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Midnight Confessions by alloy Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 58]
Summary: “I love you Hermione Granger,” he whispered, wishing he had the courage to say it to her properly, to her face.

“Then why are you snogging Lavender Brown?” Came an unexpected reply.

In the infirmary Ron & Hermione come to an understanding, but not before they make their 'Midnight Confessions' and in that brief period before Bill's wedding Ron takes charge of his life planning a future with the woman he loves.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > From Diagon Alley to Hogwarts
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: Midnight Confessions
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49671 Read Count: 44680
[Report This] Published: 09/27/2006 Updated: 07/27/2011
Reviewer: bodyguard Signed half-star
Date: 08/02/2011 Title: Chapter 25: Look at You That Way

I was waiting to read all chapter and then review, but I had to review this chapter, because I don't get the reason behind this chapter. It's so off and wrong with the rest of the story, that I don't understand why you put it.

 I know that you didn't write this chapter but you agree to it, so I have to ask. You write a great R/Hr story and out of the blue you put a chapter like this in your story? Why?

This Leviathan person is H/Hr and Trio lover, so his perception of what the characters are or what they are capable to do is different. His opinion is not objective. Maybe he feels that every girl a guy sees in his life is a possible sex chance, but since this story wasn't about that, why you allowed it?

The image of Hermione flirting all of a sudden with Harry and actually consider him as better in every area than Ron and encouraging him to continue lusting after her, is so wrong for the story you're writing. 

I'm disappointed and I'm not going to read anymore. Too bad, because you wrote 24 brilliant chapters, but some guy convince you that a cheap storyline like H/Hr flirting with each other is inevitable(which is laughable. This guy just hates R/Hr. That's the only reason of this chapter). Too bad you didn't have faith in your own writing and let others getting in your story and COMPLETELY ruin it.



Author's Response: Sorry to hear that you're not going to follow to the end.

Live...or Die Trying by missgranger2 Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 399]
Summary: Hermione becomes bitter and lost after Ron and Harry leave her.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley, Various
Genres: Angst, Comedy, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134755 Read Count: 71581
[Report This] Published: 02/09/2008 Updated: 05/29/2011
Reviewer: bodyguard Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/01/2011 Title: Chapter 33: Liar, Liar, Pants on Fire

This is the best story ever! And to think that it doesn't even have Ron/Hermione yet as a couple! Honestly I LOVE this story!

Can you please update soon?