Categories: Hallowed Halls > Drabbles
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Time Period: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 528 Read Count: 711
Date: 12/14/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Drabble
Probably a bit late but a second chapter to this story would be great.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het, RST, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 463583 Read Count: 110987
Date: 09/19/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Close Calls
I just spent the last 3 days reading this story and i can't believe that after reading 42 amazing chapters i went to click onto chapter 43 only to discover to my horror that there was no chapter 43.
I know you finished writing this story years ago but i really hope you decide to continue writing it as there is still so much story left to tell.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Neville Longbottom, Ron Weasley
Time Period: None
Warnings: Contains Spoiler for HBP
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3410 Read Count: 1435
Date: 12/13/2009 Title: Chapter 1: I Was Walking With a Ghost
It will probably never happen but i really hope that you finish this story as i really want to know what happens next.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley, Various
Genres: Angst, Comedy, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134755 Read Count: 65361
Date: 04/27/2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 "The Bane of Hermione's Existence"
Good chapter. I like how for a few seconds the real Hermione broke through the emotional wall she has built around herself.
I don't know if Hermione really was going to have sex with those two guys (i have a feeling she wasn't) but i'm glad Ron and Harry stopped her anyway.
That was a good chapter and i'm certainly looking forward to the next one.
My ykickamoocow! *happy dance*
Oh goodness but I know I owe you an e-mail! (horrible friend, lately and I'm SO sorry about that) *slaps self* Hermione really is uncomfortable with Ron around as it makes her think about the past. (More of that to come, dear) *winks* And Hermione wasn't going to have sex with those guys. She was really going to teach them a lesson before Harry and Ron showed up. (promise) I still wanted Ron and Harry to be there to stop it as it shows her that they do care about her.
I sure hope you'll like the next chapter, dear. I hope to hear back from my beta on our story soon. Thank you for always being so kind and so supportive. You make me smile!!! *hugs*
Date: 05/01/2011 Title: Chapter 32: The Calm before the Storm
All i can say is "finally". It took the mods on this site nearly a month to upload this chapter.
As for the chapter itself it was really good. It showed that Hermione still has a way to go but there is certainly a part of her that wants to change. She is also feeling guilty about Ron joining the shadows because of her which should be a interesting little subplot.
I am not sure if Harry manages to get out of the shadows or not as it could go either way but i personally hope Harry manages to get out as not only is it what Ginny wants but it also will be the first time in Harry's life that he puts Ginny's feelings and needs about Ron's and Hermione's (which is bound to happen eventually).
Also the kiss was certainly unexpected but not at all unwelcome. That was clearly a kiss born from feelings of love which is probably the first time Hermione has given anyone a loving kiss in years (Ron was probably the last one that got a kiss from Hermione that was a result of Hermione's love).
Hello "Mr. R"!!!!!
I was so happy to see this chapter posted today. (and a bit relieved too!) This chapter features a more insecure Hermione. I wanted her to start caring more about people and not always be so hurtful. Still, she has a long way to go and a lot of things to sort out. Look for her to still try and bury her feelings deep down and also to do things that she really shouldn't do. *winks*
As for Harry, I do have a plan in mind for him. I think I told you I like to keep him hanging around. Still, I do think that if he truly loves Ginny, then he needs to be with Ginny. The situation will take some time to work out, however. *smiles*
Thanks as always for always being here for me. It means a lot!!! *hugs you tight*
Date: 05/29/2011 Title: Chapter 33: Liar, Liar, Pants on Fire
I really don't like the sound of this
All we do know is that he loves to throw private parties and prefers beautiful brunettes.
I do however like Hermione's thought processes in this chapter as it is clear that she wants to give Ron another chance despite her fears that he will leave her again and i also get the strong impression that if she was given the choice she would rather not be in the Shadows as she is beginning to picture a life with Ron again and she knows she can't really have that while in the shadows.
I also liked the sex scene and as long as it isn't emotionless sex then Hermione is right in that showing Ron that she loves him is almost as good as telling him. She might not be quite ready to tell him she loves him but she can show him and for Ron that will be enough for now.
Hello "Mr. R"!!!
As usual, you always pick up where I'm going in this story. (clever fellow!) I have a lot in store for our boy and girl. There will be some really hard decisions they'll have to make and it won't be easy on either of them. Hermione has let her defenses down...for now. Once they are undercover, it may be harder than ever for her to try and mend her relationship with Ron. *winks* I sure hope you'll like the next chapter and thank you from the bottom of my heart for putting up with my craziness! *hugs*
Your Crazy Friend!
Date: 02/08/2011 Title: Chapter 31: Sometimes the Truth Hurts
Very touching chapter. Its really good to get inside Hermione's head and see the self loathing going on. She is disgusted at who she has become but she doesn't know how to change.
Still there were a lot of big character development moments for Hermione in this chapter as she not only realised that she was very unhappy with who she become but on some level she also opened up with Ron and told him personal things. That tells me that on some level she is begining to trust him again.
Of course there is still a long way to go as i don't think Hermione can simply flip a switch and become her old self but this chapter certainly showed that despite her past actions she is capable of changing and becoming a better person (especially with Ron's help).
Awwww Mr. R!!!
You truly get this chapter and where I was trying to go with it. Our girl is going through an inner struggle. She knows she isn't going back to her former self anytime soon, and yet she wishes she could. The blame for who she has become is not all on Ron anymore. She could have went down a far different path and now she is beginning to regret her actions. Regret and guilt will only start to consume her more down the road. Look for her actions while being a Shadow to play a major part in everything coming to a head and making her ultimately come apart. She will reach a point of no return.
Thank you so much for all your support! I just adore you so much!!!! I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter!!!
Date: 01/17/2011 Title: Chapter 30: Damn That Voice of Reason
I know i reviewed before but after reading this chapter i hope that Ron comes to a sort of deal with Hermione where whenever she wants to have sex she comes to him and he will have sex with her. I think Ron would much prefer that than Hermione thinking that he will turn her down and as a result going off and finding some stranger to have sex with.
If Hermione agreed to a deal like that (Ron agreeing to have sex with her whenever she wanted) then not only would it show that deep down Hermione only wants Ron but it would also mean she wouldn't have to/want to have sex with strangers which only a chapter or two ago she was begining to show regrets about.
Your comments made me giggle. (you're the best) It would be a solution, but there is something that will happen that neither of them will have any control over. I can't go into detail, but I will say it's not what one of them really wants to do but has to do. It is all leading to something, I promise you!
Thank you for always leaving a comment and just plain being here for me. It means so much to me, Mr. R!!! *hugs* I sure hope you'll like the next chapter!!!!
Date: 11/11/2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: "Busy Fingers and Idle Resolutions"
As you know i am totally in love with this story. Hermione is so lost and its going to take something massive to happen for her to find her way again.
I can't wait for the next few chapters to find out how Hermione hits rock bottom (i'm really hoping she doesn't have sex with Charlie) and how Ron tries to connect with her again.
Another great chapter.
It's my ykickamoocow! *happy dance*
You have been such a great friend to me! I adore you! *hugs* And since I do adore you, I will let you know that she will not have sex with Charlie. (although that is brilliant idea) *smiles* It is going to be along while until she hits rock bottom. There are so many things I have in-store for her. (Bless her!) I really hope you'll enjoy the next chapter and thanks for all your support.
I also have to tell you that I have had so much fun writing our story. I really enjoy talking to you and getting your input so much. You truly mean the world to me my dear friend! *hugs*
Date: 01/09/2011 Title: Chapter 30: Damn That Voice of Reason
I'm really glad that Ron and Hermione got partnered together, more glad than i can possibly say. Some other points i thought i would comment on include
- I like how Hermione seems to be slowly moving away from the idea of having sex with strangers (or people who are practically strangers) to get what she wants as she seemed quite offended when Ron accused her of it.
- Hermione's method of seduction on Ron was really good and it nearly worked. I am half surprised it didn't work especially when she implied that she was going to find another man who could do the job if he wasn't willing though i half suspect (or hope) that she said this hoping it would provoke him into fucking her (knowing that he doesn't want her having sex with other men).
- I kind of hope that in the next chapter Ron specifically says to Hermione that he is always willing to have sex with her when she is sober and if he does that i wonder how long it would take Hermione to take Ron up on that offer.
- I was a bit worried about what Hermione would do with the 3 days she had alone without Ron there but i am glad she is instead going to the Burrow (even if she doesn't know it yet) as that will give Ron and Hermione a greater chance of bonding as one of the first times in this story where Hermione showed that she still wanted Ron was at the Burrow so their relationship could progress a bit in the next chapter and remind Hermione of who she once was given that the Burrow is a place she spent so much time at as she was growing up.
Hello there, "Mr. R"! (>:
This chapter probably says a lot about what direction I'm trying to go in, in regards to Ron and Hermione's relationship. Ron was sleeping around before, as was our girl. I honestly didn't want them together if the both of them stayed the way they were. (This might sound odd, but it truthfully is how I feel about getting them together.) That said, Hermione still needs to work out some issues, where Ron is more seriously determined to change and be the man she deserves. It's not going to be easy for Hermione, as she has to make the right choice and come to grips with the feelings she still has for Ron. As I adore you, I can tell you that there will be some bumps in the road. Hermione will falter and it will take a major incident to help her find herself again.
Thank you as always for sticking by me. I know this story is completely crazy and takes a lot of twists and turns. I hope you'll like the next chapter and thanks again for always being so damn kind! *hugs*
Date: 12/03/2010 Title: Chapter 29: Fate and Circumstances
Nice chapter though i have to say that i only counted one sexual reference in this entire chapter and for this story that is very unusual. I hope you aren't slipping as one sexual reference is unacceptably low (in case you didn't know i am kidding as for some reason i can't put up a smiley to show i am kidding).
I hope beyond hope that Ron and Hermione get paired together as them working together will be very interesting. Even though their relationship has progressed a great deal in the past 3 or 4 chapters it still has a long way to go and having them as partners will not only help with that but it will also provide some great Ron/Hermione interaction. I know you are not accepting a poll but if you were i would vote for Ron and Hermione to be partners.
Bwahahahahaha "Mr. R"!
You are a mess! I hope you're doing well. *hugs* Now, I know I have been kind of neglecting adult relations in this story lately. There will be more of that coming up when certain characters become full blown Shadows. *winks*
I will keep your vote in mind about who Ron ends up with as a partner. I haven't started the next chapter, and as I said in one of my replies, I might change my mind about a few things. For instance, our girl was supposed to kill David in a drastically different scenario. (I'm not saying she DID kill him in that other chapter.....but....well...) Anyway, the chapter I wrote far into the future of this story will now have to be changed slightly. *grins*
Thanks as always for all of your support. You don't know how much it makes me smile when I see that you've left a review! I hope you'll like the next chapter. *hugs*
Date: 08/10/2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 “Lost and Found”
I must admit that after reading the first few chapters i didn't really like this story as i felt everyone seemed to be out of character. I'm really glad i continued to read it as the past few chapters have done i great job of explaining why certain characters are acting the way they are acting.
This is actually a really believable story which i am really enjoying. I can't wait to read the next chapter to see what happens next.
Wooooo-hooooo! I got a review from ykickamoocow!!!! *squee!* What can I say, I adore your name! Alright, enough of my nonsense.
Hello Lovely ykickamoocow!
This is a very AU story, dear. I wanted to write about a broken and out of control Hermione. I also like writing comedy and so I have a go at the characters from time to time. *laughs* It has been fun to write and I won't lie when I say that I consider it my guilty pleasure. Anything goes and I let my imagination go hog wild. Thank you for giving this crazy story a chance, dear. I hope you'll like the next chapter! *hugs*
Date: 08/21/2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 “Double Trouble”
I loved reading this chapter and i can't wait for the next few. Things i am really looking forward to reading are
- Charlie talking to the 2 Aurors who are currently in Norway
- Charlie confronting Ron (and i fully expect Ron will tell him nothing)
- Hermione continuing to try and figure out what happened on that mission and why it screwed up their relationship.
- When Ginny finds out what Harry, Charlie and Hermione are investigating and even though she knows the facts she won't be able to say anything.
I can't wait to read the next chapter so please keep them coming.
Hello My Darling ykickamoocow, (or ykickablackcat, or ykickarabiddog, or ykicka....the possibilities are endless!) *laughs*
Now, there are not too many things you are looking forward to, now are there? *grins* I would say I answer two of the things you're curious about eventually. Two of the things you are wondering about, I anwser halfway. And there is one that I never address. Of course I can't tell you which is which because I am evil that way. I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter and more of my craziness. I actually wrote a much later chapter a few weeks ago and sent it to a friend of mine. She said she was shocked where this was all heading. *winks*
Date: 10/09/2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 “Guess Who’s Coming to Dinner?”
I think that our boy does need to come clean with her but that he's crappling with how to do that. It was awful what he went through, but will she really believe him or even listen to him with who she has become now? He has to sort out those demons and I like how you suggest she call him on it!
I think its more than likely that he wouldn't tell her at all. First off he didn't want to tell her because he was disgusted at himself and he didn't want Hermione to find out what he had done but now it would be more than likely that he wouldn't tell her because of who she is now.
Could you imagine baring your soul to someone and have them not even care. I would imagine now that Ron would think that if he did tell Hermione what actually happened that she is so far gone emotionally that she wouldn't even be interested in what happened (almost any emtional reaction would be better than no emtional reaction at all).
Anyway another great chapter. This story keeps getting better and better and i am thoroughly enjoying reading it.
It's my ykickamoocow! *hugs*
I appreciate your input so much. With Sandrinah and your review, I feel like I'm on the fence about it. I can see your side very clearly as I don't think she would really care anymore. She would probably be angrier because she would feel like he didn't trust in their relationship enough to tell her the truth to begin with. It would almost be like another punch in the gut.
As for Ron, it isn't very easy for him to just come out with it. He royally screwed things up between them. He also feels that he is responsible for who she is now. Would him telling her what really happen make things between them better or worse? And if she acts as if she didn't care than that would surely open up a whole other new can of worms. In my mind, I actually have him tell her later...much later, even though I can't reveal why. *grins*
Thank you so much for commenting on the issue. I admire how indepth your review was and the valid reasons you bring up. I adore you to pieces and I sure hope you know that! *hugs*
Date: 12/03/2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 “Burnt Bridges and Bumpy Roads”
Another great chapter. I can really feel this story building to something great.
Hermione's relationship with her parents (specifically her father) is really sad but it is understandable as clearly her parents do not like what she has become. The clue about what will happen to Hermione's parents only makes their last conversation even sadder.
Hermione is not going to be happy when she finds out that Ron and Harry have also joined the Shadows but i am really looking forward to the conflict between Ron and Hermione when she does in fact find out. Hermione wants to leave her old life and start again (to become a even darker person if that is even possible) but Ron and Harry also joining the shadows will make that impossible as they will be a constant reminder of who she used to be.
I'm loving this story and i hope David suffers greatly when either Ron or Hermione get their hands on him.
Anyway another great chapter and i hope you update soon (as i have a feeling that the next few chapters are going to be very important).
My dear friend! *hugs*
I told you that there was going to be something revealed in this chapter that would matter a lot later. (and of course you picked it out right away!) Look to find other clues in the Shadow chapters too. *winks*
Hermione is NOT going to be too happy that Ron and Harry are trying to become Shadows. Look for some drama and a bit of comedy when she does find out. *grins*
And then there is David. I can't tell you anything about what I have in store for him, but I hope you'll be surprised. (>:
I adore you so much. Thank you for all the support and lovely comments. I hope you'll like the next chapter, dearest!!! *hugs*