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Catch Me If You Can by missgranger2 Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 338]
Summary: It's four years since the defeat of Voldemort. Ron is now an Auror. Hermione is working for the Department of the Regulation and Control of Magical Creatures and gets a new intern by the name of Cormac McLaggen! Besides the new intern, Hermione and Ron as always have plenty to argue about!
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Cormac McLaggen, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley, Various
Genres: Angst, Comedy, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140844 Read Count: 102936
[Report This] Published: 03/08/2008 Updated: 09/27/2010
Reviewer: amreader Signed
Date: 10/03/2010 Title: Chapter 35: "The Beauty That is Life"

Another GREAT story.  You always manage to meld together love, suspense, angst, and humor so well.  A true gift.  Speaking of humor... I could not stop laughing at who Charlie ended up with.  Great Name LOL!!!

I do hope, in time, you will write another one of your fabulous stories.  Until then, take it easy and as Fred said 'live life to its fullest' .  :o)

Author's Response:


  You made me smile and smile. I am completely overwhelmed! *wipes a tear* Thank you so much for all your kindness. It's people like yourself that makes it all worth it!!! *hugs* You truly have my year!!!! (>:


Tammy (>:

After the Flaw by KanedaX Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 105]
Summary: Past Featured StoryWizards fall in love. Wizards fall out of love. Some enter the world while others leave. Friendships are formed, minds are changed, and some discover that their family is larger than they ever imagined.

A lot can happen in nineteen years...
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Aberforth Dumbledore, Albus Severus Potter, Andromeda Tonks, Arthur Weasley, Bill Weasley, Charlie Weasley, Cho Chang, Dean Thomas, Dennis Creevey, Draco Malfoy, Dudley Dursley, Ernie Macmillan, Fenrir Greyback, Filius Flitwick, Firenze, Fleur Delacour, George Weasley, Ginny Weasley, Hannah Abbott, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Hestia Jones, Horace Slughorn, Hugo Weasley, James (younger) Potter, Justin Finch-Fletchley, Katie Bell, Kingsley Shacklebolt, Lavender Brown, Lily Potter, Lucius Malfoy, Luna Lovegood, Minerva McGonagall, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Neville Longbottom, Nymphadora Tonks, OFC, Padma Patil, Parvati Patil, Penelope Clearwater, Percy Weasley, Petunia Dursley, Pomona Sprout, Professor Sinistra, Professor Vector, Remus Lupin, Rita Skeeter, Ron Weasley, Rose Weasley, Rubeus Hagrid, Scorpius Malfoy, Seamus Finnigan, Sibyll Trelawney, Susan Bones, Various, Vernon Dursley, Viktor Krum, Xenophilius Lovegood
Genres: Action/Adventure, Comedy, Drama, Erotica, Fluff, General, Romance
Time Period: Next Generation, Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, Masturbation, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 237700 Read Count: 90833
[Report This] Published: 04/20/2008 Updated: 11/26/2011
Reviewer: amreader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/30/2011 Title: Chapter 43: After the Flaw: Finale

Loved it! LOVED IT!!!  You have a gift of writing and storytelling.  I hope you continue to write more HP stories (or any story) because you certainly have got some great talent.

Thank you for sharing your talent and this wonderful story with us!

Reviewer: amreader Signed
Date: 06/23/2009 Title: Chapter 31: Twelve and a Half Years Later: Boxing Day

I am thoroughly enjoying this story.  It is so well written.  Your characterizations!!!  I love em'.  Luna had me cracking up.  Ginny holding in all that stuff for so long.  Neville and his storyline,  even the Dursleys.  And all the other Weasley's.  I am curious to see what happens with little Teddy and 'little' Hermione.  Actually, I am curious to see what happens with everyone.  I will definitely be looking forward to more.  Keep up the great, entertaining work! 

A Magical Renaissance by BrandedFaithfully Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 276]
Summary: Hermione goes through an emotional and magical Renaissance in a race against time to save her life.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance, Tragedy
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 270837 Read Count: 134491
[Report This] Published: 06/14/2008 Updated: 12/27/2009
Reviewer: amreader Signed
Date: 03/18/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Confections of a Broken Heart

I am loving this story.  Great plot!  I cannot wait for more updates.  Keep up the great work!

Author's Response:

amreader - Thanks for leaving the review.  I put a lot of thought into the plot line, so glad you're finding it intriguing!

Reviewer: amreader Signed
Date: 03/28/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Confections of a Broken Heart

UGGHHH.  That Diane!!!  She does need a witchslap (love that term Napchic).  I know you're busy, but I hope you update soon.  This story is leaving me at the edge of my seat.  Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Dear amreader - Yes, I loved that visual (witchslap).  I'm off from work every other Friday and so that usually is the day that I have time to update, but I'll try to get it out a bit sooner if I can.  It's neat to know that you are all waiting excitedly for it!  Thanks again.

Reviewer: amreader Signed
Date: 04/10/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Confections of a Broken Heart

I just love your writing!  I am glad to see a bit of John in this chapter (although I totally hate the creep).  I hope he gets whats coming to him.  I am hoping Ron will finally tell Hermione how he truly feels about her too and just tell that awful Diane to go away... for good!    Thanks for the update!!!

Author's Response: Dear amreader, it's comments like yours that make me want to go back and re-edit my stories for the twentieth time.  It's so rewarding to hear someone say how much they love the writing.  It really means the world to me so thank you SO much.  I'll update again soon.  Can't wait to hear from you.

Reviewer: amreader Signed
Date: 04/24/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Confections of a Broken Heart

Yeah!!! An update!   I am so hooked on this story (it's kind of pathetic on my part.  I keep coming back looking to see if anything has been added.)

OOOHH! Another GREAT chapter!  We can see all the pieces coming together.  That John and his "cousin" are just AWFUL! I was so happy Ron gave John what he deserved.  I am glad Ron finally told Diane how he felt, but I have this nagging feeling that perhaps it is not the last we'll see of her?  Poor Hermione, she is just getting sicker and sicker.  I hope they can get her the help she needs to cure her soon and that RON will be the one to help her.

Thanks again for the update.  Your story is keeping me on the edge of my seat.  It is awesome!

Author's Response: Oh, you sneaky little reader!  You put a review for Chapter 13 under chapter 1 so I never saw this!  First of all, let me just say I've baited the hook and am pulling in the lines.  So, I hope to keep you hooked to the very end!!  It's a little tricky now that I'm deeply into this to keep all the pieces working together and all the readers out there are mighty intuitive!  So, you're all keeping me on my toes.  Thanks for the lovely review - amreader.  Take care.

Reviewer: amreader Signed
Date: 06/05/2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Revelations

OOOh!  This is just soooo good!  My stomach is just jumping all over the place reading this. I am glad they finally got Ron tested, but now he is infected.  I still hope there is some way he'll be able to help Hermione and somehow the virus won't hurt him or maybe they'll get a cure before he gets too ill.  Ugggh.  I'll be sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Ron has a lot to consider and not a lot of time left to do so.  Thanks!!

Reviewer: amreader Signed
Date: 06/25/2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - And So It Goes

Ugggh, what a cliff hanger!  Please don't make me wait another two weeks to find out who Ron called out to and what is going to happen to him!  And I just saw this is a 28 chapter story!  My poor nerves (in a good way).  Your story has become an addiction for me.  My kids keep asking me why I am on the computer so much (it's to see if you've updated) LOL.

As far as your worry over this chapter.... well, there was no need.  It was wonderfully written!  You did an excellent job. It seriously had my heart racing. I only wish Ron stuck around and maybe talked to Hermione a little more.  I cannot imagine how awkward it was for them though.  I so hope Ginny can help out Ron, Hermione is cured, and that horrible, awful, no good Arty (and John) get what is coming for them!

Okay, I've written way too much.  Thanks again for sharing your wonderful talent!  I am soooo looking forward to the rest of this story.

Author's Response: Dear amreader - Aww, that's so sweet that you noticed my little comment.  I actually wrote the "love scene" of this story a year ago.  It was so clear in my head that I had to get it down and then over the course of the last year, I wrote all of the stuff leading up to it and after it.  I've edited so many times, it's ridiculous!  Yeah, well, my kids ask me why I'm on the computer so much (but it's because I'm writing or reading reviews!)  My oldest is standing right next to me at the moment, waiting patiently for me to go with her to the movie rental store!  So, guess I better close.  Thanks, again!

Reviewer: amreader Signed
Date: 07/04/2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Side Effects

WOW!!!  I can barely breathe my heart is pounding so hard.  OMG!  That was a very 'exciting' chapter!  I am dying to know what happens next!!!  I am so not a patient person, but your story is lending itself to help me (demand from me) to learn how be more patient (although I so don't want to wait another two weeks to find out what happens).

Arty... what a scuzz bucket.  What's up with John?  Is he finally realizing what a horrible person he really is?  What is going to happen to Ron and Ginny... poor Ginny.  I hope Arty doesn't "get her".  I so hope Harry gets home before they apparate away.  And what about Hermione?  She was finally starting to get better.  If she is anywhere near Arty, he'll be using magic and that could totally ruin her nuclidite levels. 

Way to keep us on our toes (although these cliffhangers are going to be the death of me).  Great work!!!  

Author's Response: Dear amreader, Wow, I'm impressed.  You did a good job of summing up all the potential trouble our characters could have!  Yes, keeping you on your toes for now.  Keep practicing that patience because I don't know that I'll get another out for a couple weeks, but we'll see.  I have a brand new laptop now which works much faster.  So, it's possible.  Take it easy!

Reviewer: amreader Signed
Date: 07/19/2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Lust and Possession

Oh, another fantastic chapter.  So much going on!.  I have to say though...I have some red flags going off in my head about Williams.  I'm not sure why yet.  It might be nothing.

I am so curious what happened to Hermione.  That was just really weird.  I hope she'll be okay, also Ron and Ginny.  This was an action packed chapter.  I'll be looking forward to seeing what comes next!

Author's Response: Hmm, red flags about Williams?  I wonder why?  You'll have to let me know.  You'll learn about Hermione in the next chapter so hang tight, and thanks so much for writing to me!

Reviewer: amreader Signed
Date: 08/02/2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - For Better or For Worse

I was so happy to see an update for this story.  Another great chapter!  All these twists and turns makes for a fantastic read.  It's great. Sorry to hear/read about the death in your family.

Author's Response: Dear am, Thanks so much!  I like the twists and turns.  I like them from other authors and so I like to throw them back at you.  I think it makes for an interesting story.  Thank you for the kind comments.  Tomorrow will be a hard day.  Take care.

Reviewer: amreader Signed
Date: 08/15/2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Retribution

Thanks for the update!  I am so happy to finally see Ron and Hermione able to tell one another how they truly were feeling about one another.  Now I am hoping Ron will fight that virus and get well and Hermione gets her magic back.

Author's Response: Dear amreader, I'm smiling at your comments.  I feel like saying "I know something you don't know" with that annoying sing-songy voice.  I'd better button my lip for now.  Thanks for the review and I'll look forward to hearing from you after another few chapters and see what you think THEN!

Reviewer: amreader Signed
Date: 09/04/2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Demanding Attention

Yeah, an update.  Ugggh, poor Ron and Hermione.  I am so worried for the both of them.  John really is psychotic.  I hope the portkey works.  I'll be looking forward to your next chapter.  Thanks again for such a great story!!!

Author's Response: You are SO welcome!  I'm sorry it was a little late, but I promise to get another chapter out as soon as I can.  I'm one of those people who is far too busy for my own good.  I'll try to review the next one and get it out in the next week or so.  I'm really enjoying watching how this all plays out with everyone!  Thanks again so much for writing to me.

Reviewer: amreader Signed
Date: 09/24/2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Putting Things Right

Ummm.... WOW!!!!  You truly know how to write a fantastic story filled with a rollercoaster of emotions.  Goodness!

Now that I've caught my breath a bit (LOL) I am still so worried about Ron (although he seems to have accepted the consequences of what might happen to him).  I just want John sent to some mental facility and Carrow caught.  With both of them still out there, Hermione is still in a lot of danger.

Once again, keep up the great work!!!

Author's Response: I LOVE roller-coasters!  Maybe that's why I do well with these types of stories!  Never thought of that, actually.  You've got a good keen sense of plot, my dear.  Hang tight.  More to come soon and THANKS!!