Penname: Betynha [Contact] Real name: Elizabete
Member Since: 07/28/2006
Membership status: Member
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Just a great fan of HP!
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My Husband, My Lover, My Friend. by alloy Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:  He carries me over the threshold. Once I would have balked at the idea, but not today, not for him. Despite my protestations he only lets me down once we reach the bedroom, on the bed, a giant four poster, red curtains gold trim and an encompassing scarlet canopy. "I dreamt of you." He had said blushing, "Behind red curtains and silencing spells." I was too shy to confess the same.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > From Diagon Alley to Hogwarts
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1670 Read Count: 1391
[Report This] Published: 10/16/2006 Updated: 10/17/2006
Reviewer: Betynha Signed
Date: 10/31/2006 Title: Chapter 1: My Husband, My Lover, My Friend.

You know, I've already read many fanfics in english and in portuguese and it's serious, yours is one of the most beautiful that I've ever read!

It has such a powerful love between the lines! It's adorable!

I'm amazed!

Thanks for this beautiful story!

Mistakes? Yes and I'm sorry ok?!

o/



Author's Response: Thanks for an uplifting review

Eros by deenas Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary: The war is over; the battle won. They survived and so has their love. Now, it’s time to begin another journey: discovering each other.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Erotica, Fluff, PWP
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Het, Hurt/Comfort, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Future Plans
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2450 Read Count: 1576
[Report This] Published: 11/07/2006 Updated: 11/07/2006
Reviewer: Betynha Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/27/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Eros

Well, I read this a while ago but could not review. Now I reread and, again, I'm amazed.

Incredibly hot, sexy and completely romantic. I think that's why I love Ron and Hermione! ^^

Very nice job!

The Sneeze by risiepookie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
Summary: "Your problem," kiss, "is that you're thinking about it too much. You have to let it come naturally and then just let go."

Hermione has to sneeze, but some things she just can't force, try as she may.  Ron lends a helping hand by showing her the fun in patiently waiting for release. 

Not much plot, just an excuse for smut and spewing of random facts about sneezes.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Fluff
Time Period: None
Warnings: Major Fluff, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2744 Read Count: 2875
[Report This] Published: 11/13/2006 Updated: 11/14/2006
Reviewer: Betynha Signed
Date: 08/02/2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Sneeze

That was really fantastic! An inspiring piece of smut!

And I must say, I love Hermione's POV... especially because it always seemed that she was shy and stories like yours are... warming! I say it because I'm addicted to NC17 fics! =D

Anyway, very good! I think I've already read it a couple of times since Monday! =)

Bye!



Author's Response:

Hi Elizabete!  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing- I really appreciate it! 

I'm so glad you enjoyed the smuttiness of this piece, as well as the Hermione POV.  I LOVE Hermione POV as well, and I've used it on a couple of my other pieces.  Thanks again for leaving me your thoughts!  :o)  *yummy chocolate chip cookies for you*

Wicked Games by tqpannie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Past Featured StoryRon wants to lose control
Categories: The Broomshed > Ménage a Trio
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Trio
Time Period: None
Warnings: Bondage, Het, Rimming, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3048 Read Count: 4171
[Report This] Published: 02/03/2007 Updated: 02/03/2007
Reviewer: Betynha Signed
Date: 12/06/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Brilliant!

It's not very often to see a submissive Ron and I admit... is bloody fantastic! Very good! (:



Author's Response: Thanks!!!

Weasley is My King by shieldmaiden Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Hot boys, PWP, and Modified Song Lyrics.
Categories: The Broomshed > Drabbles, The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: None
Genres: Drabble, Erotica, PWP
Time Period: None
Warnings: Rimming, Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117 Read Count: 306
[Report This] Published: 02/05/2007 Updated: 02/05/2007
Reviewer: Betynha Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/12/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Weasley is My King

Brilliant...

Hot and fantastic!

The Truth About Ron by tqpannie Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: The truth is out there? Only two people know the whole story and Harry isn't there.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Drabbles
Characters: Various
Genres: Drabble
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 604 Read Count: 355
[Report This] Published: 03/01/2007 Updated: 03/01/2007
Reviewer: Betynha Signed
Date: 03/02/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cute! ^^

And I love Hermione being jealous! Loved it!

The Wager by tqpannie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Ron makes a bet with Hermione
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Erotica
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9720 Read Count: 4521
[Report This] Published: 03/09/2007 Updated: 03/09/2007
Reviewer: Betynha Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/25/2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

**Holding a big sign*

HERMIONE IS THE BEST! \o/

This was so hot and intense... I loved it!

Spying by tqpannie Rated: FG - Family Guidance starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Is Hermione really going out with him?
Categories: Remains of the Day > Drabbles
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drabble
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 313 Read Count: 468
[Report This] Published: 04/29/2007 Updated: 04/29/2007
Reviewer: Betynha Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/30/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hahahahahahahahaha

 

Very funny! It made my day. I love Ron this way... \o/

Let It Be Me by Tart Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary: An argument leads to a second chance
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Fluff, PWP, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4570 Read Count: 2419
[Report This] Published: 06/09/2007 Updated: 06/09/2007
Reviewer: Betynha Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/13/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Blimey! What a wonderful story! Thank God I've found you here! o/

This was a fantastic fic.... I think I'll talk with a friend to read it... after all, we love this naughty Ron! =)

Great job! o/



Author's Response: I'm so sorry I did not respond to this before now! I'm really glad you loved this fic. I love Naughty!Ron too. *wink*

Sweet Dreams of You by Tart Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Ron learns that Hermione had a naughty dream about him. He wants details.

Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Fluff, PWP, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4327 Read Count: 2769
[Report This] Published: 06/09/2007 Updated: 06/09/2007
Reviewer: Betynha Signed
Date: 09/25/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Simply perfect... hot and sexy...

I love the way you write them... fantastic! *-*



Author's Response: Wow thanks! I'm glad that my Ron comes across as hot and sexy because that's how he always is in my mind. LoL.

Now More Than Ever by Tart Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary: It was the one thing she wanted the most and the very last thing she expected.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Het, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9903 Read Count: 3720
[Report This] Published: 07/02/2007 Updated: 07/09/2007
Reviewer: Betynha Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/03/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fantastic! So well written and touching as well... I'll be around (even if I don't have all the time I wanted, I'll be a faithful reader! *.*) waiting for the next chapter. Especially because I really want to know what's gonna happen now!

See ya!

o/



Author's Response: I'm so very glad you enjoyed it! I've finished the next chapter so it shouldn't be too long until it's posted. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Betynha Signed
Date: 07/12/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi! o/

What a great chapter... I think you helped me not hate Percy as much as I do (hehe)... He saved Ron and that was brilliant.

And the family meeting him... so touching.

Very well written... now I'll wait to see what's coming!! *-*

o/



Author's Response: Sorry it has not been updated yet. But thank you for the lovely review. RL is hectic at the moment but I\'m trying to finish the next chapter as soon as possible.

Stronger Than Me by risiepookie Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 28]
Summary: Past Featured Story“Please,” he says huskily, “I want you so bad,” and he kisses her again. A sob catches in my throat as the angry tears begin their rise again. He’s never said those words to me and I can’t help but feel she has stolen words she has no right to.

She watches and she tries to understand why she wasn't enough for Ron.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Vacant Rooms
Characters: Hermione Granger, Lavender Brown, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Het
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2732 Read Count: 5675
[Report This] Published: 08/13/2007 Updated: 08/13/2007
Reviewer: Betynha Signed
Date: 04/08/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Stronger Than Me

I'm impressed, absolutely impressed!

I believe not only I, but many people thought it was Hermione speaking. Seriously, I only can say that this is brilliant! If I say congratulations it will not cover my real thought about your fic.

Well done, at least! :)

Graduation Day (and Night) by Tart Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary: Ron graduates from Auror training and gets a graduation gift that was worth waiting for.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Het, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7009 Read Count: 10162
[Report This] Published: 09/04/2007 Updated: 10/04/2007
Reviewer: Betynha Signed
Date: 09/25/2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh my!!!

Oh my!!!

Fantastic... a tatoo! o/ What a fantastic gift to our King! *__* As always, a very good chapter and now I'm eager to know what comes next! o/

o/



Author's Response: Thank you! Should not be too long until the next chapter is up.

When Lightning Strikes by Tart Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary: This was my submission for the harry_and_ron First Line Challenge.

My prompt was: He stared at it, sure it was entirely too big.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Fluff, PWP, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: EWE, Minor Fluff, Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 947 Read Count: 756
[Report This] Published: 10/30/2007 Updated: 11/01/2007
Reviewer: Betynha Signed
Date: 11/12/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh yeah!!! Ron/Harry is love and I really loved this piece!

A tattoed Ron... OMG!!! *-*

 



Author's Response:

Yeah there's just something about a gorgeous man with ink

*sigh*

I'm glad you liked it!