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Live...or Die Trying by missgranger2 Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 399]
Summary: Hermione becomes bitter and lost after Ron and Harry leave her.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley, Various
Genres: Angst, Comedy, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134755 Read Count: 70968
[Report This] Published: 02/09/2008 Updated: 05/29/2011
Reviewer: idol269 Signed
Date: 07/31/2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I want Ron to *honk**honk* Hermione.  At this point he'd definitely need to be drunk to try that... she would as well.

Author's Response:

Hello Lovely!

  Ha! Ha! "Honk, honk" Hermione, eh? I love that! Somehow, I don't think they'll be drunk if and when they ever do 'do it'! *winks*

Much love!

Tammy (>:

Reviewer: idol269 Signed
Date: 07/31/2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 “Search and Destroy”

The end of this chapter is sad for Ron.  I know he shouldn't have been with Shannon (mainly because she's not Hermione, duh), but he still has to end a marriage and that hurts.  It also hurts because he has to face the fact that he made a mistake in marrying her, which contributed to Hermione's slide into darkness.

Author's Response:

Hello Dearest!

  Yes, I agree that Ron's actions have really affected so many people in his life. It is up to him to set things right, but will it be too late for Hermione? Hmmm....*hugs*

Much love!

Tammy (>:

Reviewer: idol269 Signed
Date: 07/31/2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 “Discovery and Deceit”

"You’re wasting your time, you know.”

 “We’ll see about that.  You might recall that I liked nothing more than proving you wrong.” 

LOVE that line!  I'm confident Ron can succeed.  I think it's sad that Hermione thinks she's stronger now than she was then.  Back then, the three of them defeated Voldemort.  She couldn't do that by herself.

And Hermione sees Ron's secret case file!  I hope she finds out about what happened to him soon.  I have a feeling she won't be able to trust Ron until he comes clean about that misson.



Author's Response:

Hello Sweetie!

  Hermione is very bitter about what happened between her and Ron. So much in fact, that she has allowed it to destroy who she was. She isn't as strong as she makes out and has basically pushed all her emotions deep inside of her. )>:  As for her finding out about what really happened to Ron...all in good time, dear, all in good time! *winks* and *hugs*

Much love!

Tammy (>: 

Reviewer: idol269 Signed
Date: 07/31/2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 “Lost and Found”

“All I know is when I dream of sexual urges, I don’t see a house, but I do see your sister.”  That's quite cocky of Harry to say to Charlie, considering who dangled who off the staircase the other day.  Still funny, though.



Author's Response:

Hello Dearest!

  I have so much fun with Harry in this story. (I can't help myself, really.) *laughs* I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter and I have just loved your comments so much! I adore you! *hugs*

Much love!

Tammy (>: 

Reviewer: idol269 Signed
Date: 08/01/2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 “Double Trouble”

The test of a true friend is whether or not he'll help you out of and off of his naked sister after you've thrown your back out.  Ron passed this test with flying colors.  Congratulations, Ron!

PS: I love the way you respond to all your reviews.  The language you use feels like a hug!  In fact, it's got me wondering if I might ask your country of origin?  I have a guess in my head and I want to see how wrong I am.



Author's Response:

Well Hello there dearest!

  Oh how I had fun with this chapter-poor Harry and his back going out at a time like that! *laughs* I try to respond to all my reviews-pleasant or not. Sometimes I get the haters on here and it depends on my mood how I respond. *rolls eyes* If you don't like something, then just don't say anything at all, you know? (the jerks) Anyway, I am from the USA. Did you get it right? *winks*

Much love!

Tammy (>:

Reviewer: idol269 Signed
Date: 08/01/2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 “Changes and Second Chances”

I liked seeing the vulnerable side of Ginny in this chapter (that's right, I liked seeing her cry!) and how much she does care for Ron and Harry.  It's  kind of refreshing because it's not seen a lot.  Most of the time she acts like a drill sargeant in the middle of a colonoscopy.

I also loved Ron's battle of wits with Euphelia.  A suggestion for getting her to leave: blast some of that goddamned rock-and-roller music that all those goddamned kids listen to all the goddamned time.  It'll make her want to leave and spend all her time pining for those days back in the 1890s when they made real music.



Author's Response:

Hello there!

  Bwahahahahahahaha! Oh this is one of my most favorite reviews-EVER! "Most of the time she acts like a drill sargeant in the middle of a colonoscopy." *laughs* Oh that was brilliant!!! As for Euphelia, she is actually based on a person I used to work with(!) If the lady I worked with could ever crack a smile, I was totally amazed! Ron should have blasted some music her way as that would have made her go off the deepend for sure!

You're so lovely!!!*hugs you*

Much love!

Tammy (>: 

Reviewer: idol269 Signed
Date: 08/01/2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 “Guess Who’s Coming to Dinner?”

Hermione wants Ron soooo bad.  Her stubborn attitude is out in full force in this chapter, and according to some of the past reviews/responses I've read, it sounds like this attitude will be the cause of something bad in the future.  (Foreshadowing!  Duh duh duh...) 

Author's Response:

Hello my VERY perceptive friend!

  Yes, her stubborness will lead to some serious shit in the future. *winks* This is all going somewhere, I promise you. I actually wrote something earlier then I had planned in the most recent chapter. (it's with my beta) I decided to just go for it and you might be a bit surprised or a tad shocked. This is my 'crazy train story' and anything goes, I suppose. I hope you'll like the rest of the story and thank you for making my day! *hugs*

Much love!

Tammy (>:  

Reviewer: idol269 Signed
Date: 08/02/2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: "Busy Fingers and Idle Resolutions"

Ron really gets the shite kicked out of him in this story, doesn't he?  Harry, Hermione, and Death Eaters all have a go at him.  I hope he gets to dish it out sometime.

I think the scene of Hermione and her parents really shows how bad she's let her life spin out of control.  We've seen her fight with Ron and Harry, but not with her parents.  For her to act in such a way as to make her father not even want to look at her--his only child and his little girl--and for her to not even consider that maybe she's making the wrong decisions shows how hard stubborn she's become.



Author's Response:

Hello Lovely!

  I am so loving to 'chat' with you on here everynight! I look forward to it so much! (>: Hermione really has lost it. I don't think she really grasps how her out of control behavior has basically severed ties from the people that truly love her. There will come a time when all of this catches up with her. *winks* Will she be strong enough to handle the repercussions of her actions? We'll see! (>: *hugs*

Much love!

Tammy (>: 

Reviewer: idol269 Signed
Date: 08/02/2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 “Burnt Bridges and Bumpy Roads”

Hmm, Hermione's kind of a size queen, isn't she?  Young auror recruit and David (aka Mr. What's-His-Face and Mr. I-Want-To-Punch-His-Face) were well-equipped, and I'll bet Ron was as well.  And she was obviously disappointed when Thor lacked a hammer.  Although, maybe she's not a size queen after all; has there ever been a male romantic protagonist that wasn't massively bewanged?

I love how Ron got all up in David (the dickhead's) face.  I think you should write an entire chapter dedicated to describing, in slow motion, how Ron's fist moves towards and through David's face.  And his foot through David's crotch.

PS: I read somewhere it's not the size of the wand, but the magic in the stick.  Where did I read that? :)



Author's Response:

Ha! Ha!

  I know where you read it! I got your friend request and was like YES! (>: Oh and our boy just has to be well endowed. (I couldn't see him any other way!) A chapter devoted to Ron beating up David would be glorious. Oh the things our boy could do when he was angry. (kind of turns me on! *gasps*)  You're a total sweetheart and I just LOVE your comments so much!*hugs*

Much love!

Tammy (>:  

Reviewer: idol269 Signed
Date: 08/02/2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 "So You Want to be a Shadow?"

OMG!!! This chapter was HILARIOUS! It might be the funniest thing I've ever read.  I laughed out loud several times, and I never do that at something I read.  Harry's island desire and attri-boots were priceless.  So was Ron's "fuckoff"-attitude regarding the whole test.

PS: I hope Harry's wrong.



Author's Response:

Hell Dear! *hugs you*

  I had a ton of fun on this one. That test was orginally not even going to be talked about, but then an idea came to me and I couldn't help myself. Poor, poor Harry and the things I write about him. (I'm going to hell for sure!) *giggles* I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter and thanks for always making me smile! I adore you, sweetie! *hugs you again just because*

Much love!

Tammy (>:

Reviewer: idol269 Signed
Date: 08/02/2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 "Angels and Demons"

“What are you looking at Potter?”  “A prick.” Ha Ha!  Loved the shout out to your friend.

I felt so bad for Ron when he saw Hermione throw off the imperious so easily.  He must have felt about as bad as you possibly could when he was in that bathroom.

PS: I read on one of your replies that you respond to all reviews, even if they are negative.  Who would give you a negative review? You write comedy and angst/drama well, and you ship the Good Ship R/Hr!  I can easily see someone criticizing Harry/Hermione, Draco/Hermione, Harry/Hermione/Ron... er, should I not have said that?



Author's Response:

Hello Dearest!

  I read your comments EARLY this morning on my phone but had to go to work! ACK! I think it really did affect Ron that she could throw off the Imperious so easily. It also kind of messes with his head and makes him wonder, what if? (I can't give the poor boy a break, can I?) *laughs* And as for all the haters, no worries as I don't let them spoil my day. (That's what they want-but guess what-it ain't happening!) *grins* After awhile you kind of let it roll off your shoulders as you realize that there are some really miserable and pathetic people out there, you know?  Actually, I tend to feel sorry for them for they seem to only find happiness in being mean and rude. And about your last line-no worries, dear, as everybody has their own tastes out there! *hugs you*

Much love!

Tammy (>:  

Reviewer: idol269 Signed
Date: 08/02/2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 "The Bane of Hermione's Existence"

I thought it was a big deal when Hermione sat with Harry and Ron at the beginning of the chapter.

Loved jealous Ron.  No one's gonna touch Hermione but him dammit!  Even after all this time and what's passed between them, he still acts like it's his job to protect her.  I have to smile when I think about that last sentence.



Author's Response:

Ha! Ha!

  I LOVVVVVE a jealous Ron. There is something that REALLY melts my butter when I think about him being protective of our girl! Grrrrr! Hopefully he'll keep trying to whack away at that wall she has put up. *winks* and *hugs*

Much love!

Tammy (>: 

Reviewer: idol269 Signed
Date: 08/02/2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 "The Boy Who Killed Serpents"

We fear what we do not understand.  Apparently being able to speak to snakes for many years has not alloweed Harry to drop his prejudice against them.  What a racist!... er, species-ist!  I don't even want to think about what he would have done with a black mamba...

Can't wait to see Ron enact his potions strategy.

PS: I'm sad now that I've caught up and can no longer read many chapters in a row.  What am I going to do now?  Don't tell me I have to...wait!  Is there a worse word in the English language?  You know, besides fuckwad, shitehead, cocksucker, Malfoy... I guess that last one is a little redundant.

I place my heart in your hands, but I trust that you'll finish the story.  I've been hurt before.  Don't turn me into Hermione!



Author's Response:

Bwahahahahahahaha!

  Oh how you make me laugh! *wipes eyes* "species-ist" was brilliant and made me laugh out loud. You know, I should have had a black mamba chasing him as well! (Dammit-I can't go back now!) I am hopeful the next chapter will be up soon. My beta has it and I'm just waiting for her to look over it. And I wouldn't DARE turn you into a bitter train-wreck of a sweet mess! *laughs again* "I solemnly swear that I am up to no good. ....I mean I solemnly swear to write 35 chapters and I WILL keep that promise! *smak* and *hugs you*

Much love!

Tammy (>: 

Reviewer: idol269 Signed
Date: 08/03/2010 Title: Chapter 1: "Broken"

It seems there's a large gap in my reviews in the beginning of the story, which I shall now remedy.  It seems like there are a lot af good stories on this site that get a lot of hits but not a lot of reviews. 

The flashback is powerful and sad.  I wonder if there'll be another one showing the scene where Ron breaks it off with Hermione?

PS: When I was typing that last "Hermione" I accidentally hit "hemrd" and when I saw it I thought "hemroid-e."  So, that was weird.

 

PPS: David's a dickhead.  This is the first chapter so I need to make sure everything starts out on the right foot.

Author's Response:

Ha! Ha! Oh but you're adorable!

   I LOVED your PPS. It was priceless and made me laugh outloud! You know, I also think of hemorrhoid when I see "hemrd" too! (we were twins in another life, maybe?) *grins* The first chapter of this story was to show how broken and sad our girl had become. I wanted people to know straight away that this is NOT the Hermione from the books. (far from it) I also wrote a missing moments one shot called "Beginnings" about their first time together. I felt like I needed to show her how she once was or something. (I get a wild hair up my ass sometimes...*giggles*) I'm so glad you left some reviews as I needed some cheering up as it has been a crazy day at work! )>: You're a sweetheart!!! *hugs*

Much love!

Tammy (>:   

Reviewer: idol269 Signed
Date: 08/03/2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ha, ha, love harry's reaction to the shrunken willys (a great band name, by the way).  This sort of reminds me of the tv show "Scrubs" where a sex-always-on-the-brain character Todd issues a greeting of "How's your penis?" to his male coworkers.

Author's Response:

Hello Lovely!

  Bwahahahahahaha! A band called "Shrunken Willys" sounds brilliant. I may have to use that sometime. I loved Scrubs and am so sad to see it's been cancelled.  (craziness) It's been a long day, dear. All I want to do is get a long hot bath and fall into bed. *hugs you*

Much love!

Tammy (>: