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Now and Then by oldenuf2nobetter Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary: Even the death of Voldemort did not end the struggle between good and evil. And even the discovery of a new and unexpected power cannot save Harry from having to deal, once and for all, with an old nemesis.
Categories: The Broomshed > Dark Side
Characters: Vincent Crabbe, Seamus Finnigan, Gregory Goyle, Hermione Granger, Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter, Ginny Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: Darkfic
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, BDSM, Bondage, Drug Usage, Dub-Con, Graphic Violence, Het, Hurt/Comfort, Non-Con, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Threesome
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46660 Read Count: 16290
[Report This] Published: 04/13/2007 Updated: 06/26/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/22/2007 Title: Chapter 6: Now and Then: Chapter 6

Oh my goodness, I feel dense now. LoL. Thanks so much for clearing that up. I went back and re-read and it makes total sense now.

*smacks forehead*

 Ok. Back to patiently waiting for the next chapter.

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Date: 04/29/2007 Title: Chapter 8: Now and Then: Chapter 8

Oh my


This is getting really, REALLY good. Not that it wasn;t fantastic before but now with the back story and everything starting to come together... It's utterly fascinating.

The fierceness of the love hat Ron and Hermione and Ginn feel for him, the anguish Ginny feels for not being able to help her husband, the loyalty and protectiveness and rage. Oh wow.

This story is incredibly moving, incredibly addictive. I'll be very much looking forward to the next installment.

Forgive me for not reviewing the previous chapter but I received both notifications at once that it had been updated and read them both together.

Beautifully done, as always

Author's Response: I'm just incredibly grateful that you review at all!  It's so flattering to know that people read and review.  Thank you for the kind words.  I appreciate it more than you can know. 

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Date: 05/06/2007 Title: Chapter 10: Now and Then: Chapter 10

*does the happy dance*

Oh I'm so glad you updated, I feel like it's been forever! Dramatic I know, but this story really intrigues me and I'm ever so anxious for what comes next.

Hermione in labor, Goyle about to get what's coming to him, totally unsuspecting Malfoy, it's so much to take in. but I love it!

Congratulations on two more fantastic chapters.


Author's Response: Thanks again!  I'm so glad that you're enjoying it.  You never know when you start something how it's going to be recieved, so it's gratifying that you like reading it as much as I did writing it. 

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Date: 05/28/2007 Title: Chapter 11: Now and Then: Chapter 11

Ohhhhh I'd just like to tell you that my nails are positively bitten down to the quick!

Brilliant as always. *sigh*

This story has captured me completely and I'm so very anxious foir what comes next.

*blows kisses*

Hurry, hurry!

Author's Response:

Thank you, again.  and I love hearing from you!  it's like waiting to here from an old friend, and then the phone rings...Not much more, now. Three chapters.  

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Date: 05/29/2007 Title: Chapter 12: Now and Then: Chapter 12


This makes me sad. Poor Harry. I just want him to be happy and himself again.

Oh and you are completely in my good books once again for updating so quickly. LoL.

Brilliant, brilliant. Although, getting a good look at exactly how insane Malfoy is...well my tummy is turning quite queerly. But I know that Ron will not let anything happen to his Harry......right?

I'm desperately in need of some encouragement here. LoL

Author's Response: You crack me up.  And my darling Minnie has promised that the next update will be timely. And this Malfoy is really quite off his nut.  I'm writing another fic where I'm kinder to him, the poor thing. And all I can promise you is that Ron would never let anything happen to Harry if he could help it.  

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Date: 06/09/2007 Title: Chapter 13: Now and Then: Chapter 13

OK first, even though I know it's Harry and he's almost completely in control of his reactions "Trenton"'s fear and confusion is just so real! Brilliantly written.

Second, OH MY GOD! Oh poor Harry being taken back to that very dungeon where so much wrong was done to him. I am fervently wishing that he can stay strong enough and focused enough to keep his cool.

Third, Ron's reaction is just so heartbreaking. He loves Harry so much and knows what transpired last time and his desperation is so tangible. Hurry Ron, Hurry!

Oh wow I'm just emotionally spent. LoL.

 Is it wrong of me to be looking forward with devilish delight to Malfoy's realization just WHO he is dealing with? Vindictive Harry and Ron are always so dead sexy to me.

Oh please, please hurry. How many more chapters are there? I'm ever so anxious for more but I'll be a bit sad when it's over. Gah! I just need to know my boys will be OK.

Fantastic as always. *blows kisses*

Author's Response: I adore you.  You are like a gift to a writer's soul, I swear.  There's only one more chapter, sorry to say.  This has been fun. Cheers!

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Date: 06/27/2007 Title: Chapter 14: Now and Then: Chapter 14

Oh my God.

Oh Barbara, there are simply no words to describe how wonderful that ending is. The final line positively brought tears to my eyes, it was so beautiful.

You know this is one of my absolute favorite stories and I'm going to miss your foursome terribly. I hope you write more in this universe, for you have captured everyone so beautifully. The friendship and love is amazing. The end of Draco Malfoy was smashing (literally!) and I loved the reunion.


 I need more gorgeous stories from you.

The whole thing was absolutely amazing and it will remain one of my most favorite.

You, my most awesome storyteller, have given me tears and laughter and everything in between and I've loved every minute.

Author's Response: Thank you so much.  And I cannot begin to tell you how much your input has meant to me.  I am working on another story, sort of in this universe with a bit of a twist.  Not quite as dark as this one.  I think I need to lighten up a bit or people will think I'm a sadist!  Thanks again. 

Redeem Me by Samayel Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 66]
Summary: Two years after the events of Harry's sixth year at Hogwart's, Draco stumbles back into his life. Harry is a bitter and violent young man, Draco is a walking wreck...and who is helping who? (NC-17 rating is for later chapters. This fic is HBP compliant with only very small adjustments to suit this plot.) OOC- is for semiDark!Harry. QUILL TO PARCHMENT AWARDS: Best Post War; Runner Up-Best Angst! COMPLETE!
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter, Rodolphus Lestrange, Walden Macnair
Genres: Drama, Erotica, General, Horror, Mystery, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Drug Usage, Dub-Con, Graphic Violence, Hurt/Comfort, Masturbation, Minor Character Death, Non-Con, OC, Rape, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 240239 Read Count: 126504
[Report This] Published: 04/14/2007 Updated: 10/30/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 04/21/2007 Title: Chapter 5: Farewell Knives Of Pain, Hello Knives Of Fear


*shivers* !vengeful Harry. Oh my.

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Harry is still red hot, and he won't calm down until he's sure the Weasleys are in no danger. We'll see how that pans out over the next few chapters :-) Enjoy!! Lurve, Samayel

Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 05/02/2007 Title: Chapter 15: Dinner…And A Horror Show

Yeah! What she said!

 what the heck is going on??


you seriously have some explaining to do. LoL. I'll wait for the update.

Author's Response: I'm sory the wait has had to be so may yet be another week before I have my own computer back online. For now, I'm borrowing a friends to answer mail and reviews. Have faith :-) I'll be back in action before long, and thank you, Samayel

Reviewer: Tart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/19/2007 Title: Chapter 28: Confusion, Confections, Confessions, And Comprehension

Ok can I just say I am totally in love with Dula! He's awesome! Brilliant chapter.

Author's Response: Ya know...I just love that my first OC is so popular. It gives me a lot of hope that I can create characters of my own that are compelling and pull people in :-0 Thank you so much!!

Wonderland by Ozma_katiebell Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: George and Luna come home from a fancy dress party full of plans.
Categories: The Broomshed > Drabbles
Characters: Luna Lovegood, George Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 295 Read Count: 474
[Report This] Published: 04/23/2007 Updated: 04/23/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/29/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh that was just delicious

Vermilion Hunger, Cerulean Thirst by Thevina Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Dean discovers that he can't resist the colour red, though being attracted to Ron isn't exactly the smoothest of roads.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Rufus Scrimgeour, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Drug Usage, Masturbation, Minor Character Death, Rimming, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21662 Read Count: 529
[Report This] Published: 04/24/2007 Updated: 04/24/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/24/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Vermilion Hunger, Cerulean Thirst

Oh that was lovely!

Your Ron and Dean are very sexy and I love how they sometimes feel insecure and a bit needy. In this story, they suit each other very well.

I'm mostly a R/ HR shipper with H/R being my second favorite, but this was a very lovely change.

 Wonderful job!

Author's Response:

Many thanks! I'm a huge Ron fan, and part of his appeal to me is that he is often insecure and needy. Both he and Dean are rather wounded in many ways, so I was glad to let them eventually get started down a pretty secure path.

I appreciate your taking the time to read and share your thoughts with me. 

The Weasley Boys' Smut-Fest by deenas Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 24]
Summary: A collection of six stories, focusing on the wedding nights of the six Weasley boys.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Fleur Delacour, Hermione Granger, Angelina Johnson, OFC, Bill Weasley, Charlie Weasley, Fred Weasley, George Weasley, Percy Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Fluff
Time Period: None
Warnings: Bondage, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Het, Minor Fluff, OC, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10078 Read Count: 17216
[Report This] Published: 04/25/2007 Updated: 05/14/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/25/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Bill--August 1997

Ohhhh delicious! I can't wait for the next installment!

Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 05/07/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Bill--August 1997

Ohhhh you gotta love those Weasley boys.

Ron was, of course, my favorite but Fred is definitely hot too.

So just Percy and George to go, then.

 Hmmmm I'm wondering what kind if kinky mischief Percy can get up to....

Reviewer: Tart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/10/2007 Title: Chapter 5: George--May 2004

Oh that was so sweet!


I love George.