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A harmless, necessary cat by Thistlerose Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Two overdue apologies, one secret, and one promise.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Vacant Rooms
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1908 Read Count: 1978
[Report This] Published: 10/22/2005 Updated: 10/22/2005
Reviewer: jlemon Signed
Date: 12/03/2012 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

This was great, I could totally hear Hermione prattling on about Thomasina at increasing decibels when Ron wouldn't let it go! Cute name by the way...and cute ending :)

Office Supplies by Thistlerose Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Ron + Sharpies - shirt = love
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Romance, Fluff
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 739 Read Count: 546
[Report This] Published: 10/29/2005 Updated: 10/29/2005
Reviewer: jlemon Signed
Date: 12/03/2012 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Wow, that was wonderful :)

Fate of the Generations by BrandedFaithfully Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: Past Featured StoryIn the summer after sixth year, Harry is faced with many decisions; how to proceed with the horcrux hunt, how to keep his friends safe and what to do about his ever changing feelings towards a certain red-haired girl. What if this 'power the Dark Lord knows not' was in him all the time, but was being repressed? And could Ron's first Order mission bring back the answers that could unlock this power, forcing all of them to relive an ancient story and break the curse that became the fate of the generations.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Golden Trio
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Action/Adventure, Mystery, Romance, Trio
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 164021 Read Count: 38430
[Report This] Published: 03/28/2007 Updated: 12/03/2008
Reviewer: jlemon Signed
Date: 10/30/2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - A Second Try

Did Harry just lay a guilt-trip on Ron?  What a jackass.  Ron's been run ragged for months and he can't even vent for one night?  This is the main thing that bothers me:  Ron's always the person who has to clean up the mess, no matter who makes it.  Harry doesn't seem to care at all that Hermione spends time with Maloy, even when it obviously bothers Ron.  It's fine that Harry debunks Ron's crazy theories, but can't Harry be a even little sympathetic?  After all the crap Ron's listened to Harry complain about, it'd be nice if Harry returned the favor without making Ron feel guilty.

"You have to make things work.  Even if Hermione made some bad judgments, she did apologize."  An apology is not a magic wand that fixes everything.  And why is it incumbent upon Ron to make it work?  It takes 2 people to run a relationship, and to this point Hermione's not been very participative.  And seeing her stick up so passionately for Draco again leads me to believe that she's going to end up in another situation with him--I mean, her behavior never changes so it's only a metter of time.  I'm debating if I shold even bother reading the rest of the story, no matter how interesting it is.  It's not worth seeing Ron get trampled on again.

Reviewer: jlemon Signed
Date: 10/30/2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Unspoken Desire

This is a well-written story with an interesting plot, but it is a very frustrating read.  I'll come right out and say it: Hermione doesn't deserve Ron at all.  She treats him like garbage.  She is always ending up in sexual situations with Draco, Ron's worst enemy, a man who has harassed and belittled the Weasleys his entire life.  Even now that Hermione spends time with him, he hasn't changed his stance regarding the Weasleys, yet this doesn't seem to bother Hermione.  She is completely heartless and I just can't stand seeing her wound Ron over, and over, and over again.  It never stops.

Seeing her call Draco sexy and fantastic in his bed when they're both half-naked was too much.  The way she said it made it sound like SHE was chained to Ron, who was keeping her from doing things that she really wanted to do, instead of the other way around like she was complaining about earlier.  I'm not really sure what Ron would lose if she ended up with Draco.  Hermione and Draco are a better couple anyway--they both care about themselves.  Hermione certainly doesn't care about the health of her child.

"...but he acts like he doesn't really want me anymore." Why would he want to be with a girl who treats him so badly all the time, always screams at him, and routinely goes off for private time with someone he hates?  Hermione knew from the start that Draco wants a relationship with her, but she makes no changes to her interactions with him.  I'm hard-pressed to anything she could possibly do to hurt Ron worse than she's been hurting him.  Maybe shag Draco right in front of him--I mean, she's already kissed Draco right in front of him.

The ironic thing is that she didn't want to end up with Ron solely because of the baby, but her actions have ensured that that will happen.  What reasons has she given Ron to stay?  Affection?  Understanding?  Support?  Respect? No, no, and hell no.  He dedicates his whole life to her and gets nothing in return.  It's not a very good relationship.  The only reason that Ron is with her is because he feels honor-bound to stick by his family no matter how many times his heart gets cut out.  The real Ron would stick up for himself and not allow her to keep trampling him, but Ron the dad has to lay down and accept whatever happens.

I hope it's not too late for Ron to find somebody better.  Getting married and being a dad at 17 is not a recipe for success.  I hope he doesn't rush down that road, especially with someone who doensn't care for him even remotely close to the amount that he cares about her.  Find somebody better Ron--you deserve it.

Finally, I had to laugh after I read Draco drop the "L" word, and when he got righteously indignant on Hermione's behalf at the thought of Harry abandoning her and the child.  Isn't this the same guy who only a few sentences ago hadn't made up his mind as to whether he was going to sexually assault a delirious girl who showed up on his door asking for help?  They don't get much sicker than that.  But at least he's sexy and fantastic, and that's all that matters, right Hermione? 

Breasts by tqpannie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: Ron had never seen breasts before
Categories: The Broomshed > Drabbles
Characters: Lavender Brown, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drabble
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 183 Read Count: 992
[Report This] Published: 04/25/2007 Updated: 04/25/2007
Reviewer: jlemon Signed
Date: 11/30/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hahaha! this story reminds me of that Bob Seger lyric: "I used her, she used me, neither one cared...we were getting our share."

Louder Than Words by scribooty Rated: RT - Restricted Themes [Reviews - 0]
Summary: During the war, Harry and Hermione discover that they belong together. Their spouses may not agree. (This is an older fic that I'm just now archiving here.)
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger
Genres: Angst
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5222 Read Count: 796
[Report This] Published: 09/21/2007 Updated: 09/21/2007
Reviewer: jlemon Signed
Date: 11/24/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hermione does not love Ron...you don't go behind someone's back like that if you love them. She's just rationalizing the fact that she's a coward. She's too spineless to be honest so she decides to be selfish and deceitful instead. There is no love in that.

If you're not happy in your marriage, be honest about it. Maybe harry and Hermione did end up with the wrong people, but they never gave it a try did they? They started the affair right after both got married.

The future doesn't seem that bright for Harry and Hermione in the future either. Eventually they will become annoyed with personal habits like with Ron and Ginny. They will no longer be a supplement for each other, they will have to be everything. Neither one seems easily satisfied; it's too east to see them cheating on each other down the line. And down the line, when they have to face what they gave up for each other...burning the bridge with the Weasleys and every friend at Hogwarts, suffering the deserved reputational damage. That's a lot of cost to measure up to for the other person to think it was worth it. Good luck you guys!