Penname: Verdenia [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 08/10/2006
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I'm 29 & live in California.

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Burning From The Inside by Cluegirl Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Harry's pushed it too far, and there's only one way left to get through.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Dungeon
Characters: Harry Potter
Genres: Erotica
Time Period: None
Warnings: Slash, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3721 Read Count: 4801
[Report This] Published: 10/04/2005 Updated: 10/04/2005
Reviewer: Verdenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/10/2006 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Holy crap.  Wow, that was intense.  I am whelmed.  Wow.

clicked here from the Featured Stories link. 

Double Dare by Cluegirl Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Past Featured StoryHermione thinks she knows something, but confronting Professor Snape about it yields a very different result to what she'd expected. Sequel to Burning From the Inside.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Dungeon
Characters: Harry Potter, Augustus Rookwood
Genres: Erotica
Time Period: None
Warnings: Slash, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4653 Read Count: 1972
[Report This] Published: 10/22/2005 Updated: 10/22/2005
Reviewer: Verdenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/10/2006 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

*giggle*  OH, Brava!  ;P  Great stuff.  ;D

The following paragraph made me take note of its poetry:

Those lips never give utterance so quietly as that -- they trumpet, they hiss, they proclaim, snarl and shout -- but this is low, level and smooth as a candle's gleam in a draughtless room. It takes me a moment of staring at his lips to realize that he has spoken at all. 

Cheers, darling. 

Princes of Maine by Scoradh Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Harry wakes one morning to find an abandoned baby on his doorstep. Little does he know that this is only the beginning of his most challenging adventure yet: parenthood.

Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Contains Spoiler for HBP, Masturbation, Slash, Strong Language, Voyeurism
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30530 Read Count: 4598
[Report This] Published: 06/01/2006 Updated: 06/01/2006
Reviewer: Verdenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/12/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1/1

Neat.  a very cute and sweet story.  ;D

World And Time Enough by wolfiekins Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Immortality. Sounds great, especially if you're a Wizard and bonded to the love of your life. But change is the one constant in the universe that even vampires cannot deny, or ignore. Based on FLING WIDE THE WHIRLWIND, by Thevina. Vamp!Ron/Harry.
Categories: The Broomshed > Dark Side
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Crossovers, Darkfic, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Character Death, EWE, Slash, Strong Language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9145 Read Count: 1050
[Report This] Published: 06/16/2006 Updated: 06/17/2006
Reviewer: Verdenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/10/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Patterns

Aww.  I cried near the end there, with Martin and Marilena.  ;(  Truly, you have done your job, to make me feel emotion for these long-lived versions of our boys.

Sad but sweet.  ;P

The title and idea remind me of "Time Enough for Love" by Heinlein, have you read it? 



Author's Response:

Oh my, how could I have missed this review??? 

You know, of all the stuff I've written so far, that final scene with Martin and Marilena is my most favourite, the most satisfying.  

There was never any question that they'd meet and be together for the end; and really, they'd had three or four lifetimes worth of love and sex and togetherness.  How long can one go on?  It just seems like the press of memory, the ache of those long gone would finally become overwhelming...

No, I can't say as I've read that particular Heinlein, although I've read many of his works...thanks for the rec, and for the most wonderful comments! 

 

Occassional Demons by Cluegirl Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Slughorn's ghosts are troubling him, but he knows Harry can help.
Categories: The Broomshed > Dark Side
Characters: Harry Potter, Horace Slughorn, Augustus Rookwood
Genres: Darkfic
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4934 Read Count: 650
[Report This] Published: 06/16/2006 Updated: 06/16/2006
Reviewer: Verdenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/10/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow.  it's like, creepy and scary and wrong, and yet somehow, so right for this certain Harry to seize his chance at power like this.

Very different.  My initial reaction was along the lines of, OMGWTF?, but I'm glad I kept reading.  It was strangely satisfying.

 Also, there are a lot of weird characters in here--you may wish to re-upload.

Cheers! 

Duende by Cluegirl Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: On his first night at Grimmauld Place, Harry discovers that he and his father share a strange allergy. Luckily, Remus and Sirius are there to help see him through.

Categories: The Broomshed > More Than Two
Characters: Sirius Black, Remus Lupin, Harry Potter
Genres: Erotica
Time Period: None
Warnings: Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Threesome
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6836 Read Count: 3076
[Report This] Published: 06/16/2006 Updated: 06/16/2006
Reviewer: Verdenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/10/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beautiful.  Really well done.  I like the doxy venom as a plausible plot device to make them need to be together.  ;P

Ripped by wolfiekins Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: Harry awakes to find himself in a strangely familiar place, surrounded by people he recognizes but who cannot possibly be real.
Categories: Dark Tales > Darkness Falls
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Neville Longbottom, Ron Weasley
Genres: Darkfic, Drama, Erotica
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Character Death, EWE, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10574 Read Count: 2231
[Report This] Published: 12/09/2006 Updated: 12/09/2006
Reviewer: Verdenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/18/2007 Title: Chapter 1: One

Aw, wow.  I came to re-read this so I could tell painless_j in her alternate reality search.  :D

I did find two little typos:

"You must forgive my rather rushed intrusion into you {your} mind, but our current situation dictates that we waste no time with gratuitous pleasantries."

"But all this comes as no surprise to you, does it? No, I see that you're not shocked at all. "Oh, this is just lovely! Tell me, Harry, does anyone in your reality know this about you?" Neville was grinning, his eyes, for the first time, were bright, alive.
{extra “ in middle}
 

Cheers, dear!  ;D  I really like this story.


Author's Response:

OMG...I'm so behind in responding to reviews...

Thanks for the mini-beta!  And I'm pleased you like the fic!  I appreciate you taking the time to help out!

*grins*