: Chapter 1: One

Oh, I love this!  this is perfect.  I can just see them, buzzing the train, the kids all pressed against the windows!  Brilliant!

Author's Response:

Wow, that's so cool you have that image, because it's one that struck me, too!  I haven't a clue why, but with all the talk of driving in the Epilogue, something just popped:  Anglia!  

Thanks so very much...I'm thrilled you enjoyed it so! 

Not At All Like a Sister by simons_flower Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Being on watch in October is cold and lonely for Harry until Hermione checks up on him.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger
Genres: Angst, Erotica, PWP
Time Period: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Contains Spoilers for DH, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1510 Read Count: 1786
[Report This] Published: 08/04/2007 Updated: 08/04/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/04/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ah, this is terrific. And very believable, I think. While I was reading Deathly Hallows, and Ron was gone, I knew Jo wouldn't give the H/HR shippers what they wanted, not completely, but there was the teasing hint that she 'could' have. Nice of you to actually do it!

Author's Response: Thanks! I think part of the Horcrux hunt and the destruction of the locket was a snub for the H/Hr shippers, but I can live with that. Glad you enjoyed it!

Comes My Way by unbroken_halo Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Harry takes Sirius for a ride, who takes Harry for a ride.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Sirius Black
Genres: Erotica, Ficlet, PWP
Time Period: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Public Sex, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1366 Read Count: 1569
[Report This] Published: 08/06/2007 Updated: 08/06/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed
Date: 08/06/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooooo, sky smex!

I love the premise; sex on an invisible motorcycle, hovering in a night sky. Lovely. And after watching 'Harry' and 'Sirius' in OOTP, there's kind of a nice mental visual to go with it! I enjoyed this very much.

Author's Response: Thanks! There\'s just something about men and motorcycles, LOL!

Choices by madam_minnie Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Had Remus known that Severus had lost as much as he the night of Sirius' betrayal?
Categories: Bad Moon Rising > Drabbles
Characters: Remus Lupin, Severus Snape
Genres: Drabble
Time Period: Voldemort Vanishes
Warnings: Angst
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 237 Read Count: 496
[Report This] Published: 08/12/2007 Updated: 08/12/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/12/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Choices

A creative little blip of a moment that you absolutely know happened, completely in canon and yet unseen.  Perfect.

Author's Response: Aww thanks babe! These little drabbles help, I think, in getting my muse back to where she needs to be. And Remus, I think is the catalyst for all my writing.

Breathing Through by mapleandmahogany, Quizzical Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary: Ron held them both, as best he could around her expanded frame, pulling Harry close to Hermione's body. Ron whispered words of support onto her neck, placing kisses behind her earlobe. She arched her head back, letting herself drown in their touch.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Three of Hearts
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Erotica, Romance, Trio
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Het, OC, Slash, Threesome
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7039 Read Count: 5363
[Report This] Published: 08/31/2007 Updated: 08/31/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/31/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Breathing Through

This is absolutely stunning.  And Maple, I teared up, too.  God love Harry, he broke my heart.  I haven't read all of this, and now I'm going to have to.  I had my last 'baby' 20 years ago, and this brought it all back.  And having Lily there?  Genius.  This is just terrific.

Author's Response:

We are both so thrilled by your comments. Harry is a such a broken soul, isn't he? Q has dealt with that issue a lot throughout this series of hers. We knew the topic would be 'hit or miss' with some people. I'm glad this struck a chord for you.

~M and Q 

Graduation Day (and Night) by Tart Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary: Ron graduates from Auror training and gets a graduation gift that was worth waiting for.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Het, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7009 Read Count: 10227
[Report This] Published: 09/04/2007 Updated: 10/04/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed
Date: 10/29/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is lovely, my dear. Sweet and sexy, and the waiting sounds just like Hermione, and the pay off is perfect, and the tattoo?  Very cute!  Loved it!

Author's Response: Awwww thank you! I went back and forth when I first began writing this over whether Hermione would wait that long. As for the tattoo, that was insprired (sort of) by real life. I have hubby's name on my..well... somewhere only he gets to see. LoL. And he has my name on his arm. I thought it was kind of sweet. Thanks so much for the review!!

Dreams of Deliverance by rospberry Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: What if events in Deathly Hallows had happened slightly differently: if Harry hadn't shown uncharacteristic caution, if he'd raced headlong into danger as usual, if he hadn't just watched as events played out? A few years have passed and he's teaching at Hogwarts, but the nightmares won't go away. Spoilers for DH. (Snape/Harry slash)
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Harry Potter, Severus Snape
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Contains Spoilers for DH, Hurt/Comfort, Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2320 Read Count: 661
[Report This] Published: 10/16/2007 Updated: 10/16/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/29/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Dreams of Deliverance

Oh, Ros.  This is...beautiful.  Really.  I'm humbled.  I made you cry?  Well, you just returned the favor.  Truly. 

Don't you wish it had really gone this way?  I don't usually read this pairing (wait for it!  I won't say I expect to hate it, not when you write it!  hee!) but this was absolutely beautiful. Well done.  Nomination justly deserved! 



Author's Response: Really? *claps hands with glee*. Is it wrong I'm so pleased I'm making people cry? Thank you!

Pucker Up by rospberry Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Past Featured StoryAfter losing a bet Harry has a huge favour to ask of Malfoy. It would make things so much easier if the Slytherin would just say no. Features *very* slight D/s. Oneshot. (Harry/Draco SLASH)
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Vacant Rooms
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley, Severus Snape
Genres: Comedy, General, Romance
Time Period: Next Generation
Warnings: Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5830 Read Count: 1854
[Report This] Published: 10/20/2007 Updated: 10/20/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/29/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Pucker Up

You know I love this story!  But my favorite part?

"It's a particularly unpleasant memory that I'd rather not discuss. At All. Ever."

Classic! 



Author's Response: *grin* The poor boy is mentally scarred.

Phoenix Tears by madam_minnie Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Past Featured StoryThere is a pain that even a Phoenix tears can not heal
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Drabbles
Characters: Albus Dumbledore, Gellert Grindelwald, Lily Potter, Severus Snape
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Tragedy
Time Period: Voldemort Vanishes
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoilers for DH
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 156 Read Count: 1038
[Report This] Published: 10/20/2007 Updated: 10/20/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/20/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Phoenix Tears

Oh.  Minnie!  This brought tears to my eyes.  It's lovely.

Author's Response: I don't know where it came from, to be honest. I just thought about how their tragic love lives had crossed and this just came spewing out. I really wanted to write something smutty and hot with Albus and Gellert and just couldn't do it yet. But soon... yes, very soon! I'm so glad you enjoyed this. I love Albus and Severus even more!

Team Support by rospberry Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Harry's front page news again. (Oliver/Cedric/Harry implied SLASH depending on your POV.)
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Drabbles
Characters: Cedric Diggory, Harry Potter, Oliver Wood, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Drabble
Time Period: Next Generation
Warnings: Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 269 Read Count: 544
[Report This] Published: 10/28/2007 Updated: 10/29/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed
Date: 10/30/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Team Support

How cute is this? I adore both Ollie and Cedric, and seriously hope that there's a reason for that adorable blush!  It made me smile!

Author's Response: If that's what you want to imagine, then I'm sure there's a very good reason for the blush *grin*.

Turn to Page 394 by tjs_whatnot Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Homework leads to wankery...
Categories: The Broomshed > Drabbles
Characters: Dean Thomas, Harry Potter, Neville Longbottom, Ron Weasley, Seamus Finnigan
Genres: Comedy, Drabble, Erotica, PWP
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Masturbation, Underage
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 100 Read Count: 1654
[Report This] Published: 10/28/2007 Updated: 10/28/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/30/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Turn to Page 394

See, I understand why they're all wanking.  I'd PAY the man to say "page three hundred and ninety four", caressing every syllable.  Oh, yes.  Wank worthy, indeed!

Author's Response: Yes exactly...it's almost as hawt as that whole "bottling fame, brewing glory" bit...deelish!!

Hot, Wet and Bothered by madam_minnie Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: When what you want so desperately falls on your lap, what do you do?
Categories: Remains of the Day > Drabbles
Characters: Harry Potter, Sirius Black
Genres: Drabble, PWP
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Frottage, Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 621 Read Count: 576
[Report This] Published: 10/29/2007 Updated: 10/29/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/29/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Hot, Wet and Bothered

Okay, I love this madly.  And I feel much better now!

Author's Response: Oh yay! I'm so glad you liked it! You're a great smutty inspiration! *mwah*

When Lightning Strikes by Tart Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary: This was my submission for the harry_and_ron First Line Challenge.

My prompt was: He stared at it, sure it was entirely too big.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Fluff, PWP, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: EWE, Minor Fluff, Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 947 Read Count: 766
[Report This] Published: 10/30/2007 Updated: 11/01/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed
Date: 11/02/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww!  I want one!  Maybe not in the same place (I'm old.  How's that for a mental picture!) but I definitely want one.  Lightning bolt and all!  I love this Ron...how cute is he? And tequila will do this to you every time.

Author's Response: If you get one, I want a picture of it! LoL. Yeah, this Ron is pretty cute, I keep comparing him (in my mind) to a big cuddly, frisky puppy dog.  Yes, tequila can be quite dangerous. I'm glad you liked it :o)