Penname: exartemarte [Contact] Real name: David
Member Since: 07/30/2006
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Road Trip by simons_flower Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Hermione’s home alone and really misses her boys.
Categories: The Broomshed > Drabbles
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 967 Read Count: 674
[Report This] Published: 10/23/2005 Updated: 10/23/2005
Reviewer: exartemarte Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/16/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Road Trip

A great trio short. I love the way she compares them. And Ron walking in is a neat ending.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Vestal Virgin by simons_flower Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Past Featured StoryDespite the end of the war, Hermione becomes more and more withdrawn until Harry and Ron ambush her to figure out why.  The answer surprises them.
Categories: The Broomshed > Ménage a Trio
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Trio
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Het, Masturbation, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Threesome, Voyeurism
Series: Demelza House Fundraiser
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5606 Read Count: 4117
[Report This] Published: 09/03/2006 Updated: 09/03/2006
Reviewer: exartemarte Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/16/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Vestal Virgin

Wow! That was quite a tale, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

A general problem with trio fics is establishing a believable scenario, and I think you've done that pretty well - flat sharing, unspoken fantasies and broody Hermione all building up to a situation in which something had to happen. And for me personally, the story is the better for avoiding graphic male slash.

Excellent smut, and all for charity - well done!



Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm glad the set up worked for you...as well as the delivery :)

The Morning After by meesha1971 Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary: Past Featured StoryHermione wakes up to a surprise the morning after Bill and Fleur's wedding.
Categories: The Broomshed > Ménage a Trio
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Erotica, Fluff, PWP, Romance, Trio
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: Demelza House Fundraiser
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13144 Read Count: 3730
[Report This] Published: 09/16/2006 Updated: 09/16/2006
Reviewer: exartemarte Signed
Date: 09/19/2006 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Great story - I really enjoyed reading this. Among the things that impressed me most are the extent to which you have kept them in character, given that they're naked in bed together, and that you have written a highly erotic tale without ever becoming cliched or crude.

Author's Response: Thank you!  And thanks for all your help.  Your input made it a lot better.  :)

Asking For Her Hand by tqpannie Rated: FG - Family Guidance starstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary: Past Featured StoryRon goes to visit Mr. Granger to ask permission to marry Hermione.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Fluff, General, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Major Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2029 Read Count: 3188
[Report This] Published: 03/04/2008 Updated: 03/04/2008
Reviewer: exartemarte Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03/08/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice - this is one of my favourite themes. Your Ron is spot-on, and I love how her father knows that Ron is so good for her.

Moving On by willowwand Rated: FG - Family Guidance starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Ron and Ginny discuss the year that the trio spent looking for Horcruxes and what changes are yet to come. Gen!fic

Written for Exartemarte for TQP's Ron-a-Thon Silent Auction.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: General
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1468 Read Count: 793
[Report This] Published: 07/07/2008 Updated: 07/07/2008
Reviewer: exartemarte Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07/08/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like it. You capture a really good brother/sister dynamic here and it rings true. They're not yet as easy with each as they will be when they're both married and raising families of their own, but they've moved on a long way since Ginny was experimenting with boys and Ron wanted to thump anyone who looked at his sister. There's a mature sibling relatonship in the making here.

The ghoul, and making space for Harry, are nice background touches, as is Ron's awareness of what time Harry went to bed.

A nice job, willowwand - thank you.

Season of the Wolf by mrmoon Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Seamus Finnigan is having trouble getting up the nerve to go back home to Ireland and face the family. Lavender Brown is there to help.


Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Dean Thomas, Lavender Brown, Luna Lovegood, OFC, OMC, Seamus Finnigan
Genres: General, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Minor Fluff
Series: Sisters of the Moon, Professor Finnigan
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18309 Read Count: 2897
[Report This] Published: 11/25/2008 Updated: 12/03/2008
Reviewer: exartemarte Signed
Date: 12/05/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Bargaining

I enjoyed this. In particular, I like your characterisation of Lavender. I'm a bit of a Lavender fan from way back, and I think she is too often represented in fan fiction as some sort of vacuous bimbo. I think you draw a good picture of an intelligent, desirable young woman who has come to terms with the awful things that happened to her, and is prepared to take a chance on a relationship with someone that she thinks can handle it.

Author's Response:

Tips hat.

 

Thank you ever so much, sir. I value your opinion and am in your debt.