Penname: Concupiscence [Contact] Real name: L. L.
Member Since: 10/30/2009
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Under the Influence by Mad Maudlin Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Alcohol impairs your judgement.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley, Viktor Krum
Genres: Erotica, PWP
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Drug Usage, Frottage, Slash, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4571 Read Count: 1138
[Report This] Published: 08/12/2007 Updated: 08/12/2007
Reviewer: Concupiscence Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/05/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent turn of phrase:       "...thrashing armful of wet angry hero..."

Great Metaphor and delicious visual:  

  "They snarled and glared and did another shot, and while Viktor was pouring Ron Bad Decision #26 they started to creep towards one another. Slowlike."

 

I was trying really hard not to avalanche you with comments, but I just loved those bits so much my restraint failed.  Massive Restrainment Fail.

 

 loved it..

Archipelago by Mad Maudlin Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary: There's a difference between being lonely and being alone. Draco Malfoy is alone. Ron Weasley is quite probably insane.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ron Weasley
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Comedy, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, Slash, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18984 Read Count: 4140
[Report This] Published: 08/12/2007 Updated: 08/12/2007
Reviewer: Concupiscence Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11/04/2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

There were two instances I LAUGHED *really* hard... I can't remember the first one, (which was the harder one)... but the second was when Nibblet said "Master is not tasting anything but Master's own Angst."  Priceless.

Loved it.  You continue to rock. It gets a nine-more sex would have been a ten (sorry, I'm a greedy whore).. and something wiggy happened with chapter 5 (?) huge paragraphs and weirdness instead of apostrophes... 

effing great story.... looooovvveeee RON! (In general and Esp. in this story)