Penname: Azyne [Contact] Real name: Mim
Member Since: 02/16/2009
Membership status: Member
Bio:
Harry Potter has infiltrated every aspect of my life. Kind of as a consequence, I am strictly (very strictly) canon. I enjoy plenty of R/H fluff, especially missing moments. :)
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Tangled Webs by Realmer06 Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Everyone knows Lavender Brown. Or at least, they think they do.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Vacant Rooms
Characters: Hermione Granger, Lavender Brown, Parvati Patil, Ron Weasley, Seamus Finnigan
Genres: Angst, Romance
Time Period: Post-War, Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, Het
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15145 Read Count: 1834
[Report This] Published: 02/05/2009 Updated: 02/05/2009
Reviewer: Azyne Signed
Date: 02/18/2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

What an intriguing idea. You wrote this so captivatingly, it doesn't even matter that I disagree (I just can't see Lavender being that selfless). But you wrote it very very realistically, and my heart just goes out to her for suffering through it all.

His kisses were completely unrecognizable from the ones I’d gotten in October. They occasionally took my breath away, and I wasn’t even attracted to the guy.

This was amaaazing, it made me squee :D

 Even when I chose you, I was really choosing her.

Again with the squeeing! It was fantastic! The emotions were so real.

When Lavender finds out that she's the last to know about Ron's poisoning though, I think that was the one moment you could have brought in even more emotion. When reading the canon I couldn't help but believe that she was truly and sincerely hurt, and in this fic, even if it was all an act, I also believed her when she said she'd come to care for Ron quite a bit. So I think she would have reacted in a way that showed she was in more pain, though you did touch on it.

Overall a truly excellent read, what a great interpretation.

I Wanna Know by deenas Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: In the last year, Harry's had to discover what it means to have the power of love on his side.

Lyrics are taken from Foreigner's song "I Wanna Know What Love Is." I heard the song on the radio and it spawned this huge plot bunny that I am pleased to present to you. There are also some quotes taken from Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows, UK version, pages 578, 579 and 580. Also, props go out to Forrest Gump, because you can never have too much Forrest Gump now can you?
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Albus Dumbledore, Andromeda Tonks, Arthur Weasley, Bill Weasley, Charlie Weasley, Dennis Creevey, Draco Malfoy, Dudley Dursley, Fred Weasley, George Weasley, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Kingsley Shacklebolt, Lavender Brown, Lucius Malfoy, Luna Lovegood, Minerva McGonagall, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Neville Longbottom, Percy Weasley, Ron Weasley, Rubeus Hagrid, Vernon Dursley
Genres: Angst, Drama, General
Time Period: Post-War, Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, Minor Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7854 Read Count: 1075
[Report This] Published: 02/18/2009 Updated: 02/18/2009
Reviewer: Azyne Signed
Date: 02/18/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was really well done! I think your strength definitely lies in capturing emotions, I felt a very clear sense of Harry's (and everyone's) moods changing over time.