Penname: lunabelle [Contact] Real name: Mandi
Member Since: 12/23/2009
Membership status: Member
 am just me... although what that is exactly is up for debate...I have many names... AmandaLynn Adams Anderson, AmandaLynn, Amanda, Manda,Manda Panda, Mander,Mandi(y), Manawinn, Mana, PandaBear(burr),Pandaba, and many other things such as mushy gushy pet names and I am sure many unpleasant term from those ppl who I don't get along with LoL... I am a tom boy who loves fishing, football, most sports other than golf...and i dont like to play basketball but i do enjoy watching it! being outside and video games...(well I am learning to love them)bugs don't even freak me out.. well other than spiders but i like to consider them more as demons than bugs... but I'm still a girl who likes flowers, cute animals, boys, shinny stuff, SHOES, and you know sugar, spice and everything nice. I have a phenomenal bunch of friends... and my 5 best friends are the greatest ppl on earth (Ash thompson, Ang,Catilin, Shew, and Mark!) (Kristin Amore and shalena blanton are pretty amazing too.My boyfriend is a pretty cool kid, I'll keep him... for a while I suspose. I talk a lot and ramble about nothing, but i am a good listener... and I like to think I know a thing or two so I am pretty decent at dishing out advice. I am loving and willing to befriend anyone, and If I seem like a bitch its because I am, but that also means I probaly like you... Its the people I am nice to who should welp anything else you wanna know just ask!
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Together Forever by thesteppyone Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary: Past Featured StoryA messed up potion, some unwanted side effects and a 'situation' they really could do without. Hermione/Ron centric and Lavender of course! Set during HBP and therefore may contain spoilers.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > From Diagon Alley to Hogwarts
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lavender Brown, Ron Weasley
Genres: None
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst
Series: The 'Togther Forever?' Universe
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75252 Read Count: 35728
[Report This] Published: 01/20/2007 Updated: 05/29/2008
Reviewer: lunabelle Signed
Date: 12/29/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok let me begin by saying, I have been reading and not reviewing for far too long... AND this story was amazing, it made me laugh out loud, jump in my seat, gasp ... and in all the right places. I read it straight, through even skipping lunch today at work. I am glad you stuck to cannon... truly I am but the ending broke my heart. I feel as the reader, I was slapped in the face. I was so into this story, and I loved it. I am writing this review so that I don't end up hating the story. I mean this is not to bash on you as the writer, please know that I thought you were great!!! It was just that ending. It was like... well it was like reading deathly hallows all over again, but with even less answers. I don't know what exactly I am trying to say other than I loved reading this story but the ending made me fell like I wasted 4 hours doing so.

Author's Response:


Firstly, thank you for reviewing, every review means a lot to me :) I'm glad you liked the story and I understand your disappointment in the ending. It was always my intention to bring it back round to canon from when I started writing this story. I wanted to tell a tale of what could be, but what wasn't yet and I wanted to show the frustration we as readers felt but in a bigger way. I know it's probably disappointing for R/Hr shippers but I'm a canon girl and wanted to keep it that way.

I in no way want to blow my own trumpet (except I do a but there is a sequel to Together Forever? called Searching and is here on TQP. I think you'll find the ending a little more satisfying with only the smallest of cliff hangers.

Again, thanks for reviewing. Lunabelle :)

Step ;)

Searching by thesteppyone Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 23]
Summary: Set after 'Together Forever' and during and directly after the final confrontation with Voldemort. Ron will do anything to help the one he loves including searching in a place no one else is allowed and a place he's not exactly sure exists.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, OFC, OMC, Percy Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Graphic Violence, Hurt/Comfort, Strong Language
Series: The 'Togther Forever?' Universe
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48091 Read Count: 8545
[Report This] Published: 11/30/2008 Updated: 01/02/2009
Reviewer: lunabelle Signed
Date: 12/31/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Making a Decision

ok, thank you. I reviewed the first part of this story and now I am ok with the ending of the last one :) butttt.... I am still fuzzy on all the intials from the two stories combined.


Great work!