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Live...or Die Trying by missgranger2 Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 399]
Summary: Hermione becomes bitter and lost after Ron and Harry leave her.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley, Various
Genres: Angst, Comedy, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134755 Read Count: 71581
[Report This] Published: 02/09/2008 Updated: 05/29/2011
Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 02/20/2011 Title: Chapter 31: Sometimes the Truth Hurts

I've been a bad girl i haven't reviewed your last chapter. My bad so sorry but i must say that it's nice to finally see the plot moving.

For heavens sake make Harry get out of the Shadows otherwise that guy is gonna end up miserable for the rest of his life lol.

 Oh and i must say that you are such a tease, you can't have Hermione going all on Ron and have him turn it down. Next time it must be Ron that does all the seduction part girl lol.Considering Hermione knows some really cool tricks now it should be pretty funny to see how THAT goes down.



Author's Response:

Sandrinha! *happy friggin dance*

  I thought you might have been taken captive by a Death Eater! *shudders at the thought*I'm currently at my parent's house and I couldn't help but get to a computer when I saw your review on my phone. (of course my parents don't know about my little hobby, so you should know that I'm hurriedly typing away so as to avoid any questions from them! And I hope this makes you realize how much I adore you!) It's so good to hear from you again!!!!  I will probably keep Harry around for a little...longer. *laughs* That poor, poor guy-bless him!!!

  I think it would be good to have Ron be the agressive one next time and for our girl to try and not give in. (Wonderful idea!!!!)

  I have missed you on here. I feel like you're part of this story and I have always appreciated your kindness! I just love ya', girl!!! *hugs you tight*

Much LOVE!

Tammy (>:  

Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 09/04/2011 Title: Chapter 33: Liar, Liar, Pants on Fire

I hope everything is going well with your life, you haven't updated in such a long time that you have us worried lol.

Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 02/18/2008 Title: Chapter 1: "Broken"

Could Ron be anymore of a creep? Damn i want to know why he hurted Hermione like that, he must have known what she felt for him, hell no one can be that stupid.

Author's Response: You'll see why he left her in future chapters. I know he seems like a creep right now, but have faith in him! I hope you keep reading!   

Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 03/12/2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Go Hermione, she was hurting for sure but both Harry and Ron need to suffer for the pain they caused her. Expecially Ron!



Author's Response: Ha!Ha! Yeah...I don't think it's wise to cross a woman...especially a woman with a wand! Please stay tuned....she's not done yet!{wink}

Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 06/03/2008 Title: Chapter 5: Truth and Consequences

Oh the tension begins, please update soon i need more of this story.

Author's Response:

Hell Sandrinha!

   An update should be posted very soon! Please let me know what you think of future chapters as I value all of my reviews!

*SMOOCH*

missgranger2

Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 11/13/2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: "Busy Fingers and Idle Resolutions"

Ok review time LOL.

I say this now because it's true i will never abandon this fic, i love it too much and i'm always excited for the new updates.

Now having said that, i think i must say that you shouldn't drive Hermione too far or at elast drag it for far too long. I feel her pain and i can understand that she is using sex as a substitute to numb the pain but damaging her too much would create a very bad image in our minds (readers), an image we may not recover from when you do get her on the good track.

Please don't feel like i'm telling you how to write your story, i would never do that trust me, i'm just giving my honest opinion that's all, and IMO i think that i'm not quite sure i'm ready to see Hermione continue to sleep around for 5/10 chapters (just an idea because i have no clue on what you are going to write LOL). This is not cannon!Hr and i can fully accept it but don't make her out to be a shallow whore.

I'm still waiting to see if you will ever address the fact that Ron was a whore himself during the time he was with Hermione and have R&HR talk in a mature way about it. Now that i think about it it's ironic that Ron calls her a whore in chapter 21 but he was one himself long before she was. Oh well i'll just wait to see what you have got in store for us.

“The pull, the lust, the wanting…it’s still there between us, isn’t it?”

I think you nailed exactly what i'm missing, they still have all of that but i don't see THE LOVE. Please promise me that you will show us that part at some point, we started the fic with ideas about what happened but the real love (the kind of love that makes you commit to another person body and soul) i never really saw it and i guess i'm just missing it that's all.

Sorry for the long post but i needed to get this off my chest.



Author's Response:

Sandrinha! *happy dance*

I never feel quite right until I get a review from 'my Sandrinha'! *hugs* And feel free to write whatever comments you need to as I adore you to pieces, dear. I will have our girl do a few more WTF things. And I will honestly try not to drag it out, I promise! Her self destructive behavior (plus a few other things she does or causes to happen) will make her hit rock bottom. 

Because I adore you, I will try to show some of that LOVE in future chapters. *grins* It's there, but it's hard for her to show it or feel it towards him and that is where the problem lies. She doesn't trust him anymore. There is one heart-breaking event that will change her and become the catalyst for her to turn her her life around in later chapters.

I am so sorry if I have disappointed you in anyway as you are one of my favorite readers. *hugs* It's a lot of craziness and is one of those stories that I sort of 'lose myself' in when I write it. Anyway, I hope you'll like the next chapter and please know that all this nuttiness is leading somewhere as I already wrote the chapter. Thanks as always for all your support as your comments and YOU mean the world to me! *hugs*

Much love!

Tammy (>:       

Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 06/16/2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: "Breaking the Bond"

Wait what? So Ron just decided to erase his marriage licence, isn't that taking the cowards way out. What next is he going to obliviate his wife and pretend the last years didn't happen.

Seriously, i can understand Hermione so well right now but Ron is making feel like Hermione deserves better then someone like him.



Author's Response:

Hello Sandrinha!

   Hope you are well. I just adore your name by the way! Yes, Ron is up to something in regards to Shannon. It's a few chapters away in revealing why Ron has decided to do this. This chapter will reveal what happened on that mission and I honestly felt like an emotional wreck when I wrote it...how's that for getting caught up in your work eh? I hope you like the story so far and let me know what you think of future chapters. The next one is going to be really bizarre. Just keep in mind Hermione is not herself right now.

*hugs*

missgranger2      

Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 07/13/2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: What Hermione Needs

Damn, this Hermione really isn't like the older one. She is mechanical and i hope that Ron Weasley trully SEES and pays for how he turned a sweet person into a cold and angry one.

Author's Response:

Hello lovely Sandrinha!

   I hope you are well! This Hermione has gone off the deep end! As for Ron, I certainly agree with you that he will eventually have to face what he caused our girl to become.  There is a very emotional chapter dealing with Ron coming later.  Let me know what you think of the next chapter!

*hugs*

missgranger2 

Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 05/14/2011 Title: Chapter 32: The Calm before the Storm

Finally an update, thank god lol.

First of all glad to see a glimpse of the old Hermione back and see her connect with Ron.

Second it's nice to see that Arthur is such a strong character that knows what the say and when to say it.

Last but not least, who the hell does Ginny think she is. I'm sure she is hurt and feeling betrayed by both Harry and Ron but did she just forget that she was also Hermione's friend back in the day and basically gave up on her as well? Or was Ginny's friendship with Hermione just a show while everything was fine and dandy.True friends are seen when things get difficult and not when things are easy.

I'm guessing that next we will get to see Hr putting her "parent affairs" in order right?



Author's Response:

Sandrinha! *happy friggin dance*

  As usual, you make me laugh! LOVE you for that. I think Ginny is reacting to the situation right now and not really thinking it through. I also think it's easier for her to try and shift the blame on Hermione, then to deal with her neglecting their friendship too. I will try and tackle all that before they are off into the Shadow world. (unless I go off on a tangent) *giggles*

  I am almost done with the next chapter and would have already finished it but my husband was being a butt. (don't ask!) Anyway, I really want to get it finished so that I can update. It may or may not surprise you where I 'go' next in this story.

Many hugs and much love!

Tammy (>: 

Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 12/02/2010 Title: Chapter 29: Fate and Circumstances

Oh...oh....oh...that's just EVIL. I suggested a cliff for this story end and i'm paying for it aren't i :P? Why must you make us suffer so much.

I take it that Harry was accepted into the Shadows, i was expecting him to not be there to be honest, this Harry is far too comical for that much gritty work unless you plan to pair him up with Flannigan just for laughs. Ginny is gonna hate him for that i'm sure :(.

I'm glad Ron won't be telling Charlie anything because if we are to be honest Ron also killed/raped and although he surely has been paying the consequences very dearly he didn't went to jail for it, so why should Hermione even if it was self-defense.



Author's Response:

Sandrinha! *happy dance*

   I enjoy leaving cliffhangers for some completely twisted reason. *laughs* I have a partner for Ron in mind, but it may change. Sometimes if I haven't started writing the next chapter (which I haven't) things sort of...um...change. It kind of depends on my mood, how I feel and what time of the month it is.

   And you are very perceptive about certain things, I have to say. I like to have Harry around. (poor guy) This story will also start becoming more serious in nature. I will still add humor whenever I can, but some things will happen that will be upsetting and maybe....shocking. (imagine that) This is all leading somewhere and that point I'm trying to get to won't be a happy time for one of the characters. *sobs*

You know, I just absolutely adore you!!! I think I said it once before that I don't feel a chapter is complete unless you comment on it. Thank you for sticking by me!!!! *hugs*

Much love!

Tammy (>:     

Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 10/25/2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 “ I See Red”

I hope you write more soon, i miss this story very much and i want to know what is going on with Hermione and Ron.



Author's Response:

Hello Lovely Sandrinha,

  How are you? My beta still has the next chapter and I'm waiting to get it back to approve. She was super busy and wasn't able to get to it. I do apologize and I hope you do like it when it does get loaded in. Thank you for writing and again I'm so sorry for the delay dearest!

*SMOOCH*

miissgranger2

Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/30/2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 "The Wrath of David"

Ron gaped at her in shock. Just days earlier, she had torn into him, using pretty strong words, enough that caused him to raise his eyebrows. And now here she was again-swearing at him like a sailor. The Hermione he knew would have never sworn at him like that or used that kind of language.  Perhaps she had hit her head too hard.

I find it funny that Ron really doesn't see the extent of the damage he did to Hermione. He just fucked around with every woman he wanted and that was all goody because he was never satisfied, but he never trully respect Hermione HIS best friend above all.

I'm thinking he probably must have killed someone on that mission and feels guilty about it, but Ron shouldn't expect Hermione to just be the OLD ONE, her heart was fucking torn apart.



Author's Response:

Hello Lovely Sandrinha!

I absolutely loved your review! You totally "get it"! Ron hurt her so badly that she said good bye to who she once was, becoming this person who doesn't give a shit anymore. Ron is beginning to understand and accept that it was his actions that caused her to go on this downward spiral. This is one of my most favorite reviews for this story! Having had such a crappy week, your review was just what I needed dearest!!! I hope you like the next chapter!!!!

*BIG hug*

missgranger2  

Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 03/17/2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 “Sins of the Past”

Thank you for giving us the asnwer to why Ron did those things but part of me cannot let go of the fact that he should have trusted his best friend and soulmate.

I can understand why he did the things he did but i don't think Ron should have it easy when it comes to reconnect with Hermione, sorry it may sound harsh to you or others but he broke her heart (completely) by running away.

Even if he couldn't date her anymore, he should have trusted his long time friend to help him out. They survived Voldermort for god's sake, she deserved more from him IMO.



Author's Response:

Hello Lovely Sandrinha!

I just adore you! I too, don't think our girl should take him back so easily. Hermione was completely and utterly devastated when he left her. And you're right- they were all the best of friends and he should have confided either to Harry or her. I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story dearest and I hope I don't let you down. Thank you for leaving such heartfelt comments! You truly are lovely!!!

*SMOOCH*

missgranger2 

Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 05/08/2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

So since these two are drunk, is there are possibility that they actually talk about Hermione among themselfs in that state and let out some harsh truths?

Author's Response:

Hello lovely Sandrinha!!!

   How are you dearest?! The boys do "talk" about Hermione... but not in the way you mean. *winks* I will be looking over the next chapter tomorrow and then sendng it off to my beta. I then have to "fill in the gap" as I skipped over to the Shadow chapters. (I know... barking mad!) I do so love hearing from you dear! *hugs* I hope you'll like the next chapter! 

*SMOOCHES*

missgranger2 

Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 07/13/2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 “Discovery and Deceit”

I can't wait to see more of this hurry up will you lol.

Author's Response:

Sandrinha!

  Where the hell have you been????? *giggles* I about had a heart attack when I saw it was you! I am trying to hurry. (scout's honor) My beta has the next chapter so hopefully it'll be up sometime soon. It was good to hear from you dear!!!

XXX,

missgranger2