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If a Man Answers by risiepookie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 218]
Summary: When Ron comes back after two years, he dreads another man answering Hermione's door in the middle of the night. He certainly didn't expect the other man to be Harry. Jealousy, sex, betrayal, confusion, and heartache ensue.  Unfortunately, all is not as it should be and Ron must survive the unexpected consequences of his return, including broken relationships and promises.

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Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40051 Read Count: 29252
[Report This] Published: 08/27/2006 Updated: 04/21/2008
Reviewer: hpaa Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/29/2006 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Frozen

This fic is coming along really well...

I can really feel for Ron in this one.... he is guilty abt leaving and causing Hermione's and Harry's life to go into a tail spin, but I still dont think that makes it any easier to accept that they moved on without him....

And then Hermione hexes him? If I wasnt angry already, that wud have definatly done the trick...

Needless to say, your doing a bang up job with this one...



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review!  My poor, broken Ron.  I do think that Ron is getting the bum-end of the guilt and blame (which he is prone to do); not to worry, it won't be that way for long.  Hermione's hex was over the line, but we'll see how Ron handles it in the next chapter (which is with my wonderful beta, Mench, as I write this). 

Thanks again for letting me know your thoughts- it's lovely to hear from you!

*a yummy blackberry tart for you*

Reviewer: hpaa Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12/05/2006 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Hearing Without Understanding

That was all, and probably more than what I expected for this chapter....

I love Ron, I really really do.... but Harry has lost so much in life already.... I dont think I cud stand for him to lose another person in his life...The poor guy, he has got to stop playing the matyr game...

You have GOT to find a way to make them all happy... Pretty please... with a cherry on top????



Author's Response:

Oh, I'm so glad that it delivered what you were looking for!  I agree, my heart is torn between the two, because they both (well, all three, actually) deserve happiness.  I promise they will all be happy in the end, but it may be a while in coming. 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

*sending you a caramel sundae with whipped cream and a cherry on top*  ::Risie giggles, because she and hpaa have now both offered one another a cherry on top:: 

Reviewer: hpaa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/09/2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - A Real Homecoming

Poor Ron, I just want to go to him and cuddle him... he is in a place I would never want to be in... truely between a rock and a hard place.. and this is one of the very few Molly/Ron interactions that I actually liked.. Most fics play on her over bearing nature and make her out to be this insensitive matriach.. her interaction with Ron was perfect...

And to make it worse, I have a terribly soft spot for Harry, the poor soul, he has had such a tough life and loses everything he holds near....he cannot get out of this one intact...

It also makes me resent Hermione actually.... she truely did move on without Ron, and that too with Harry... She is a smart witch and knew what she was getting into....but what really does it for me is that she is not gonna be the one ending up alone, its either of the boys.. It  aint fair :(



Author's Response:

Hi hon!  Thanks so much for reviewing (as always)!  I'm so glad my Molly works for you- she is truly one of the loveliest characters in the books, but in fanfiction she doesn't always get portrayed as the caring mother we all know her to be.  Truly, all of them are going to be hurting for a long time- this isn't something that anyone can recover from quickly.  I can only tell you that it will get better (we've still got a couple chapters to go before we start the rise, rather than the descent) and that it can work out.  :o)  ::hugs to my socal friend::

*chocolate silk pie for you*

Reviewer: hpaa Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/31/2007 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Question Game

Argh! Your gonna leave us hanging like that Risie???

Need... Update... Soon.... :)



Author's Response: Nope, no intention to leave you hanging long!  I already have the next chapter started, so let's cross our fingers that the muse stays with me!!!  Thanks, hon!  :o)  *lemon cookies for you*

Yesterday by Bluerain Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary: Past Featured StoryThe war is at it's height and Hermione Granger, head of the Magical Warfare Coalition, has only thing on her mind. . . Getting to see her boyfriend, General Ron Weasley for Christmas.

A prequel to A Hero's Return.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: None
Genres: Action/Adventure
Time Period: None
Warnings: Strong Language
Series: A Hero's Return
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5678 Read Count: 11453
[Report This] Published: 09/04/2006 Updated: 09/04/2006
Reviewer: hpaa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/05/2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That was awesome Kelly....

Cant wait for the next chapter to this one and also to the main story....

What can I say, we've tasted blood, and we want more :)

Kriegspiel by Mad Maudlin Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Voldemort has taken Azkaban. Ron is captured. You can't beat learning from a master.

Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: Lucius Malfoy, Ron Weasley
Genres: Darkfic, Drama
Time Period: None
Warnings: Contains Spoiler for HBP, Graphic Violence, Strong Language, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11179 Read Count: 500
[Report This] Published: 09/23/2006 Updated: 09/24/2006
Reviewer: hpaa Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/24/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Kriegspiel

Extremly well written..

A whole fic about 2 ppl I never imagined ever having a civilised conversation...

Not only did you pull it off, you did a very good job of it....made very interesting reading.

All That They Had Not Lost by Quizzical Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 114]
Summary: The rest of the world had ceased to exist outside of their circle. Outside of their search. That would they do now they had found what they had been looking for, and it was all destroyed? So much had been lost in the process.

Written pre Deathly Hallows.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Three of Hearts
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Romance, Trio
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: All That They Had Not Lost
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27572 Read Count: 20211
[Report This] Published: 10/12/2006 Updated: 02/28/2007
Reviewer: hpaa Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/14/2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One: Get Over It

The fic is coming along well... am really liking the interaction among the 3 of them. You have captured Harry's feeling of being the odd man out really well.

I think it wud probably be eaiser for him to accept the scenario if he didnt feel like he was taking what was rightfully Rons. Aw well thats Harry :)

Am looking forward to the update!



Author's Response:

thanks so much for reading. i'm glad you enjoyed it.

quizzical

What Dreams May Come by hobbitcuddles Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Ron has nightmares, but Harry dreams of better days to come. The follow up is not as angst heavy and much more Ron introspective.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Ficlet, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Slash, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2441 Read Count: 704
[Report This] Published: 10/30/2006 Updated: 11/30/2006
Reviewer: hpaa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/30/2006 Title: Chapter 2: Dreaming In Whispers

That was just awesome...

You have captured an intense myriad of emtions and put them into words beautifully....

I hope you continue with this and hopefully I wont have to track Senoigh down and beg her to do another drawing for you :)



Author's Response: oh, thank you! actually, i hadn't thought of continuing these particular stories any further. i'm sorry. Senoigh drew the pictures for me and these stories were my way of saying thanks. but i appreciate it so much that you liked them so well. thank you!

The Sharing of Breath by kjcp Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: When Sirius’ miserable moods suggest that everything is going wrong, something starts to go right. A “how they got together” story.
Categories: Bad Moon Rising > School Days
Characters: Sirius Black, Remus Lupin
Genres: Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24743 Read Count: 1232
[Report This] Published: 11/02/2006 Updated: 11/11/2006
Reviewer: hpaa Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/18/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Part I

This was my first Remun/Sirius fic... and am glad i started with this one... Its really well written... you managed to capture the confused emotions very well....and wrote the gradual change in their relationship quite seamlessly.. well written!

Breathing Room by kjcp Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Past Featured StoryThey thought they had everything worked out; they thought everything was as perfect as it could be, but there was one thing Sirius wanted that Remus wouldn’t give him and it was beginning to drive him mad. 2nd story in "The Sharing of Breath" series.
Categories: Bad Moon Rising > War and Peace
Characters: None
Genres: Drama, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30200 Read Count: 2157
[Report This] Published: 11/16/2006 Updated: 12/07/2006
Reviewer: hpaa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/07/2006 Title: Chapter 4: Everything for the Future

That was precious...

It kept me glued to the computer till I read the very last word...

I hope you have a sequal planned :)



Author's Response: A sequel?  Gosh, I don't know!  I'm not sure what else to write aboutin this series.  B/c "Breathing Room" is a sequel itself.    

Getting a Grip by kjcp Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Past Featured StoryJames makes a wish that comes true, only it doesn't turn out quite the way he meant.
Categories: Bad Moon Rising > School Days
Characters: Sirius Black, Remus Lupin
Genres: Comedy, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5539 Read Count: 1265
[Report This] Published: 12/14/2006 Updated: 12/14/2006
Reviewer: hpaa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/15/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think you have converted me into a Sirius/Remus shipper...I just stumbled across one of ur stories and now I am helplessly hooked....

Any plans on doing one for when Sirius gets outa Askaban?



Author's Response: Ohh wow.  Well, I've thought about it, but I haven't really written anything yet.  I do have some ideas for it, though.    

A Buggering Wager by madam_minnie Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: When Ron misunderstands their wager, it still pays off handsomely.
Categories: The Broomshed > Drabbles
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Drabble
Time Period: None
Warnings: Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258 Read Count: 1390
[Report This] Published: 12/25/2006 Updated: 12/25/2006
Reviewer: hpaa Signed
Date: 12/26/2006 Title: Chapter 1: A Buggering Wager

Ok.. How, in Gods name did Ron misunderstand that???

Author's Response: hehehe... I know! Right? *giggles*

Lovers' Crossroads by kjcp Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Ron and Hermione have found out that sometimes there’s a fork in the road. They cannot take the same path, but both ways ultimately end up at love, even if the journey takes years to complete.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Romance, Tragedy
Time Period: None
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13777 Read Count: 760
[Report This] Published: 03/05/2007 Updated: 03/06/2007
Reviewer: hpaa Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03/06/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh My.. that was like the worst possible thing to read before a work day.. am all teary eyed and emotional  now :)

Very very well written...

Brothers by deenas, Fizzmonkeys Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary: After the war, all Ron wanted was to have a "normal" life: play Quidditch, share a flat with Harry, and enjoy being a bachelor. Harry's idea of a "normal" life includes changing his relationship with Ginny. But mistakes, angry words and mountains of pride begin to tear Harry and Ron apart until Ginny and Hermione take things into their own hands.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, General
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Strong Language, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25904 Read Count: 5221
[Report This] Published: 04/04/2007 Updated: 06/05/2007
Reviewer: hpaa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/13/2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Whoa.. that was one amazing fight.....!!
I'd hate for Ron to end up on his knees apologising to Harry at the end of this though....

You managed to get into both Ron's and Harry's heads very well...I hate it when they fight....but you did a wonderful job of it...

Can't wait for an update!

Now and Then by oldenuf2nobetter Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary: Even the death of Voldemort did not end the struggle between good and evil. And even the discovery of a new and unexpected power cannot save Harry from having to deal, once and for all, with an old nemesis.
Categories: The Broomshed > Dark Side
Characters: Vincent Crabbe, Seamus Finnigan, Gregory Goyle, Hermione Granger, Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter, Ginny Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: Darkfic
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, BDSM, Bondage, Drug Usage, Dub-Con, Graphic Violence, Het, Hurt/Comfort, Non-Con, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Threesome
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46660 Read Count: 15610
[Report This] Published: 04/13/2007 Updated: 06/26/2007
Reviewer: hpaa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/04/2007 Title: Chapter 12: Now and Then: Chapter 12

Came over because Maple rec'ed you on her LJ, and I have been completly blown away by the story...

Its graphic, yes... but its extremly well written and you write the characters really well.. The trio-ness, the 2 couples and the Ron/Harry aspect are all equally important and you manage to walk the thin line very well...

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response: Thank you!  And the captain's have been extremely kind.