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Wake Me by risiepookie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 173]
Summary: In the midst of the War, Hermione is kidnapped and held captive as Ron, Harry and Ginny search desperately for her. Hermione and Ron share a psychic connection, with which she tries to help him find her before it is too late.

A strong warning for this story, as it does contain the rape of a character and severe psychological trauma.

*This is the first story in my Awakenings Series*
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Darkfic, Drama, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Het, Rape, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52346 Read Count: 16559
[Report This] Published: 08/23/2006 Updated: 08/23/2007
Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 10/08/2007 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Finally Woken

It simply refused to do what I commanded it: it responded with arousal when I demanded that it be disgusted and horrified and it responded with revulsion and fear when I begged it to respond with feelings of love and safety. This is so fucked up!

I think this is the real issue that's going to plague Hermione and Ron for a very long time until they both heal. I know that the road will be difficult but i do wonder what will Ron do when he finds out that the evil bastard was using him to hurt and rape Hermione. I predict that when he does find out he will back away and decide not to cause her more pain even thow HE KNOWS it wasn't him.

My heart broke when he left the room with a defeated figure in him, it's so hard on her but it must be also hard as hell on him, not being able to help her.

Now you better not make Hermione pregnant with that bastard, or i will kick you lol.



Author's Response:

Hi there again!  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter- you're very much appreciate and I enjoy hearing your thoughts.  I hope my responses are able to give you some idea where this is heading, without giving too much away...

I agree with you, the really long-term problems will surround Hermione's ability to process through and forgive herself, as well as the interaction between the two of them.  There definitely will be issues about Ron finding out what happened with the evil bastard, some of which I'll get to in this fic and some will unfold in the planned follow-up piece.  Hermione's health issues will be revealed in this fic, but not really dealt with until the follow up fic.  

My heart broke for Ron in this chapter as well.  It's a difficult situation all around that's neither of their faults, but neither can "fix" it, at least not quickly.  I'm hoping to bring back some hope to him in the next couple chapters.  

Thank you again for the lovely review- it's always wonderful to hear how you're connecting with the fic!  *banana split for you* 

If a Man Answers by risiepookie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 218]
Summary: When Ron comes back after two years, he dreads another man answering Hermione's door in the middle of the night. He certainly didn't expect the other man to be Harry. Jealousy, sex, betrayal, confusion, and heartache ensue.  Unfortunately, all is not as it should be and Ron must survive the unexpected consequences of his return, including broken relationships and promises.

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Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40051 Read Count: 30069
[Report This] Published: 08/27/2006 Updated: 04/21/2008
Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/21/2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Memories of a Lifetime Ago

I just started reading this chapter and since i'm a R&HR the hole H&HR didn't sit well with me. I have no problems with them having sex but the love and honey parts in that just seemed too much for me you know. I always imagined that Hr could be close to Harry but in a more sexual way not so much an intimate way.

I like your story i really do but i'de like to see Hermione fight for Ron because even thow they broke up and he left it's Harry of all people and i'm sure this Ron will understand but i feel she needs to win him back with a little more effort and perhaps Harry needs to realize that his feelings lie elsewhere.

Hr calls Harry love and then sleeps with Ron? Well it just seems too much, she can't be close in her heart in the same way to both guys, love has many levels but Harry and Ron can't be in the same one i say. 

Sorry i'm rambling i know but i won't judge you at all i'm just intrigued.



Author's Response:

Hi Sandra!  Thanks so much for taking the time to review and give me your thoughts.  :o)

I promise you, all of the love and honey parts are there for a reason, though it's probably not the obvious reason...  give it a couple chapters and more will unravel.  As far as the stuff with Hermione and Ron is concerned, there's a lot more to come, so don't think it's over without a fight yet.  And with Hermione calling Harry love and sleeping with Ron- yet another thing which is in the development (goes with the above plot point I mentioned)... 

Thank you SO MUCH for taking the time to let me know your thoughts and what you are feeling about the fic- it's exactly what I thought would be the questions at this point in the storyline.  I'm glad you're intrigued, I hope the rest of the fic will deliver the answers to you.  :o)

*midnight milkyway bar for you*

Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 02/11/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Finally Home

Wow, what a great Ron chapter, thank you once again.

I would like to join the others in the Molly praise, she trully never gets the respect she deserves. I'm sure you will show us sometime Harry's and Ginny's side to this story because it's important to know them as well.

I'm afraid of what is that Hermione is trying to say to Ron, i have this suspicion that she may end up saying two things that she feels it's important either she is pregnant wiht Harry's child or she is married to him and i TRULLY don't like either of them.



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks so much for continuing to read and review!  It's very gratifying to have people connecting with the story and the way I write the characters.  Really, I'm so happy about everyone's response to my Molly! 

You know, there is so much going on with Harry and Ginny's story, I don't think I can honestly do it justice from Ron's POV.  We'll get a little bit, but I don't know if it will be enough.  I'm contemplating doing a companion piece to this one, from Harry's POV, with the matching plot components from his perspective.  I'm just not sure if the interest for that is there or not.  ::shrugs:: 

As for your two suspicions, you will have to wait with everyone else to see what the secret is, but I CAN tell you that Hermione is neither pregnant nor married.  Hopefully that will quell your nerves a bit.  :o)  Thanks so much for your feedback!

*york peppermint patties for you* 

Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/01/2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Rumination

First of all it's nice to see some of that Molly wisdom that we know she has but never gets shown in the books/movies. I'm sure that if Molly found out about H&HR she also knows from experience that while they may love each other, they will never fully embrace that love has something mind-blowing. Molly knows her son and she has known H&HR for many years now and i'm sure that she can see the difference between both loves and that's what she was saying to Ron. He still has a chance but he needs to let go of the past and start over with both of them. This situation has done a great deal of damage to all people involved but if it can be fixed Ron needs to have a conversation with BOTH H&HR at the same time.

Loved Ginny btw, i think she has shown that out of the trio that Ron left behind she was the most mature about the situation. It's obvious that she misses both Harry and Hermione, she knows she will probably never love anyone like she used to love Harry (i say used to because i don't know exactly where she stands on that) and she not being able to be friends with Hermione must hurt her as well. I mean they fought a war together so they had bounds. I liked how you explained that Ginny would not invade someones mind without permission and that shows her being respectfull, i just hope H&HR have a chance to see that side of the girl that they both betrayed and realise that they fucked up good with their current situation.

It's incredible the way you describe Ron has wanting to take the blame for the situation. That shows our boy is a man, a very different man then he was and hopefully he will prove that with his decisions as well to the others.

I can't wait for that dinner to come, you must write it soon.



Author's Response:

Hi Sandra!  Wow, thanks so much for continuing to read and share your thoughts and thanks for the awesome review! 

So glad you enjoyed the Molly wisdom; I quite enjoy writing her and having her as a part of the fic.  She's quite wise and she definitely has the intuition of what the resolution for this complicated situation needs to be. She's setting the example for Ron and the others about not running away, but being willing to confront their demons. There is so much pain here and such a tangled web, but I completely agree with you- there can be no solution until they all sit down and get it all on the table. 

Also very glad you enjoyed my characterization of Ginny. I quite enjoy her interactions with Ron and am looking forward to writing about her interactions with Harry and Hermione.  She's got a role to play in the upcoming chapters as well, because at the moment she's the best support Ron's got within their little quad. 

The next chapter coming up is a bit more of the lovely Weasley family, but I promise the chapter after that will be the dinner!  I'm writing another chapter of Wake Me and then I'll be back onto this fic.

Thanks again for reading and leaving such an absolutely awesome review!!!  I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know your thoughts.  *chocolate dipped biscotti for you*

Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/14/2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Immersion

"I may have been the catalyst for change by leaving two years ago, but it didn’t really start with me and it wouldn’t end that way either."

I loved this line because while Ron's absence was indeed the catalyst, all four of them were having problems long before he left and while it's admirable and so fantastic to see Ron taking responsability for his actions and what the pain they caused, i feel it's also important to note that they could have all said no to the changes that happened. They didn't and that's why all 4 of them a mess lol.

I don't see them every going back to how they were before, but i hope that once you clear the air between them you make the couples (if you intend on having R&HR and H&G together) go slow and start from scratch. Make them get to know each other rather then just get into bed, make the dating game happen to see them fully be strong couples once more you know ;).

I know you life has been busy and i trully hope it gets easier, but i guess i just wanted to beg for the next chapter because just like Ron i think i need to move forward and i can't do that until you post the "confrontation" now can i lol.

Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 10/08/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Finally Home

Sorry to be annoying but i'm gonna be simple about it.

PLEASE UPDATE :D.



Author's Response:

Hi there!  You're not annoying at all- actually, I find it quite endearing.  Sorry about the really long time between chapters and that I haven't responded before now.  The long wait between chapters is mostly a lot of RL issues for both my beta and myself, but the next one is written and I'm just waiting to hear back from my beta now.  I couldn't respond before now, because I've been without a computer for almost 3 weeks!  It was excruciating!  However, new chapters are coming. 

Thanks for caring enough to let me know you're waiting for an update!  :o)  If you're on LJ, I'm over there and I do fic updates amongst RL things.  Feel free to friend me (but let me know you're there or I'll probably miss you), if you have an LJ account.  *chocolate chip cookies for you* 

Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 06/02/2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Immersion

God it's been forever since you updated, please write more soon because i'de like to know how can these four ever be happy.

Author's Response: I know it has been and I'm sorry.  I'm about half-way through the next chapter though, so it won't be forever.  I had to finish up and post my multi-chapter Ron-a-Thon fic and that took a lot of time.  However, I'm back on it!  Thanks for letting me know you're still interested.  :o)  *sugar cookies for you*

Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 06/17/2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Immersion

Ok seriously you need to write faster LOL. We know someone will always get hurt in this but we need to find a resolution to this mess, please don't make us beg LOL.

Author's Response: I know, I'm sorry! You make me laugh. :o) Actually, the next chapter is about half done and I'm really pleased with how it's going.  I know it takes forever, but I hope it's worth the way.  Thanks for letting me know you're still interested.  *pumpkin pie for you*

Together Forever by thesteppyone Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary: Past Featured StoryA messed up potion, some unwanted side effects and a 'situation' they really could do without. Hermione/Ron centric and Lavender of course! Set during HBP and therefore may contain spoilers.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > From Diagon Alley to Hogwarts
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lavender Brown, Ron Weasley
Genres: None
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst
Series: The 'Togther Forever?' Universe
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75252 Read Count: 35148
[Report This] Published: 01/20/2007 Updated: 05/29/2008
Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 10/26/2007 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I wonder if Draco will be punished, he deseves it that's for sure. And R&HR connection is getting to deep for them to hide their feelings towards each other.

Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 12/12/2007 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Just wanted to say that i'm following this very closely and i'm loving it so far so keep on updating it lol.

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you for reading and reviewing! means a lot! :D

Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 02/18/2008 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh god now it's their dreams as well, i guess the only thing left is sharing their beds lol.

Author's Response:

LOL. Well yes, that could be the next natural progression!

Thanks for reviewing :D 

Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 03/30/2008 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I think Malfou found out exactly about the situation between R&HR and made sure that they were separated to cause them pain.

Stupid Harry, sometimes you have to go with your gut boy.

Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 04/03/2008 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Harry and Ginny are going to have to be informed about this and i'll bet that Harry is gonna blame himself.

One Last Chance by The Muskmelons Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Summary: In one day...Ron's whole life, if Hermione can manage to change things the second time around that is.

Narrated from Ron and Hermione's PoV alternately.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Romance, Tragedy
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Het
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 36474 Read Count: 15001
[Report This] Published: 01/31/2007 Updated: 07/01/2008
Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 02/01/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed it i must say, but Hermione has got to stop bashing at poor Ron for christ sake, the guy was just being nice to Grotthe jesus she needs stop being so damn bossy all the time. She can be bossy but in a more mature way.

Please update soon.

Reviewer: Sandrinha Signed
Date: 02/18/2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Great after all her efforts he still went out to fight. Poor Hermione.

Also the last chapter seems to posted two times in the same page.