I’ve looked for pink lines, double blue lines, and blue crosses. Sometimes life doesn't happen as planned and hidden grief surfaces at the worst possible time. Hey hon. This was so well done, Risie! You did a nice job of capturing that cognitive dissonance between wanting to be happy for your friend but feeling that horrible jealousy creeping up. I agree that you should write the story of when she does see her blue lines and tells the others. A nice bit of closure that I know many of us need.
((HUGS))
Hi there! :o) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, dear one. I'm so glad to know that you enjoyed this piece and also want a follow-up fic. I had no idea so many people would want that! It's amazing how closure can come in the most unexpected places sometimes, yeah? Thanks for your kind words! ::hugs you::
*toffee bits for you*
That was too cute!! Leave it to Charlie to put the snobby girls in their places (without even knowing it!).
Author's Response: That's my Charlie. I think I have a fixation on his lips, cause I seem to always get him kissed in every story I write.
Hi hon. You really got me with this one! I had a review all typed out in my head as I was reading it. I loved how they seemed so good together, starting out arguing, leading to the passion that we all know is there. And I loved how well they knew each ohter and knew which buttons to push, sexwise and argument-wise. But then you had to be mean and twist it!! Poor Hermione, such an active imagination, which is unsurprising for someone smart like that. And it gives us a glimse into what she must have gone through when the prat left.
At least we know there's a happy ending! Lovely job, Risie!
Hi sweetie! Thanks so much for reading and leaving such a lovely review! I really did pull a fast one this time. I thought for sure people reading would be wondering when the part that warranted the angst warning was going to happen. I guess it's easy to get caught up in the yummy smuttiness and then be caught off guard. :o) If it makes you feel better, you can just assume this was a missing moment that Hermione made happen when she really was pregnant with Rosie. That's definitely a happy ending.
Thanks again, sweetie! *ginger snaps for you*
Watching Ron eat is an indecent act. Little does he know, he has an audience. Written for TQP's Gluttony Challenge for June 2008.
Wow, Risie, that was amazing! You did a great job of capturing Ron's essence and "someone's" reaction to it. I think it's Hermione, but I can't help thinking it might be Harry! (Knowing you it's the former, but I can also see you wanting to keep us in the dark!!)
Nice job, hon!
That was beautiful, and sad, and wrong, and wonderful, and sexy, and a glimpse into how horrible it is to want - and get - something that you shouldn't have. Beautifully done!
Author's Response: Ah thanks... i was going for angst and sexual tension and hoping to tay canon compliant
In any universe they are destined to be together. (Harry/Ron) Rentboy! AU!Oh, this is wonderful! I love your Harry, and your Ron. I love how Harry wants to save Ron but also needs saving. And the trio gets to be together! Very sweet. Great job!
Wonderful job, Risie! Poor Ron and Hermione! I wonder where the final location was???
Author's Response: Thanks, hon, for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed it! The third place would have been Madrid... who knows what that might have brought! :o) *shortbread for you*
