Penname: Brissygirl [Contact] Real name: Sally
Member Since: 02/04/2009
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I'm 29, i live in Brisbane Australia, and i love reading Harry Potter fan fiction, especially discovering new stories from my favourite author's and new writers. 

So far I have written a couple of fic's myself and hope to write many more in the future. I am also a huge fan of Stephanie Meyer's Twilight series. I also enjoyed reading Darren Shan's Vampire Trilogy series as well.

Drop me a line on my Lj or friend me if you wish I am very approachable and love making new friends.


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Catch Me If You Can by missgranger2 Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 338]
Summary: It's four years since the defeat of Voldemort. Ron is now an Auror. Hermione is working for the Department of the Regulation and Control of Magical Creatures and gets a new intern by the name of Cormac McLaggen! Besides the new intern, Hermione and Ron as always have plenty to argue about!
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Cormac McLaggen, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley, Various
Genres: Angst, Comedy, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140844 Read Count: 99563
[Report This] Published: 03/08/2008 Updated: 09/27/2010
Reviewer: Brissygirl Signed
Date: 04/13/2009 Title: Chapter 10: Good Cop, Bad Cop

The antics Harry and Ron use to interrogate max are hilarious!!!

I read your little prequel too so Ron was right there is a snitch or a leak however you want to say it in the Auror Corps. I have a sneaking suspicion that Scabior is going to go after Hermione. I also think Cormac Mclaggan is going to be a key factor in what happens, to the case Ron and Harry are working on.



Author's Response:

Hello to the Wonderful and very Perceptive Brissygirl! *winks*

You are good! *laughs* I wish I could tell you more as I find you so adorable and charming dearest! I hope to try and finish up that missing moment soon for the two lovely readers I wrote it for. I absolutely HATE Cormac McLaggen! Look for me not to show him any mercy for he made me sick in the books! Thanks for leaving such a lovely review! I hope you'll like the rest of the story darling! *hugs*

*SMOOCHES*

missgranger2  

Reviewer: Brissygirl Signed
Date: 04/13/2009 Title: Chapter 12: Disappearances and Delights

you made me cry!!!

Poor Ron being called to an emergency at work and having Hermione break down on him as he's about to leave.

The tropical paradise sounds wonderful i wish i could make my bathroom look like that!!



Author's Response:

Oh My Darling Brissygirl!

You're making me cry! *sniffs* Hermione is so very fragile in this story that it breaks my heart at some of things I put her through. I really can't take credit for the tropical paradise as it was totally inspired by rosepddle's famous golden bathtub scene in "Four Days of Fantasies". IT'S BRILLIANT! *fans self* I do wish my Hermione replica wand would transform my bathroom as well... gosh but would my husband be over the moon! *laughs* You are such a delight! *hugs you tightly*

*SMOOCHES*

missgranger2

Reviewer: Brissygirl Signed
Date: 04/13/2009 Title: Chapter 13: “Muggle Medicine and Wizard Worries”

Ok I think one of these aurors that Harry and Ron have working with them on the case is going to be the one to betray them!! And I think it may just be Frank!!!!!!

As soon as Hermione took two of the pills i knew she was going to overdose, luckily they didn't do any real harm to her apart from rendering her unconcious!!!

I'm really enjoying reading this its keeping me on the edge of my seat!!!



Author's Response:

Hello My Charming Brissygirl!

Hmm... you are on the right track about the bad Auror.  I wish I could tell you more dearest! *pouts* Again, I put our poor girl through a terrible situation. *slaps self* I am so glad you like it so far!!! You have me grinning like a mad fool! *hugs*

*SMOOCHES*

missgranger2

Reviewer: Brissygirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/13/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Sense, Not Sensibility

Ok Cormac is starting to creep me out!! I can't believe he hugged Hermione and sent her flowers, I swear he is upto something and I'm wondering if Harry and Ron are watching the wrong Mclaggen!!!

Hermione's reaction to hearing they are investigating Scabior OMG I thought Ron was going to flatten Harry for opening his big mouth especially when Ron had told him that morning that Hermione wasn't doing well!!! And then she goes and blames herself(i can't remember what chapter it was but you know where i mean)

You have done a fantastic job as always the anticipation, the angst and the suspense no wonder you are one of my fav! authors!!

BTW when is chapter 14 due on live or die trying??? hopefully its soon I can't wait to read more!!!!



Author's Response:

Hello Lovely, Lovely Brissygirl!

Cormac is a creep.... trust me! (you'll find out more later) Harry really had no idea how badly Hermione's emotional state was. Look for her condition to make things more and more difficult between Ron and her. *sniffs* I have got to go through and edit chapter 14 of "Live"! (I wrote the first fifteen chapters awhile ago) I meant to do it last week but have been working like mad on a story for that Hermione Bangers thing on LJ. Just for you, I will do look over it tonight and send it off to my beta. *smiles* Thank you for your lovely comments! Your kindness truly means a lot to me! I hope you'll like the next chapter dearest! *hugs*

*SMOOCHES*

missgranger2  

Reviewer: Brissygirl Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04/30/2009 Title: Chapter 17: “Crooked Guards and Cranky Red Heads”

Turning her chair to face him, Hermione folded her eyes and tapped her foot

Ok question how can Hermione fold her eyes??? LOL

I really enjoyed this chapter I would love to get my hands on Both of the McLaggen men. I want to know what happened to Hermione was she having another panic attack or is it something else? It seemed like she was going to be sick only to collapse.

I think Ron and Harry are going to have their work cut out for them protecting their girls. I  also didn't miss the subtle hint that Ginny may be pregnant!!! Wonderful as always lovey!!



Author's Response:

Hello Gorgeous Brissygirl!

  Oops! I will have to go in and correct that and thanks for pointing it out dearest! *hugs* I hate the McLaggen men to pieces dear. You'll find out what happened with our girl in the next chapter and because I adore you I will tell you that you have great insight! *winks* I am so happy you liked the chapter. Thank you for your lovely comments as they mean so much to me darling!

XXX,

T

Reviewer: Brissygirl Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/02/2009 Title: Chapter 18: "Panic Attacks and Broken Dreams"

Eeep! Brain Explosion alert!

I'm trying to remember what the deal was with the flowers. But i think it had something to do with the person delivering them, not the actual flowers.

Poor Hermione, Ron is her whole world. She can't bare the fact that his job might take him away from her. I'm seriously thinking that she may need to be admitted, to St Mungo's for treatment.

Harry was right, if Ron doesn't have his mind on the job and is constantly distracted worrying about Hermione. Then they both run the risk of being killed by this maniac. Or any maniac for that matter.

I think if Hermione is going to be constantly watched like a hawke she is going to crack. And possibly get worse in the process thinking that that the people she loves don't trust her. But I can also see Harry and Ron's POV that someone needs to keep an eye on her in case she does go off the deep end doing something stupid.

I can totally see why Ron is so frustrated and angry. He loves her so much that he can't bare to see her suffer like she is. But at the same time she is pushing him away, with all her doubts and insecurities. Having her say that she wants to get involved in trying to track down Scabior I think was the last straw. Ron needs time to think, and hopefully when he talks to Hermione again she will be more rational and think more clearly



Author's Response:

Hello My Dear Brissygirl!

I loved the "Eee! Brain explosion alert!" *giggles* Our poor girl is so very mentally out of it right now. She does need help, bless her. As for our boy, you are absolutely right when you said he needed time to think. He loves her more than anything and would never abandon her. He got angry and said something he didn't mean in the heat of the moment because he is frustrated that he can't seem to help her. He also doesn't want her anywhere near Scabior, especially given the emotional state she is right now. I hope you like the next chapter dearest! Thank you for your lovely comments as they truly mean so much to me! *hugs*

*SMOOCHES*

XXX,

Reviewer: Brissygirl Signed
Date: 06/16/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Sense, Not Sensibility

I read this on my phone at work yesterday. In my defence it was lunchtime and no students came to see me, so i indulged.

I'm glad Hermione is getting help at last. I definately don't want her going back to see the muggle Dr. Especially with Cormac and co. knowing all about it and Cormac dating the Dr. There are not enough expletives to describe what I think about Cormac and I know you hate him too.

I'm glad Harry went to Ron and told him about Hermione, and her being suicidal. She has a long steep climb on the road to recovery, and judging by your responses to other comments you have lots more twists instore for us readers. I loved how attentive Ron was when Harry got him out of his alcohol induced stupor, when he was with Hermione you could definately see how much he needs her and loves her.

Please tell me that Hermione's mind healer isn't going to get within the grasp of Scabior! I also definately think that the Auror spy is someone who is helping Harry and Ron with the investigation.

I kinda feel a little bit sorry for the idiot who get himself killed for not being as observant as he should. But then again if you want to work for a maniac like Scabior what do you expect!



Author's Response:

Hello Darling!

Don't feel bad about reading something on your phone while at work.... I have been guilty of it myself! *laughs* I am sure a lot of people will be glad that I am finally trying get help for our girl. And as I commented before, you know how I can't allow the poor girl to be happy for long! *smirks* I do have something else in store for her, but all in good time. I am still going back and forth with the Muggle doctor visits. I am so happy to have a fellow Cormac hater! Hooray! Burn him at the stake!!!

Scabior is evil. He already has a plan in the works as we speak. More of that will be revealed in good time. There is a dirty Auror and I think readers may be surprised at who it turns out to be. And you are right, that idiot that got himself killed should never work for somebody as twisted as Scabior is. 

I hope you'll like the next chapter dear. Thanks for leaving me some love! *hugs* You make my day as always!!!

XXX,

T   

Reviewer: Brissygirl Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07/11/2009 Title: Chapter 20: “Good-bye Darkness, Hello Light”

You've done it again! Hermione was a right little minx in this chapter, but then who can blame her when your Fiancee comes home and wants to do all sorts of wicked things to you!

I'm  a bit iffy about the whole removing the bad memories thing to view them at a later point in her therapy, but I will see what happens when she sees the healer again. With more angst coming I suspect it will have something to do with her dealing with her memories. Or something is going to happen to Ron again and really send her over the edge.

Ok Harry and Ron are going to be disapointed when they realise that the guy McLaggen Snr met with is dead, due to his own stupidity but still they won't be happy. I still think someone working on their team is the snitch either that or its their boss! Somehow I think those snatcher files are going to come in handy, with the case. I also didn't miss the massive hint in one of the previous chapters about Hermione being a target as well. I think it was just before she collapsed at work. Because I was thinking OMG one of the dirty Auror's has done something to her.

I also have a sneaking suspicion that Hermione is going to find Ron's knives and stuff, and somehow that is going to tip her over the edge further. I don't know how yet, because you like to surprise us.

Hermione was happy during this chapter, which means more angst is on the way. And you said something about her going to see the muggle therapist again as well, which means that the asswipe who doesn't deserve to be mentioned is going to find out something else about her and pass it onto Scabior.

*huggles and smooches* S



Author's Response:

Hello My Lovely friend!

Yes, Hermione was a bit wild in this chapter. *winks* It is sort of a bittersweet moment, in that though she is happy for the moment without the memories, eventually she is going to have to deal with them. And of course I may have something else planned before that all happens(!)

I am still undecided about the Muggle psychiatrist. I actually took a part out about it in the last chapter. I don't know if I really need it as Cormac won't know anything right away.

I'm glad you caught how Ron still stowed away his knives. He's still worried about all the things that used to upset her. I think he is playing it safe for right now. Our boy is thrilled to have his passionate, naughty and genuinely happy Hermione back.

There is a bad Auror and that will all play out very soon. Scabior already has things set in motion, but look for something to throw a "temporary wrench" in his plans.

I thank you for your lovely comments, "S". I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter. I need to re-work it before sending it to my beta. I adore you like mad, dear! *hugs*

XXX,

T   

Reviewer: Brissygirl Signed
Date: 07/30/2009 Title: Chapter 21: “Bad Dates and Good Advice”

I was hoping she would go for his 'family jewels'!!!! He deserves it, evil slimy bastard that he is!! God Cormac makes my skin crawl

Ron's made a connection between Scabior and that idiot who got himself killed. I still have no idea who the dirty Auror is except that it has to be someone on the surveilance team. Either that or the Head Auror. I'm curious as to why Ron would think Harry wouldn't go for the idea of checking out the places owned by the Lincoln family.

One memory down heaps more to go. I'm glad to see that Fritz pushes Hermione just enough to get her to talk and understand the memory they are dealing with that session and not making her deal with a bunch of other things at the same time.

Even though the first session went well, I doubt it's going to be smooth sailing in future counselling sessions.



Author's Response:

Hello Darling!

   Trina really should have kicked him right in the groin, but don't worry as I'm not through with the sod yet. *laughs* Why Ron wasn't to keen on telling Harry yet about the Lincoln connection was that Harry believes that there are no more Snatchers. He thinks they disbanded after the war and so Ron wants to make sure he has proof.

As for our girl, it is literally baby steps in trying to get her well. Each step is tied into everything she is going through and helps her to get a bit stronger. She'll need that strength to deal with the most recent bad memories. (Bless her)

And I can't say who the bad guy is yet! *laughs* I hope you like the next chapter dear and thanks for your lovely comments! *hugs*

 

XXX,

T

Beginnings by missgranger2 Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary: This is when Hermione loses her virginity to Ron. "Missing moment" from the story "Live...or Die Trying". 
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3036 Read Count: 5150
[Report This] Published: 04/20/2008 Updated: 04/20/2008
Reviewer: Brissygirl Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04/26/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was reading your latest chapter of live or die trying and decided to have a sticky at your profile, I found this and i also friended you on LJ. now for my review

AAWWWW how sweet!!! Ron and Hermione always seem to get off on arguing with each other. But him trying to keep her calm and apologising for hurting her was so adorable.

The end when he makes a pillow for them and pulls his robes over them to keep them warm and then Hermione kissing his palm.....just magic



Author's Response:

Hello Lovely Brissygirl!

   How are you dearest? I will friend you back on LJ. *smiles*This is one of my earliest stories, so I'm glad you liked it. I wanted the readers to know that though they have both sort of lost their way, there was once love and tenderness there. It's truly sad how things turned out between them. Let's hope that our boy and girl find true love with one another again! *sighs* I thank you for your lovely comments dearest! *hugs*

*SMOOCHES*

missgranger2  

A Heart So Ravenous by Slashpervert Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary: Draco and Harry continue to recover from past ordeals as they work on building their lives together. Draco tries to find a way to please both his parents and his lover, but with dangerous consequences. Will their love survive what he has done? Sequel to A Love So Belated.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room, The Broomshed > The Dungeon
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, EWE, Graphic Violence, Hurt/Comfort, M-Preg, Masturbation, Rimming, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118226 Read Count: 55063
[Report This] Published: 04/22/2008 Updated: 05/04/2008
Reviewer: Brissygirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/01/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Dreadful

This was fantastic, i read both the stories one after the other it took me a couple of days. They were both fantastically written. I cried when Harry was reading Draco's letter after having the twins!!

I look forward to the next installment!!  Keep up the great job.



Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you enjoyed!

Vomica Domintor by AlwaysSS Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary: Hermione Granger and Severus Snape create a new potion together, and they discover some secrets about each other along the way.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Severus Snape
Genres: Romance
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Het
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66198 Read Count: 13002
[Report This] Published: 07/10/2008 Updated: 10/14/2008
Reviewer: Brissygirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/08/2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Wonderful fic!! I can't wait for the sequel, I would have thought that you would have ended it with Hermione and Severus brewing the first batch of the potion for St Mungo's, but that is just my opinion.

It felt like it was entirely too short I was so captivated by the storyline, and having a hearty laugh throughout as well that i didin't even realise that I had reached the end of the story.

Must have more!!! And am adding you to my fav's so i can be notified when you post the sequel!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it.

This story has developed into a major labour of love. As you probably noticed, it's not marked as complete. Since posting the last chapter, I've been doing a major re-vamp of the whole story. I was never completely satisfied with it and I probably never will be, but I've got to give it a shot. It's been a ridiculously long road, but I'm nearing the end and have more than tripled the size of the story so far.

When it's all polished up and I'm semi-satisfied with it, I'll be uploading the new content. Hopefully that won't be too much longer from now. I hope when I do that you return and re-read it. Then it will be on to the sequel!

Reviewer: Brissygirl Signed
Date: 04/09/2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

When Remus is talking to Hermione describing what it must be like for snape to be attracted to her it almost sounds like he is speaking of himself and not snape!! Very interesting......

(this is the 2nd time i have read this fic in 2 days)

Reviewer: Brissygirl Signed
Date: 04/10/2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Go Hermione, she definately knows what she wants and is determined to get it!!

Reviewer: Brissygirl Signed
Date: 04/10/2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Well well well who know the potions master was so good at giving pleasure!! ;)  And finally He and Hermione have got what they want, and a alot more to come.