Reviewer: quizzical Signed
Date: 06/02/2007
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
wow. just as impactful as the first time.
in fact - i'm sure there was a section in the middle - the introduction to the more graphic brutal sex/power play - that i'm sure i've not read before.
the passage of explanation of what goes on in the silences between them was quite stunning.
Q
Author's Response: Hiya, I can't believe you read it again! but thank you nonetheless. There really shouldn't be any new material in this story here and I have had a look and can't find anything that might have been added later at the point you mention. I'm not above correcting missed mistakes and typos but I don't think I'd add new bits to an already 'published' story. I'd love to claim credit for the silence-talking but, to be honest, at that point I was fed up of writing dialogue and needed things said that would take them ages to spit out if they had to use words - glad you think it worked though.
Thanks again.
CJ