Reviewer: thesteppyone Signed
Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Taking a Leap
My Risie, my darling, my love,
I suck at reviewing, you know this already, and I suck at keeping up with fic, you also know this, but I'm so happy I've caught up with this. Both Ron and Hermione are wonderfully in character - Hermione's determination and curiousness and Ron's insecurities but grit and loyalty shine through brilliantly.
I loved how you had Hermione take the initiative again, you know she would, regardless of how her actions manifested in the end.
George is wonderfully understanding, I'm not sure if we'll see more of him but I'd not complain if we did
I know it's a minor thing, but I love the way you sign off each chapter. Like you're underlining each one but leaving the door wide open for the next one.
You've probably guessed I love this, I'm just sorry it's taken me this long to leave you a review. *Must try harder*
*hugs and snogs you senseless* Author's Response:
My Sarah!!!! Wifey, you know I always love to have you read and review- however often it happens. ::snuggles:: Thank you so much for reading and letting me know that you're enjoying it! Glad to know you're finding both Hermione and Ron in character and seeing their personalities come through. Yay!
Also, very glad to know you're enjoying Hermione being the initiator and George's subtle place in the fic. I don't think we get more of him in this one, but if I do a follow-up, he'll definitely be there. Oh, and you're the first person to mention the last line of the chapter thing, but I've loved doing those little lines, so thank you for noticing!! :o)
Thank you, again, sweetie, for letting me know you're enjoying it. I really am so very pleased to know- especially since I highly value your opinion. ::hugs and smoochies you breathless:: *chocolate kisses for you*