Penname: Leviathan [Contact] Real name: Jonathan Andrew Sheen
Member Since: 06/10/2006
Membership status: Administrator
Bio:
I live in Pepperell, Massachusetts, USA.
My Blog for Fan Fiction is:

http://leviathan0999.livejournal.com/

I have Way Too Many IM Accounts. On AIM I am also:

LeviathanWORK

and

LeviathanLAP

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All That They Had Not Lost by Quizzical Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 114]
Summary: The rest of the world had ceased to exist outside of their circle. Outside of their search. That would they do now they had found what they had been looking for, and it was all destroyed? So much had been lost in the process.

Written pre Deathly Hallows.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Three of Hearts
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Romance, Trio
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: All That They Had Not Lost
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27572 Read Count: 20644
[Report This] Published: 10/12/2006 Updated: 02/28/2007
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/01/2007 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue

Oh, God, so much love!

Q, this is such a gorgeous piece, so quiet and muted and loving and, good God, I can't begin to say.

"You're in love with us?" asked Hermione.

"With the two of us?" repeated Ron.

"Yeah. Like butterflies in the stomach, checking out your arse when you bend over, can't stop touching you, hoping you think I'm pretty kind of in love."


"Hope you think I'm pretty kind of in love"! Oh, God, that's magnificent!

And the perfect counterpoint:

Little Charlie giggled. "Harry said arse."




Author's Response:

thanks my friend.

Q

My Husband, My Lover, My Friend. by alloy Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:  He carries me over the threshold. Once I would have balked at the idea, but not today, not for him. Despite my protestations he only lets me down once we reach the bedroom, on the bed, a giant four poster, red curtains gold trim and an encompassing scarlet canopy. "I dreamt of you." He had said blushing, "Behind red curtains and silencing spells." I was too shy to confess the same.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > From Diagon Alley to Hogwarts
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1670 Read Count: 1358
[Report This] Published: 10/16/2006 Updated: 10/17/2006
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/17/2006 Title: Chapter 1: My Husband, My Lover, My Friend.

Oh, excellent. The Ruby is such an amazing concept, so beautiful to build a token of love out of the product of that first act of love itself.

Magnificent!


Author's Response: thanks, had to make something uniquely magical from the event.

Lap Dance by alloy Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: For the CM 'Dance' Prompt
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Drabbles
Characters: Lavender Brown, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: Midnight Confessions
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 144 Read Count: 2033
[Report This] Published: 10/20/2006 Updated: 10/20/2006
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/20/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Lap Dance

I loved it on your LJ, and I love it still. And I stand by my two-sentence sequel.

Author's Response: Ron smiled for a long moment, then leaned forward, his lips a millimeter from her ear. \"And what,\" he asked, almost inaudibly, \"about my pole?\"

Making a Point by Attila Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Two stubborn people. A battle of wills. But what's the point?

'Ron, don't you think you're a bit old to be doing a dance of joy?'
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2417 Read Count: 1116
[Report This] Published: 10/21/2006 Updated: 10/21/2006
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/22/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, this couldn't be any more darling. It truly couldn't. It's all warm and fluffy and wonderful, and I thoroughly love it.

Author's Response: XD  Thank you!  You gave me quite the smile.

Bang by Attila Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Ron. Hermione. The Hospital Wing. A missing moment from HBP, but not the one you might think.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Vacant Rooms
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1025 Read Count: 1369
[Report This] Published: 10/21/2006 Updated: 10/21/2006
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/22/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, lovely, lovely, The spare, sparse language, chaotic, fragmented -- Ron!

Lovely.


Author's Response: Thank you!  It felt pretty chaotic to write.  :)

The Sneeze by risiepookie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
Summary: "Your problem," kiss, "is that you're thinking about it too much. You have to let it come naturally and then just let go."

Hermione has to sneeze, but some things she just can't force, try as she may.  Ron lends a helping hand by showing her the fun in patiently waiting for release. 

Not much plot, just an excuse for smut and spewing of random facts about sneezes.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Fluff
Time Period: None
Warnings: Major Fluff, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2744 Read Count: 2846
[Report This] Published: 11/13/2006 Updated: 11/14/2006
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/25/2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Sneeze

Unbearably hot and adorably cute, all in one elegant story.
Bravo!


Author's Response: Hi hon!

I’m so glad you enjoyed it!  It makes me ::squee:: every time I get a review from you, because I so admire you and your work.  If you thought it was hot, clearly I did something right!  Thanks for reading.  ::big squishy hugs::

*banana split with lots of whipped cream ::wink:: for you*

Meant To Be by spikescrypt Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: The trio's relationship changes in a way they never expected. But they soon realize that this was the way it was meant to be.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Three of Hearts
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Trio
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726 Read Count: 619
[Report This] Published: 11/22/2006 Updated: 11/22/2006
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/13/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Harry didn't know what he did to deserve them, but he sure as hell would keep doing it. Without them, he would be an empty shell, dead inside.

Oh, yes.

As Hermione finally got Ron into the shower she called back to the other love of her life.


Oh, Yes!

That is the trio I love! Oh, yes.

"That" Need by TheTrioMakesMeHot Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 174]
Summary: Sometimes people have needs they can't satisfy alone. Sometimes, "that" need requires help from our friends.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room, The Broomshed > The Ladies Room, The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ginny Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, PWP, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: FemSlash, Het, Masturbation, Rimming, Slash, Strong Sexual Content, Underage, Voyeurism, Weasleycest
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43934 Read Count: 256660
[Report This] Published: 12/30/2006 Updated: 04/23/2007
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/06/2007 Title: Chapter 4: Perhaps It Comes Naturally To All The Weasleys

Guh. Uh-guh-guh.

Yeah, that's hot. Oh, yeah.

Woah.


Author's Response: Umm...well...ahh, yeah.  Can I take that to mean I've left you speechless?  If so, I'm going to consider that a compliment.  Thanks for taking time to read and to review.

Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/22/2007 Title: Chapter 9: He'd Always Heard That Payback Was Hell

ZOMFG!

Oh, if this were any hotter, my computer would have melted! I'd had no idea you were still updating this, so I got a bunch of chapters in one go, and Oh, sweet lord, it's a good thing I'm sitting at a desk here at work, because this tent's hanging around for a bit! Guh!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review!  It's rather nice to have someone confirm that my writing is having the intended effect on my readers.  (Hope I didn't cause you to have to stay overtime at work). 

I should warn you though, if I achieve my goal, there are still some chapters to come that may require you to set your AC to "frost warning" in order to protect your computer, and a few where a good fan may be sufficient.

 

Please keep checking back as I try to add something every few days at least, and please keep me posted on what you think!

Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/26/2007 Title: Chapter 11: Like A Kitten With A Saucer Of Milk

Oh, man, that was definitely something to wake up to!

Wow!


Author's Response: Thanks so much for your feedback!  I'm glad to know my story doesn't just appeal to my female readers, and I hope you'll continue to stick with me and tell me what you think!

Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/13/2007 Title: Chapter 13: Wet and Slippery is Not a Problem

Yeah, very, very glad I read this one at home! This is Wuzza-hot! (Before you ask, I have no idea where "Wuzza" as a modifier comes from. To help you with context, I write it as I'm fairly quivering with "that need" myself!

Great work!


Author's Response: Oh goodie...then it conveyed the feeling I was after!  Wonderful to hear from you, as always, but PLEASE get back to your birthday chapter...I'm dying to finish reading YOUR story!!!

Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/17/2007 Title: Chapter 14: Lava From a Volcano

These chapters make me squirm a bit. They're very well-written, and undeniably hot. But it makes me kind of uncomfotable. I also think it's stretching Ron, especially, just that much too far out of character. I just can't see Ron having this conversation with Ginny,nor this interaction, and that knocks me a bit out of the story.

But that's reall a very slight cavill for a chapter that was very hot and loving, and showed a strong sense of characters who felt that they were swimming in very dangerous waters. 

Well-done!


Author's Response:

Good to hear from you, but I wasn't "fishing" honestly.  I was just worried after reading about "the bear-shaped dog" and wanted to let you know I was thinking of you.  Hope that takes a turn for the better!!!

I can certainly respect your concerns about this chapter.  This one and the first bit of the R/G lesson were questionable in my mind all along, but I think I outsmarted myself early-on with the "maybe I should offer to give him lessons" type comment ...it didn't seem like something I should just leave hanging.  I hope it won't but you off reading the rest.

As always, thank you for your comments.  I truly value your opinion!!!

Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/07/2007 Title: Chapter 15: More . . . P-pleeezze!

Terrific!

We ping-pong back and forth between two very hot scenes, and then cap it off with a sonderfully funny bit with the Fat Lady!

Well done.


Author's Response: Glad you approve!  And wonderful to hear from you as always!!!  Also glad you liked the bit of humor at the end.

Together Forever by thesteppyone Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary: Past Featured StoryA messed up potion, some unwanted side effects and a 'situation' they really could do without. Hermione/Ron centric and Lavender of course! Set during HBP and therefore may contain spoilers.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > From Diagon Alley to Hogwarts
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lavender Brown, Ron Weasley
Genres: None
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst
Series: The 'Togther Forever?' Universe
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75252 Read Count: 35011
[Report This] Published: 01/20/2007 Updated: 05/29/2008
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/21/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, yes! THis is such a favorite of mine! I love it! Thanks so much for bringing it here!

Author's Response: You're welcome! :D

The 38 Fears of Ronald Weasley by AmandaR Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Who ever thought Divination could open Ron's eyes? AU, takes place during the trio's year five. R/Hr.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Vacant Rooms
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2645 Read Count: 1190
[Report This] Published: 02/23/2007 Updated: 02/24/2007
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/22/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm sure I've already told you how I love this story. Maybe at CM, maybe someplace else.

But I want to tell you again, because I just have to. This is such a magnificently moving story, Ron is so spot-on, Hermione so thoroughly in-character, Harry so perfectly drawn.

It's fun and funny and then you get to the list, and hits you in the heart like a gold brick in a mink sleeve, staggering you and knocking you on yor ass with a hammerblow that feels like a silky caress.

Love it!


Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much. It's always humbling to get a review that's better written than the story itself. :)