Penname: UH60TI [Contact] Real name: Doug Riggs
Member Since: 07/28/2011
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A Borrowed Moment by scribhneoir Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary: 'She didn’t want to leave this room, to go downstairs and face the people who were waiting for her. She wanted to hold on to this moment and deny reality its existence for just a bit longer.'
Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 982 Read Count: 3004
[Report This] Published: 05/17/2008 Updated: 05/18/2008
Reviewer: UH60TI Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07/28/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice.  I truly liked the way you handeled Hermione's mood and emotions.  I really liked the way the story developed and the reader did not know why Hermione didn't want to leave until the end of the story.

I look forward to more of your work