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Anointing Life's Eyes by wook77 Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Seamus is determined to live the rest of his life as a Muggle farmer and forget the past, but Neville is determined to make him to remember.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: Dean Thomas, Neville Longbottom, Seamus Finnigan
Genres: Angst, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Character Death, Contains Spoilers for DH, Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14641 Read Count: 1956
[Report This] Published: 12/01/2007 Updated: 12/01/2007
Reviewer: scribhneoir Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/10/2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This is a great story and it was a joy to read. I like the focus on these two characters, Seamus in particular. It is believable, intriguing and interesting to see how Seamus and Neville would deal with this post-war world. I like the fact that it's a gradual reconciliation, it's a step by step process and it's almost like we, as readers, are walking with Seamus until he finally gets to Neville at Hogwarts.

The angst, drama and heartbreaking emotion are all wonderfully written and your characterisation of Seamus is great.

Well done!

Sodding Randy Git by I_M_Boo Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Past Featured StoryRon attempts to buy and wrap a gift for Hermione that will show her just how much she means to him nothing really goes as planned
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: George Weasley, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lee Jordan, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Fluff
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Het
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4084 Read Count: 3725
[Report This] Published: 01/05/2008 Updated: 01/05/2008
Reviewer: scribhneoir Signed
Date: 02/01/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a great insight into a possible future for Ron and Hermione, full of laughter, love and poignant moments. I especially like the fact that they know each other better than they even realise. Well Done!

All That We See Or Seem by IamShadow Rated: FG - Family Guidance starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]

Harry collapses after seeing his children off on the Hogwarts Express. When he awakes, things aren't as they were.

Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Madam Pomfrey, Remus Lupin, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Drama, General
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoilers for DH, Hurt/Comfort, Minor Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10884 Read Count: 8747
[Report This] Published: 05/06/2008 Updated: 05/17/2008
Reviewer: scribhneoir Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/10/2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three: You Are Not Wrong

this is wonderful. Original and intriguing, you manage to create a really unique story. The Remus and Harry interactions are wonderful, and I like the way you've kept Harry's interactions with others to a minimum, it really emphasises the impact of these moments. Remus' characterisation is also wonderful.

Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you! I really wanted to centre the story firmly around their interaction, and though others come into it in the later chapters, the story remains primarily a Harry and Remus gen fic. Because the hospital ward itself doesn't really change, the conversations Harry shares with Remus are the way he marks the passing of time as his awareness grows and sharpens in the first few chapters. Though Remus is almost always there, he doesn't simply become part of the scenery (as Madam Pomfrey does, with her repetitive question and potions and rigid routine) because he provides Harry with information and acts as an anchor whenever Harry is at risk of placing too much weight on fantasy. I'm glad you like my Remus! He's very dear to me, and I'm particularly happy with how I captured him in this little series.

Dismantle the Sun by tjs_whatnot Rated: GP - General Public [Reviews - 2]
Summary: McGonagall's reaction...
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Drabbles
Characters: Minerva McGonagall
Genres: Drabble
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103 Read Count: 839
[Report This] Published: 05/08/2008 Updated: 05/08/2008
Reviewer: scribhneoir Signed
Date: 05/10/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this is a wonderful moment....heart-breaking.

Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, McGonagall's unique pespective on it all is particularly heart breaking. I'm glad that you liked it!