Penname: KaL [Contact] Real name: KaLynne
Member Since: 08/25/2006
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Beta-reader: 0
[Report This]
Reviews by KaL
A Magical Renaissance by BrandedFaithfully Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 276]
Summary: Hermione goes through an emotional and magical Renaissance in a race against time to save her life.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance, Tragedy
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 270837 Read Count: 131401
[Report This] Published: 06/14/2008 Updated: 12/27/2009
Reviewer: KaL Signed
Date: 07/06/2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Side Effects

A virus or a parasite?  You couldn't have done a better job describing the horror Ron went through I felt like running to the loo with Ginny.

I loved Ron flirting with Hermione even while in so much pain.  I thought it should be telling to Hermione that he only wanted he to put the salve on his wounds.  I really wish the two of them would clear the air and stop letting doubts get in their way.

Now, I don't know who I hate more John or Arty.  John is a jealous, lousy, wants what he can't have bully, but Arty is cruel and takes joy in being it (I can't imagine the fear in Ginny right now).  I really dispise both of them.  I hope when Harry and Ron track them down the don't make it to Azkaban only to Hell.

Loved the quick update.



Author's Response: Dear Kal, I think in this case it's a virus AND a parasite.  You just never know what could happen with those magical bugs!  I don't want to give anything away, but I think you'll be happy with the ending.  I'll just say that one is much more evil than the other.  Thanks for writing to me!

Reviewer: KaL Signed
Date: 08/17/2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Retribution

I really want Hermione to wash her hands of John.  No soft hearted feeling toward him any more. 

I enjoyed Ron and Hermione's closeness, I sure hope nothing else gets in there way.

Carrow has Diane and I think he's now infected with the virus.  Is Diane a pureblood?  Is she going to be infected too?

Wonderful how in order to keep Ron's nuclidites low he has to keep having sex with Hermione and then she will get better even faster.  Great how that works.

I love Ron in this chapter showing his brilliance and how much he love Hermione warmed my heart.



Author's Response: Dear KaL, You're very insightful!  I have to say that I really struggled on what to do with John for quite a while.  He could have gone one of two ways, but I'm pretty happy with how it all turned out.  Thanks so much for leaving me the note.  More to come soon!  Take is easy.

Reviewer: KaL Signed
Date: 12/28/2009 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

Congratulations on a job well done.  I am in awe of your talent.

Author's Response: So sweet!  Thank you!  Hope you have a great New Year!

Summary: She was accused of betraying their friendship, their side, so she left. Almost three years have passed and now she is asked to forgive and forget. Hermione did not know what to do or how to feel .... Non-DH complaint.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Arthur Weasley, Bill Weasley, Draco Malfoy, George Weasley, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Neville Longbottom, Percy Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoilers for DH
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 216082 Read Count: 38691
[Report This] Published: 06/30/2008 Updated: 10/08/2012
Reviewer: KaL Signed
Date: 11/19/2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

So you know completely where I’m coming from, I’m a Ron and Hermione fan (mostly Ron).  I knew after reading the second book that they would end up together.

 

Though I like stories that make Draco more “human” I decided to give your story a try.  I’m not sure your story has done so yet, Draco still has too many of his traits that made him such a bastard at Hogwarts.

 

Unless I really missed a lot in my reading Hermione threw Ron over after 7 years because he couldn’t “speak the words she longed to hear” and fell in love with Draco after watching him with is mother for a week or so. 

I don’t blame Ron for his actions, what more of a betrayal could she have done; turning to his nemesis of 7 years.  Did she even consider his mourning for Fred? 

Obviously, I don’t really like your Hermione very much.  She seems self absorbed and vindictive instead of the loving giving friend you want her to be.  The reunion with Ron as a case in point she accused and blamed; didn’t listen then threw him out.  But she will forgive Draco for his cheating with another woman; just a little worse than calling her a whore; oh, yeah Draco called her that too.  Makes no sense to me.

I did enjoy Draco’s moments with the Aislings and his reunion with his mother, I thought those were really well written, but I liked Ron’s reunion with his Mum and Harry more.

Hoping that Draco soon becomes “human” he’s working on it.  I hope all your  characters find happiness.  Thanks for an entertaining read.

P.S.  I think Hermione and Draco would have both been smart enough not to get pregnant.



Author's Response:

I know I am posting my fic in the wrong site. My beta thought it would be a good idea and frankly after so many chapters I'd feel bad if I delete it. That a fan of the pairing of Ron and Hermione has taken the time to read my fic tells me you are a very mature person. I feel like apologizing for it. Your complains about Draco are valid, my beta (another huge fan of Ron and Hermione) pointed at few of those to me. I don't give a background story as to how or when Hermione and Draco fell in love, a mistake? Maybe. The reunion with Ron, in the context of my fic, couldn't have gone any other way. It was the first time they saw each other. Hermione had just read the article so Ron coming out of nowhere threw her off.  Ron is coming back, and this time Hermione will listen. And no, Hermione didn't forgive Draco, she broke it off with him at the end of chapter 36. Thank you for your compliments, your criticisms and for being so open-minded. The good thing about fandom that there is such variety and quality we all get to read and enjoy what we like. In fact, I would like a few recommendations of fics with the Ron/Hermione pairing. Aside from BrandedFaithfully's fics no one has picked my interest. Once again thank you very much.

Remain blessed,

Elena

For His Ears Only by luvscharlie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes [Reviews - 5]
Summary: It is Hermione Granger's first day of work in the Department for the Regulation and Control of Magical Creatures and her first night in a new home. Ron makes both unforgettable.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Fluff, PWP, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Major Fluff, Public Sex, RST, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6248 Read Count: 2766
[Report This] Published: 07/13/2008 Updated: 07/13/2008
Reviewer: KaL Signed
Date: 07/13/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a lovely story.  I love the "kitten" nickname (flash back to 1st year and polijuice potion maybe) and then to have it in the ting, perfect.

When Ron Became a Man by missgranger2 Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]
Summary: Past Featured StoryThis is a missing moment from "Catch Me If You Can".  A year of hunting Horcruxes, defeating Voldemort and losing loved ones has forever changed Ron. While in Australia with Hermione, he helps her to reconnect with her parents in his own way.         
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3131 Read Count: 5307
[Report This] Published: 07/21/2008 Updated: 07/21/2008
Reviewer: KaL Signed
Date: 07/22/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes, what a nice fluffy outtake.  I just loved it.

She had become more precious to him than anyone. I think Ron will always cherish Hermione therefore loving her more than anyone else ever could.

Just a note, in my mind there is no way Hermione would have said Oh, Ronald after he asked her to be his girlfriend, she saves his full name for when she's mad, warning him of what's to come.



Author's Response:

Hi lovely Kal!

   How are you? I'm glad you enjoyed this! Yes, I do think you're right about her only calling him Ronald when she's mad at him. I'll try to go in and edit it. Thanks for keeping me on my toes! I can't wait to hear from you again!

*hugs*

missgranger2

 

Making Amends by spidergirl Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 [Reviews - 2]
Summary: After his return, Hermione knew she and Ron needed to be on better terms. She was was determined to have a talk with him, but surprisingly he took the initiative.

***Missing Moment from Chapter 20 of Deathly Hallows.***
Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2620 Read Count: 1064
[Report This] Published: 08/04/2008 Updated: 08/04/2008
Reviewer: KaL Signed
Date: 08/05/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Making Amends

Nice missing moment.  I like that "clearing" the air between them gave Hermione such peace. 

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Glad you liked it! :)

For the Birthday Girl by willowwand Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Ron surprises Hermione on her birthday.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: PWP, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1521 Read Count: 2553
[Report This] Published: 08/04/2008 Updated: 08/04/2008
Reviewer: KaL Signed
Date: 08/05/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cute, fluffy, romantic...just what I like.  Great moment.

She Will Be Loved by missgranger2 Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary: A missing moment from “Catch Me If You Can.” 

An incident at the shop forces Hermione to re-examine the relationship with her temperamental redhead. A short story about their "first time".
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9261 Read Count: 6916
[Report This] Published: 08/11/2008 Updated: 08/11/2008
Reviewer: KaL Signed
Date: 08/11/2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

What a wonderful first time story.  Ron will always protect Hermione.  He has since he was eleven and he just gets more protective over time.

What a horrible expierence for Hermione and you know this won't be the last time some "fan" abuses her.  No wonderful she's a mess in Catch besides her constant worry for Ron when he's gone, she's without her protector and has to face these freaks by herself.  I bet having Ron hurt and just thinking about the possiblity of loosing him forever, well it would send me over the edge.

One thing, I know I always have "one thing".  Hermione would be studying for NEWTS as they all took their OWLS the end of 5th year. 

 



Author's Response:

Hello Gorgeous KaL!

    I am so glad you liked the story. Another reviewer also pointed out that it should be NEWTS and not OWLS. *sigh* Will I ever get it right? *laughs* I am going to go in and change it and thanks for pointing it out. As usual you are as perceptive as ever as to why Hermione panics when Ron leaves her in "Catch"! I look forward to hearing from you again beauiful KaL!!!!

*SMOOCH*

missgranger2 

Tattoo by tqpannie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Hermione likes Ron's tattoo.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, PWP
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Het, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1283 Read Count: 1924
[Report This] Published: 09/07/2008 Updated: 09/07/2008
Reviewer: KaL Signed
Date: 09/08/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hot..so hot.  I love Ron and Hermione Auror and wife.

Once Upon a Time by luvscharlie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Because to get to happily ever after, we must first begin with once upon a time.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, PWP, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Major Fluff, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1734 Read Count: 2111
[Report This] Published: 11/06/2008 Updated: 11/06/2008
Reviewer: KaL Signed
Date: 11/07/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cute.

Jealous Much? by missgranger2 Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 42]
Summary: According to Ron, all blokes are randy sodding gits underneath it all.  *winks*    
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley, Various
Genres: Comedy, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10443 Read Count: 12795
[Report This] Published: 01/10/2009 Updated: 01/31/2009
Reviewer: KaL Signed
Date: 01/26/2009 Title: Chapter 3: "I Need a Way Back"

Oh. what a stupid stupid Ron you have in this story.  If I was Hermione I would consider leaving too.

Author's Response:

Hello Beautiful KaL!

Oh this is a very stupid Ron indeed! Doesn't he know that his girl could literally do anything to him with her wand?! Still, you gotta love him! *laughs* Thanks for your review dearest as they mean so much! Please let me know what you think of the next chapter!

*BIG hug*

missgranger2 

Reviewer: KaL Signed
Date: 01/31/2009 Title: Chapter 4: "I Just Need You!"

And the lived happily ever after. 

Cute story with a great ending.  Thanks



Author's Response:

Hello Lovely KaL!

Oh yes, our boy and girl just had to live happily ever after! *laughs* I am glad you liked it dearest. I enjoyed writing it as it was a departure from the angst I have written lately. Thanks again for your lovely comments as they mean the world to me!!!

*SMOOCH*

missgranger2   

Siege by missgranger2 Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 36]
Summary: Hermione and the children are taken hostage.  Will Ron and Harry be able to save them before it's too late?
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Hugo Weasley, OFC, Ron Weasley, Rose Weasley, Various
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Strong Language, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12723 Read Count: 5766
[Report This] Published: 01/22/2009 Updated: 04/21/2009
Reviewer: KaL Signed
Date: 01/23/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You cruel, cruel human being.  How can you leave us like that.  You have so many stories in the workd I don't know what to say other than "get busy girl, I need updates on all of them, but mostly this one.

Good work, you have me hooked.



Author's Response:

Hello Gorgeous KaL!

How in the world have you been?! I haven't heard from you in ages! I know the cliffhanger was very cruel on my part! *laughs* I have been in a writing mood lately. I haven't forgotten your missing moment request from Catch about what happened to Ron during the mission he was on. I really hope to do it soon! I am sending the next chapter of this story to my beta tonight- plus a new chapter of Live. It was so great hearing from you!!!! Please let me know what you think of the next chapter dearest!

*SMOOCH*

missgranger2 

Reviewer: KaL Signed
Date: 03/26/2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Miss Granger, What can I say other than what a marvelous story.  You show our heroes courage and bravery in each painful move Hermione makes.  Ron was so wonderful.  He held it together much better than I would have. 

I can't wait for Ron to save the kids and bring those home invaders to justice, I agree with Ron no stunning, finish them.



Author's Response:

Hello to the Beautiful KaL!

I am so happy you like it lovely! *smiles* And yes, our boy needs to "take care of business" too I think! I have always wanted to write a story where Hermione and the kids' lives were at risk and see how our boy would react. There is one more chapter and I really hope you'll like it! Another chapter of your story should be up soon!!!! Thanks for your kind comments as they mean the absolute world to me! *hugs*

*SMOOCH*

missgranger2