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Of Hearts and Heroes by emmilyne Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 126]
Summary: In the days following the Department of Mysteries there is no respite for Harry, as a long lost relative with exceptional powers comes to change his life forever. Ginny learns she is not the plain outsider she thinks she is. And grief and fear lead to late night connections for Ron and Hermione. Sixth year epic. (Pre-HBP/AU-beginning prior to last chapter of OoP) Ron/Hermione and Harry/Ginny.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ginny Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: Action/Adventure, Comedy, Erotica, Mystery, Romance, Tragedy
Time Period: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 394807 Read Count: 155163
[Report This] Published: 06/12/2006 Updated: 06/04/2012
Reviewer: hersheykiss Signed
Date: 10/18/2006 Title: Chapter 47: And It All Came Tumbling Down

Enough of the angst already!!!!  Give them - and us - a break!

Within You, Without You by mapleandmahogany Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 98]
Summary: Unless time had changed things very much, she knew the intense gaze of those green eyes meant that he wanted her as much as she did him.

“Gin?” Harry said, as one hand reached up to stroke her hair, too intimate for a friend.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ginny Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Erotica, Fluff, Mystery, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het, Minor Fluff, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63280 Read Count: 23249
[Report This] Published: 06/26/2006 Updated: 06/22/2007
Reviewer: hersheykiss Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 03/26/2007 Title: Chapter 10: In My Life

Why is it that Ginny has to be the one to be frustrated by the actions, or non-actions,  of Harry Potter throughout this story? 

 What happened to shannon? Why did he jump into a relationship with her and overlook Ginny.  Simply that fact that she "was still in school" is not viable as a good enough reason.   Why did he jump into bed with Shannon, but not Ginny? Does he feel he has to have the pure, virginal bride for his ultimate conquest? 

 why does Ginny get Harry off, but she gets nothing except the opportunity to make Harry feel good on seemingly all levels of his needs?   He gets release, she get nothing!  She has to know that she is not his first, yet he makes her wait to experience what should have been hers in the first place!
She is getting ripped off in this story and in her relationship with Harry.



Author's Response:

I would be happy to explain and discuss the characters rationale for their actions, 1) since you have so clearly been unable to understand them, 2) if you had raised your questions considerately.

However, your tactless, confrontational and mean spirited comments don't deserve my effort. A fair number of reviewers on this and other sites seem to be able to discuss and ask questions much more politely, not to mention, understand the story.

I considered deleting your comments, but instead, I'll leave this visible for anyone who might see, how rude you are. 

Taken by The Faceless Stranger by sweet_torments Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary: Hermione is woken by a faceless stranger, and she's forced to beg for something she should never want.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Dungeon
Characters: Hermione Granger, Draco Malfoy
Genres: Erotica
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, BDSM, Bondage, Non-Con
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3221 Read Count: 4903
[Report This] Published: 08/20/2006 Updated: 08/20/2006
Reviewer: hersheykiss Signed
Date: 10/19/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Will there be more?

One Year by deenas Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary: Ginny is about to begin her 7th year at Hogwarts. She'll be off on her own without Harry, Ron or Hermione for the first time. Instead of the ghost of Tom Riddle, Ginny will have to deal with a new Quidditch team, an annoying classmate, rumours and a pesky Ravenclaw who won't leave her alone.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Vacant Rooms
Characters: Harry Potter, Various, Ginny Weasley
Genres: Drama, Fluff, General, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Major Fluff, OC, Strong Language
Series: Future Plans
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81365 Read Count: 6529
[Report This] Published: 10/03/2006 Updated: 03/06/2007
Reviewer: hersheykiss Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/06/2007 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue

I don't get the ending.  It doesn't seem complete. 

The Wireless by Amythis Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 75]
[Report This] Published: 10/13/2007 Updated: 11/10/2008
Reviewer: hersheykiss Signed
Date: 06/12/2008 Title: Chapter 32: Thirty-Two: Timing

Harry and crew are really sick!

 

Harry doesn't deserve Ginny.  She should throw him out on his butt, sue him for EVERYTHING he has got and disown Ron and Hermione!

Reviewer: hersheykiss Signed
Date: 06/12/2008 Title: Chapter 33: Thirty-Three: Connection

These people are raising children?!?

Reviewer: hersheykiss Signed
Date: 06/14/2008 Title: Chapter 37: Thirty-Seven: Nice

Ginny should pack up her kids and MOVE to an undisclosed location while Harry is out cheating on her and his/her children.  Harry should lose all rights to his children due to his perversion, and honestly, so should R/H.  Neither one is an appropriate atmoshpere for kids.

Breathing Again by AccioHBP Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 18]
Summary: After the tragedy of war, all anyone can do is learn how to breathe again.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Major Fluff, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10014 Read Count: 12012
[Report This] Published: 11/21/2007 Updated: 06/07/2008
Reviewer: hersheykiss Signed
Date: 06/08/2008 Title: Chapter 3: Careers, Privacy, and Legilimency

They should ALL finish their educations!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: So I went to your page to see if there were other stories you did enjoy ("Was it just my story that you didn't like?") Alas, it seems you have a long history of writing mean-spirited and non-constructive reviews. Now, I'm not saying this story doesn't maybe deserve negative reviews, so long as they help me write a better story. However, the way you seem to just throw comments like that at me (and other authors- even great ones like mapleandmahogany) who have spent a great deal of time thinking their stories through is just plain inconsiderate. Write constructive criticms and see how much further your reviews go!

Reviewer: hersheykiss Signed
Date: 06/08/2008 Title: Chapter 4: We Can Work It Out

After a year of separation, why would Harry and Ginny agree to be apart for another?  He should return to school and graduate from Hogwarts before going into Auror training.  They all deserve some normalcy and time together to be young while they still are.



Author's Response: Fair enough, hersheykiss, but I'm afraid you'll have to have Jo Rowling field that question. My story is as canon-compliant as I possibly can make it. (For me, this includes interviews!) Ms Rowling herself has stated that Ginny and Hermione returned to school for their 7th year while Harry became an Auror and Ron went to work at WWW. Thanks for the review though, and I hope despite them not returning to school, you still enjoyed the story!

Righting a Wrong by deenas Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary: The pieces fall into place as his world falls apart.

This story is the sequel to So Wrong It Was Right and of how Harry and Ginny work things out.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Andromeda Tonks, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Kingsley Shacklebolt, OFC, OMC, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Underage
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18165 Read Count: 3275
[Report This] Published: 01/23/2008 Updated: 01/23/2008
Reviewer: hersheykiss Signed
Date: 01/23/2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

this story is really twisted!

 Harry has absolutely no excuse.  He cannot rationalize or justify what he did.  He - stupidly - broke things off with Ginny, but she made every effort for him to know that she still cared deeply for him.

He cheated, and deep down he knows he did.


Why in the world would he feel that it was HER job to get back together with him after the battle?  She made her thoughts and intentions known time and time again.  The ball was in his court to apologize to her and start things over.  He dropped his opportunities - apparently several times - and did not do the right thing by her. 

Harry is trying to project HIS guilt onto her. This is not a nice guy.  I don't know if this SHOULD  be forgiveable.  Once a cheater, always a cheater.

 

Ron should be ashamed of himself for being a party to more deception aimed at Ginny. 

 

This is

Reviewer: hersheykiss Signed
Date: 01/23/2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Can you apparate without a wand?

 Was July 18th before of after he slept with Andromeda?

 

She was right to make him start over, but should have made him grovel more.  He really HURT her, numerous times, (the thing with Andromeda was definitely NOT the first time he hurt her) but it seems she merely inconvenienced him.

 

She let him off the hook too easy. 

 

Love's Battle Revisited by hgseeker Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary: A married, albeit estranged, Harry and Hermione return to England after ten years in America, unsure of the reception they will receive because of the way they originally left.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Albus Dumbledore, Arthur Weasley, Draco Malfoy, Fred Weasley, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Kingsley Shacklebolt, Luna Lovegood, Minerva McGonagall, Molly Weasley, OFC, OMC, Remus Lupin, Ron Weasley, Viktor Krum
Genres: Drama, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Drug Usage, Het, Minor Fluff, Strong Language
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56198 Read Count: 6877
[Report This] Published: 02/27/2008 Updated: 06/17/2008
Reviewer: hersheykiss Signed
Date: 06/12/2008 Title: Chapter 14: The Honeymoon

Big mistake to get pregnant so soon!  they need time toghther.  After all, they have lost 10 years. 

 

I hope she does not get pregnant.

One Month by Ginfan Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary: Tired of seeing the one’s they need to be whole with someone else a young witch and wizard take extreme measures to win them, and in the process, find something they didn’t plan on discovering.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Dean Thomas, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lavender Brown, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Erotica
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6397 Read Count: 4235
[Report This] Published: 03/08/2008 Updated: 03/20/2008
Reviewer: hersheykiss Signed
Date: 03/09/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Acknowledgment

Who are "he" and "She"?  I have no idea who is with who.  Too confusing...