Penname: ulncnd [Contact] Real name: Ryan
Member Since: 05/18/2010
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Harry Potter and the Twist of Time by Grand Poobah Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 27]
Summary: JKR's Book Seven is still years away. So, rather than wait that long, you can read Book Seven right here...right now!
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Remus Lupin, Harry Potter, Professor Sinistra, Ginny Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: Action/Adventure, Trio, Mystery, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Character Death, Het, Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 173620 Read Count: 53948
[Report This] Published: 11/05/2005 Updated: 11/25/2005
Reviewer: ulncnd Signed
Date: 05/25/2012 Title: Chapter 52: Immediate Aftermath

Seriously! Seriously? OMFG, that was the stupidest thing you had done throughout the story. I was expecting the last few chapters to be really good as the story overall is pretty good, but then you go and do the stupidest thing ever, having a threesome. OMFG, you are a moron. That just completely ruined the ending to this good story. Please, be realistic. Hermione will never, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever, want to be in a threesome. No matter how sexual Hermione Granger can be, even if it's always the quiet ones, Hermione's character is completely a one man person. Her character seems like she will only have sex with one man for her whole life. Now, I know the circumstances were different, but Harry, it should've been someone else. Next time you write a story, don't do that again. That will just ruin the entire story. If you want to do a threesome, put it in a threesome category, the unrealistic category.

Live...or Die Trying by missgranger2 Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 399]
Summary: Hermione becomes bitter and lost after Ron and Harry leave her.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley, Various
Genres: Angst, Comedy, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134755 Read Count: 72573
[Report This] Published: 02/09/2008 Updated: 05/29/2011
Reviewer: ulncnd Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/26/2011 Title: Chapter 1: "Broken"

I like the last half of the story. I mean, it was really hard to read through the first couple chapters or so of Hermione f'ing other guys, but I got through it. I sure hope she doesn't do it again for the rest of the story, except Ron.

Author's Response:

Hello ulncnd!

  Yeah, it is VERY AU.  *laughs* I have a few twists and turns in mind. There will be some more difficult times ahead for our boy and girl. Thank you for your comments and I truly hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story.