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Every Little Kindness Hurt by Argyle_S Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Gay boys don't get crushes on their friends' wives.
Categories: The Broomshed > Self Pleasure, The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings, The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Sirius Black, Remus Lupin, Lily Evans Potter, James Potter
Genres: Erotica, PWP, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Het, Hurt/Comfort, Masturbation, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Voyeurism
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2530 Read Count: 1533
[Report This] Published: 06/08/2007 Updated: 06/08/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/08/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Every Little Kindness Hurt

Oh.  This just hurts, doesn't it? Very nice; a lovely depiction of how Remus feels about Lily.  And some pretty hot sex, too, I must say.  My favorite combination; plot, and sex.  Nicely done. 

The Loo by IamAGhost Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Sometimes holding off for a while makes coming together rather... explosive.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, PWP
Time Period: None
Warnings: Frottage, Public Sex, Slash, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1589 Read Count: 808
[Report This] Published: 06/08/2007 Updated: 06/08/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/08/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

HA!  Very nice!  I, of course, love it!  Nicely done. 

What Not To Do At Work by mapleandmahogany Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Ron distracts Harry from his work.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Erotica, Ficlet, PWP, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Minor Fluff, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 561 Read Count: 516
[Report This] Published: 06/09/2007 Updated: 06/09/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/09/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This gives you a lovely sort of warm feeling, doesn't it?  Very nice.

Author's Response: Heh - I allude to angst once in awhile and usually just pull out the 'fluff'. :D Thanks for reading!

Unlimited Partnership by Rickey_A Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Harry/Draco - Divorce sucks even if you're gay and your marriage had the sole purpose of producing an heir. His old plan in tatters, Draco begins to formulate a new plan. Harry Potter becomes his partner and Draco is definitely, most definitely, not in love.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: Drama, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: Unlimited Partnership
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14376 Read Count: 3362
[Report This] Published: 06/10/2007 Updated: 06/10/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/10/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay, so now you have to write it!  Honestly, this is one of the best depictions of H/D I've read in a really long time.  I like them both so much.  Draco is still a prat, but a loveable one, and Harry remains clueless about his power.  I adore the scenes with the boys, and Orion is about the best name for a Malfoy heir I've seen to date.  Very nice.  It's a fun read. 

Author's Response: Thanks so much:) When I first posted the story for slashfest, I got a bit of a calling for more. Just recently I\'ve started tinkering with it...hopefully I\'ll finish before DH comes out.

Enough by Argyle_S Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Hermione finds someone else. Ron finds comfort in his best friend's arms.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Ladies Room, The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ginny Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Erotica, PWP, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, FemSlash, Het, Hurt/Comfort, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3872 Read Count: 2711
[Report This] Published: 06/11/2007 Updated: 06/11/2007
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Date: 06/11/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Enough

This is terrific.  Bravo!

Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/11/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Enough

This is terrific.  Bravo!

It Was Easy to Forget by Argyle_S Rated: FG - Family Guidance starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Ten years after the war ends, Hermione gets an unpleasant surprise. Ron's POV.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast, Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Hermione Granger, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 566 Read Count: 990
[Report This] Published: 06/11/2007 Updated: 06/11/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/19/2007 Title: Chapter 1: It Was Easy to Forget

You know, when something is this well written, it doesn't need porn.  Well done.

Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/19/2007 Title: Chapter 1: It Was Easy to Forget

You know, when something is this well written, it doesn't need porn.  Well done.

Obsession by madam_minnie Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: They had called him a lunatic when he'd perfected the charm his godfather taught him and yet the day he'd been able to enslave the Boy Who Lived in the mirror, no one had seen his genius.
Categories: Dark Tales > Drabbles
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: Drabble
Time Period: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 320 Read Count: 461
[Report This] Published: 06/11/2007 Updated: 06/11/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/11/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ahhhh!  Minnie!  Okay, your Draco is creepier than mine.


Author's Response:

'Okay, your Draco is creepier than mine.'

Woot! Now THAT's one hell of a compliment! ;) 

Soon by Tart Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: A wedding is taking place the next day and Ginny makes one last desperate attempt to talk some sense into Harry, who is just trying to do the right thing.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Harry Potter, Ginny Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3043 Read Count: 1577
[Report This] Published: 06/15/2007 Updated: 06/15/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/15/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is lovely!  And I didn't get that it was Ron and Hermione until the very end.  I like the passion between Harry and Ginny very much.  Well done! 

Author's Response:

Wow! Coming from you, that is a HUGE compliment. I'm very happy you enjoyed it and please forgive my bit of trickery. It was for a good cause :o)

Hands by Tarie Rated: FG - Family Guidance starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: He stares at his hands a lot these days. Most people don't notice it 'cos they're too busy patting him on the back and congratulating him for finally killing Voldemort, saving the wizarding world, and all that.

But I notice it.

I notice it and then I stare at his hands, too.
[Harry, Ron, gen]
Categories: Hallowed Halls > From Diagon Alley to Hogwarts
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, General
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1074 Read Count: 502
[Report This] Published: 06/18/2007 Updated: 06/18/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/19/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This one brought tears to my eyes.  It's beautiful.


Author's Response: Thank you! XD This is definitely one of my faves out of the things I've written.

A Long Way From Home by Samayel Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: AU Non Magic: Harry's first day of college is very eventful, and only gets wilder when he meets his new dorm mate...Drake!
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter, Blaise Zabini
Genres: Comedy, Erotica, Fluff, General, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Minor Fluff, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5794 Read Count: 3523
[Report This] Published: 06/18/2007 Updated: 06/18/2007
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Date: 06/18/2007 Title: Chapter 1: A Long Way From Home

"...he's just jealous because someone dropped a house on his sister???!!!"  I laughed out loud, and then had to share the line with my roommate.  Hilarious.  I love this Drake, he's adorable. This one is really fun.

Author's Response: Thats a gay classic, actually. Remember what happened to the first witch in the Wizard Of Oz? The Wicked Witch vowed revenge because it was her sister who wound up having the house land on her. Since gay culture adores Judy Garland, I had to give ultra-gay Drake a line that reffered to Wizard Of Oz :-) Thanks Love :-) Very glad to provide some laughs :-) Peace to ya! Samayel

What Dreams May Come by Tart Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: It's a busy weekend at the Burrow. A wedding is taking place. And Ron is trying to figure out how, exactly, to tell Hermione he's loved her for a decade.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13456 Read Count: 5699
[Report This] Published: 06/23/2007 Updated: 06/23/2007
Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/24/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is very sweet, and there were moments when I laughed out loud.  Like:

"Ron, are you coming?"

Sadly, no.

Funny stuff.  And Ron and Harry's relationship is perfect.  You've hit all of them just right.  Well done.

Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/24/2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ahhhh!!!  Just when it's getting to the good part!  Thank God there's another chapter here.  They are so sweet!  Lovely description of that kiss, by the way.  Just steamy enough to not overbalance how poignant it is.

 

Reviewer: oldenuf2nobetter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/24/2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Yay!!!  This is so beautiful.  Okay...

One hour of labor?!!!  I think I hate her. (Just kidding.  My shortest was 21, so I'm just bitter...) 

When Molly handed Harry the baby, it made me cry.  Literally, and I don't do that often.  The name is lovely. Syriah.  Perfect.

The love making is stunning.  So not smutty, and I thank you for that.  Your respect for these characters is palpable, and perfect.  I love smut as much as the next person, but not for these two, and not in that moment.  Lovely, really.  



Author's Response:

Well I figured Ginny isn't the type of person to dawdle around with anything so why should labour be any different? LoL. I can't speak from experience of course. My daughter was feet first breech so I had to have a c-section. Seriously I am having sympathy pains thinking of 21 hours. LoL.

I like !smutty Ron as much as the next person but I really wanted to make the scene more about love than sex. I'm so pleased you approved :o)