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Proxy by Matilda Bishop Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 79]
Summary: Ron’s role in Harry’s struggle with Voldemort puts unexpected pressure on Bill.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Bill Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Erotica
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Public Sex, Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 157504 Read Count: 30173
[Report This] Published: 05/07/2006 Updated: 03/17/2008
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Date: 07/19/2006 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

i want to rave about this wherever i find it.

such a fantastic thing......

always want more proxy........

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Date: 08/04/2006 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

i shall go about my day with the image of ron sprawled on the anglia with his hair fanned out around him, and harry gazing at him in the shaft of light.

 ahhhhhhh

Dreams by legomymalfoy Rated: GP - General Public [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Harry dreams in colour, even if it's been said that dreams are only in black and white.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Golden Trio
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Ficlet, General, Trio
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Minor Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1094 Read Count: 613
[Report This] Published: 05/18/2006 Updated: 05/18/2006
Reviewer: quizzical Signed
Date: 05/19/2006 Title: Chapter 1: .

lovely

Author's Response: Thank you! <3

Wank - Excerpt from Proxy by Matilda Bishop Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: An excerpt from Proxy.  For the "I touch myself" Monthly Challenge.
Categories: The Broomshed > Self Pleasure
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica
Time Period: None
Warnings: Masturbation
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2006-05) The "I Touch Myself" Challenge
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2006-05) The "I Touch Myself" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1294 Read Count: 1995
[Report This] Published: 06/05/2006 Updated: 06/05/2006
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Date: 06/07/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Wank - Excerpt from Proxy

He didn’t know whether to trace Ron’s lips with his finger and sing love songs or shove a nipple in his mouth and shout, suck me, dammit!  Use some tongue!

loved that line so much!

Harry Potter and the Minor Industry by Leviathan Rated: FG - Family Guidance starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Harry finds himself, Hermione and Ron somewhere they never expected to be. But why are people calling him Dan?


Categories: Hallowed Halls > From Diagon Alley to Hogwarts
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy
Time Period: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5781 Read Count: 846
[Report This] Published: 06/19/2006 Updated: 06/19/2006
Reviewer: quizzical Signed
Date: 08/29/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

just as funny the second time, leviathan!

and i love the line you give dan.



Author's Response: I'm so glad this comes through as funny. I wanted funny, but Harry will angst at any opportunity. I had fun with the Dan character. I figure, if he's got a "Towel Girl," he probably has some concepts of fandom, so I went for it.

Within You, Without You by mapleandmahogany Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 97]
Summary: Unless time had changed things very much, she knew the intense gaze of those green eyes meant that he wanted her as much as she did him.

“Gin?” Harry said, as one hand reached up to stroke her hair, too intimate for a friend.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ginny Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Erotica, Fluff, Mystery, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het, Minor Fluff, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63280 Read Count: 21776
[Report This] Published: 06/26/2006 Updated: 06/22/2007
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Date: 06/26/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Something

i love ron looking out for him. and the different kinds of knowing going on between them all.

q



Author's Response: Yes, Ron will always look after his Harry, that much I'm sure of. :) Thank you!

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Date: 08/07/2006 Title: Chapter 4: Every Little Thing

am loving the molly/arthur action!

and sweet harry, seeing her home after....



Author's Response:

Those two just can't help themselves! Their antics aren't over either.

 ....Harry has always had good manners.. ;)

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Date: 08/25/2006 Title: Chapter 5: For you Blue

oh god, maple i LOVED this. i want a harry just like that for my very own. even if he can't say 'i love you' yet. that would definately be worth the wait....

“I am so not one of your brothers,” he said with a smirk, grabbing her arse and pulling her into a kiss. He rolled his tongue against hers, sucking with quick desperation as though proving a point. He released her mouth and pressed his cheek against hers and whispered, “I do respect you.”

*sappy sigh*

 



Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoy him. I just love Harry so much. He has so much depth - even if he doesn't have freckles. ;)

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Date: 09/19/2006 Title: Chapter 6: All Together Now

just lost a long review dammit.

suffice it to say, this was gorgeous. the weasleys are gorgeous. the conversations are gorgeous.

am looking forward to the rest of that conversation between ginny and harry.



Author's Response: Lost a long review? That's terrible!  Hee - but I thank you very much. I'm so glad you liked it. Yeah, Harry and Ginny have some talking to do...

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Date: 10/24/2006 Title: Chapter 7: Getting Better

"Makes him nervous when people he loves don’t talk to him."

ron knows him so well. *sniff* 

He was still a little light-headed from Charlie’s Romanian Whisky, and found that his heart was sitting right in his throat

i love your broken harry. he's gorgeous.

Just another hair closer and, there, their fingertips touched. Who knew that fingertips could communicate so much

oh, maple. that's lovely.

maurauder my arse. *snort*

 the conversation with arthur was gorgeous, as was ron's input.

lovely chapter. well worth the wait!



Author's Response:

Isn't it amazing how Harry has gone through so much and yet is still so precious and lovable? He just wants to love and be loved so badly!

He's trying so hard to be a man among all those men and completely falls apart with Mr. W. LOL

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Date: 12/01/2006 Title: Chapter 8: Two Of Us

<i>"Well, you’re a fuckin’ cauldron of sunshine, aren’t ya?" </i>

teehee ... good one!

SO much love for hermione doing his packing. she's a wonder that girl.

<i>handsome young man with a tragic past and heart made of a thousand broken pieces</i>

maple, that's a beautiful picture.

<i>Harry scratched at his arm, blushing slightly. "Are you quite done now?"</i>

aww harry.

 the sex was gorgeous and loving and hot. and harry's resolve to wait. what a romantic.

and your ginny is great. totally believable. totally right for harry.

Q



Author's Response:

Oh - thank you for pointing out the 'thousand broken pieces' line! *is a dork* but I was really pleased with that and you are the first to point it out. :D

Hee - well, you know I love it when Harry blushes. ;P 

I'm glad you like my Ginny, she can be a tricky little bird to write sometimes, so I appreciate that. *hugs*

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Date: 01/02/2007 Title: Chapter 9: Carry That Weight

i am delighted with this! maple you've outdone yourself.

ginny letting harry have it. telling him exactly what she needed from him. yes!

lol at the weasley offspring all melting away into the shadows at the hospital. hehehehehe

and then right from chuckles we get

//
"Nothing can happen to you," Harry muttered into the older man’s shoulder. "You have to stay safe."//

and arthur calling him son. *sniff*

the entire 'action sequence' was great. the little touches all the way through - magical calloquialisms - familiarity with the characters - a delight!

and then george losing it at the death eater! omg! that was just brilliant. the switch from

//Harry inwardly admired the Weasley ability to fluster and provoke anyone in a very short time.//

to frantic george and harry wild on pure adreneline and emotion and rage.

ron's cool head! *loves maple*

george and the single tear! oh!

great chapter maple. you keep raising the bar with your writing.

am waiting with baited breath for what happens next....



Author's Response:

Your comments are so reassuring. I get nervous when I've got nothing but 'plot' to rely on because it's so easy to 'hide' behind the smut for a reaction. I wanted this to be genuine for all the characters involved. A chance to, however minimally, flesh out Ginny and George a little bit. Thank you so much!

 

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Date: 01/02/2007 Title: Chapter 9: Carry That Weight

i forgot to mention ron in the pub holding the floor. *giggles* great.

Author's Response: Hee. That's one of those things that I see like a movie in my mind and that I hope I can convey. Thanks!

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Date: 03/26/2007 Title: Chapter 10: In My Life

love the tenderness warring with ust that is harry and ginny's relationship.

tonks in a safari gear! yeah!

and of course MUST swoon at george and lee coming clean to the folks. *sigh*

(will we get to see the moment it stops being unspoken knowledge between george and fred?)

and ron said 'whatever twigs your twigger'!!!! *dies*

well done, maple.

*hugs*

Q



Author's Response:

She loves him so much, in spite of all the baggage he's trying to fix in his life.

I like Tonks. I don't know how to write her sexy/romantic like other people, just for funny.

Yeah, George and Lee's talk with his parent's will be in TGO. (never abbre. that before - hee)

YOU gave me, and, gave me permission for 'whatever twigs your twigger' - I had to give the line to Ron!

Thank you for that!

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Date: 05/17/2007 Title: Chapter 11: Don't Let Me Down

As this conversation was proving, she now realized there was some unclear delineation between her Harry and Ron’s Harry.

lovely.

so much love for ron picking at things, like grooves in the table!

 

the strange sensation of her slightly numb tongue, inspiring her to say ‘con tin ue’ a few more times.

you write her experience with such authority....

adore hermione's cooking. so much.

ok. how much do i adore that even totally sozzled, ron knows exactly what harry is needing to hear.

adore hermione saying snockered!

awww for tender!harry. broken or no!

teehee at ginny accustomed to a house that COULD be watching. lol.

 

it was all antiques, as it was good luck in wizarding tradition to give a bride and groom something from the family.

wonderful custom.

the sibling stuff, and the way the 6 relationships in the two couples work.

can't wait to meet charlie's woman!

gorgeous as always, maple.

Q



Author's Response:

*bounces* I love how you notice the little 'picking' things. :D Ron knows Harry so very well. Heh - I always thought the 'talking mirror' was creepy, so I keep thinking of that.

Giving away used furniture, yeah, I had a whole 'thing' I was going to write about that, but decided it was not really important to the story, but it helped me in my head anyway.

Thank you!! *hugs*